Everything withers, everything fades when no one sees It, It eats up the days Nothing left to quench It, darkness fell so fast It awaits, aint gonna quit till it has killed the last
The hopes died, all was wasted the truth revealed, though never tasted As blood was spilled by those who loved none the trails of time knew It was not gone
It saw the sun set and the night fall a new dawn came, tried to save it all The ones who fought It fell and died as Its chaos left them terrified
A creature never seen before took down the world, took down its Core It grabbed the sun, It tore it down It howled and threw it to the ground
Things were twisted, lives were spent It had just started, so on It went
The rigid horrors, all the fears those few alive cried frightened tears It raged in silence, thrashing, breaking a new world order - something awaking?
From deep within an ancient cave a Dragon rose from its old grave The Dragon spread its wings in silence watching, thinking, planning vengeance
To find It, who destroyed the dawn who slaughtered lights and ate their spawn
Must be a year and a half old. I know it's bad. More to come...
My reason for not liking it is mainly the forced rhymes and that I read it in an odd rhythm - which everyone else can get around. :P But thank you very much^^
@skater: Thank you~ Nah, I'm not good at singing. I can, but I don't think it would sound good... Also, there's still my problem with the rhythm in that.
@Zlug: There is no cure. >:3 Unless you kill me. But I don't think you want to.
Next thing.
When the sky is falling down When it all comes back around When your mind is cracking up And you're begging it to stop
Where is the light you followed? When did it leave you behind? All the dreams dreamed was wasted You're trapped with the tortures of your mind
With pain searing through your heart Mind and body far apart
Darkness around you inside Nowhere to hide
Nowhere To Hide
That's actually written as a song. Presumably written April 2007. By me, I'm just bad at remembering dates...
i wish I could play something. i can only sing, so I have to relly on ever one else, to wrok around the lyrics, or work around there rythem. it gets hard but hey.
@Zlug: First, lulz at your 'miners'. Det betyder minearbejdere, lille ven. But I know you meant minors... They saw nothing. Only a pile of people. Nothing that could - ruin their young minds. Not anymore than we had done already. :P
@skater: I love to compose little songs~ Sadly I've never had any means of recording them. :/ But more ahoy~
One of my all time favorites of my own works, this... I just love it. The whole process of it (I've corrected it oh so many times), the feelings poured into it~ The melody I always read it with. If I could, I'd sing this for you... But well.
Walking through the darkness, blind, not trusting what I see The dark is all just in my mind, it's only there for me
Fumbling in a search for hope, a search for something real Thoughts they blind me, I can't cope with all the things I feel
All messed up, not listening, to what I should and should not do Silent tears fall glistening, I am not even sure for who
Wishing I could disappear without leaving you behind Left alone I see my fear, too real, too well defined
On an edge, a windowsill, I wish that I could fly So far down, it seems unreal, I wonder - should I try?
And the chorus I can't ever decide where to place or how many times: So I flee, away from reality, into my mind, where all I find, are things that shouldn't be there
Btw, if anyone hadn't guessed by now, my mind was pretty suicidal a few years back.
wow, you are very good at poems. i noticed you like to write them. I have made a line design forum, too bad i can't show you my line design now. Plz check it out some tiem though.
