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Roetergast
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Is liefde noodzakelijk?
Is het niet iets wat scheelt als het er niet is?
Of is het doorvoor al te belangrijk?
Worden we niet ongelukkig met liefde als gemis?
Voor mij blijft dat een onbeantwoorde vraag
Want hoe pijnlijk zij kan ook zijn
Omschrijf ik haar toch niet als een plaag
Het leven met liefde is toch fijn.

Sorry if you guy's can't understand it=) it's not worthy understanding anyway.=P

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Merciless_Mercenary
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Is love necessary? Is not it something differs is as it it not? Is or the doorvoor all too considerably? Do we not become unfortunately with love as lack? For me remains that an unanswered question For how painfully she also can be Describe I her really not as a plague The life with love is really
fine.

Sorry for the rough translation. I think its worth understanding though

Roetergast
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Haha thx for translating it!

Merciless_Mercenary
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Your welcome

Ogt2
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This was actually pretty good, but I'm not sure most people understand Dutch. I myself know a few words, but I don't speak it often
You should actually make more of those.

Roetergast
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Thank you! I might will, but it is a lot more complicated for me to rhyme in english, I'll try=)

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Is love necessary? Is not it something differs is as it it not? Is or the doorvoor all too considerably? Do we not become unfortunately with love as lack? For me remains that an unanswered question For how painfully she also can be Describe I her really not as a plague The life with love is really
fine.


Not bad. And thanks mercanary for the translation.
Lord_Mist
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good poem!

Roetergast
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thx!

kingryan
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Hmm...Apart from the fact that I cannot read Dutch...it looks pretty good.

Love is an incomparable thing...

Merciless_Mercenary
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@Rotergast
you should write more in Dutch and English. You have a spark that will soon ignite into a flame.

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I agree with mercenary on that one. . .you should try and sharpen up with your English rhyming. English may be looked down upon as a syntactical language, but we have some good poetry! You should also try the weekly poetry contest sometime.

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