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Posted Mar 17, '09 at 10:42pm 639 posts
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So yeah, I'll just post some of the stuff I have written or drawn for classes or fun. First, a sketch from today. (Saint Patty's Day for future reference) http://i415.photobucket.com/albums/pp231/necromancerlord/stpattysday.jpg?t=1237344027 A poem titled "setting sun" Cry,softly, And a joke essay for AP Lang. -how homework causes genocide. On Homework: Changes in the politics of education during the twentieth century I. The early modern homework system Just before the turn of the twentieth century students were provided a single task by schools: to remember. They were instructed to rote-memorize the facts, no more, no less. Tests demanded facts, analysis and insight was not needed, only recall. They were asked for definitions, dates, and cities but not understanding [1]. The mind served as a vessel, it was a means to contain. It functioned not on its own but instead as part of the body. The matter of importance in educational life was the child as a whole rather than their intellect alone. Edward Bok waged a war against homework on the grounds it caused a great number of maladies: stress, eye strain, acne, sleeplessness, violence, physical ailments, and spinal deformities [2]. He focused his ire on acts that injured the body, not the mind, decrying âthe national crimeâ of excessive âbrain work.â Such rhetoric even persuaded the state of California to pass a law banning homework. What was perceived as valuable wasnât the childâs education but the condition of their working body. The childrenâs identity as a machine converged with the machines they worked. Indeed, education came to a convergence with industrialized economy. III. The modern homework of servility The politics of homework, so rooted in the industrial process, underwent a re-stitching of their fabric as the underlying economic conditions changed. The era of industrial production changed to one of service [5]. Twenty three percent of the economy manufactures and forty one percent is service, the old system can not function. Instead the system focuses on creating a populace acclimated to the service economy. IV. Genocide Throughout these time periods the state has exercised its power to control classes and repress the âundesirable.â The system has gained much efficiency and enabled an imminent ability to wield the power of homework. It grants the ability to control the details of a studentâs life: passing, free-time, and ideas. When the state has the ability to determine what the lives of its citizens are it has the ability to determine if its citizens have lives. It can determine what is undesirable and it can determine to expunge that. Genocidal imperialism is given a foothold within the grounds of homework. Foucault said, âIf genocide is indeed the dream of modern powers, this is not because of a return of the ancient right to kill; it is because power is situated and exercised at the level of life, the species, the race, and the large-scale phenomena of the population.â [9] All of these can be seen in the current regime of homework, the ability to know and control the details of a students life, what is âdesirable,â and the interaction of the population with the world and economy. V. Solution The most immediate and effective solution is a complete dismantling of homework system. Without that institution the growth of destructive cycles may slowed. Others disagree and opt for making homework ânot count.â [12] Yet this will not solve problem, in fact, it may make it worse. It will veil the teacherâs power without it affecting grades; instead the teacher is even more of an unseen observer able to trace the âdeviantsâ who refuse to do the work. It makes those unwilling to work more apparent and therefore more able to be subjected by the system allowing the class oppression and removal of enemies. The only way to end this omnipresent possibility to is to erase its presence. 1. 8th Grade Final Exam, Salina, KS: 1895. â4.Define Verse, Stanza, and Paragraph.â â8. Name events connected with the following dates: 1607, 1620, 1800, 1849, [and] 1865.â â3. What are the following, and give examples of each: Trigraph, subvocals, diphthong, cognate letters, [and] linguals?â â5. Name and describe the following: Monrovia, Odessa, Denver, Manitoba, Hecla, Yukon, St. Helena, Juan Fermandez, Aspinwall and Orinoco.â and â5. Give some general directions that you think would be beneficial to preserve the human body in a state of health.â All of the questions asked to recall information or demonstrate a specific skill like marking diacritics on words rather than provide analysis or opinion. I'll post more in the future. Please comment and tell me what you think. |
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Posted Mar 17, '09 at 10:44pm 639 posts
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The image.
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Posted Mar 17, '09 at 10:55pm 3,253 posts
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Copy to notepad, rewrite all ' or '' punctuations. Also, rewrite ... if you use it. AG can't read these signs or some symbols. Like the symbols in French words. |
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Posted Mar 17, '09 at 11:21pm 639 posts
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Without evil symbols: On Homework: Changes in the politics of education during the twentieth century I. The early modern homework system Just before the turn of the twentieth century students were provided a single task by schools: to remember. They were instructed to rote-memorize the facts, no more, no less. Tests demanded facts, analysis and insight was not needed, only recall. They were asked for definitions, dates, and cities but not understanding [1]. The mind served as a vessel, it was a means to contain. It functioned not on its own but instead as part of the body. The matter of importance in educational life was the child as a whole rather than their intellect alone. Edward Bok waged a war against homework on the grounds it caused a great number of maladies: stress, eye strain, acne, sleeplessness, violence, physical ailments, and spinal deformities [2]. He focused his ire on acts that injured the body, not the mind, decrying "the national crime" of excessive "brain work." Such rhetoric even persuaded the state of California to pass a law banning homework. What was perceived as valuable wasn't the child's education but the condition of their working body. The children's identity as a machine converged with the machines they worked. Indeed, education came to a convergence with industrialized economy. III. The modern homework of servility The politics of homework, so rooted in the industrial process, underwent a re-stitching of their fabric as the underlying economic conditions changed. The era of industrial production changed to one of service [5]. Twenty three percent of the economy manufactures and forty one percent is service, the old system can not function. Instead the system focuses on creating a populace acclimated to the service economy. IV. Genocide Throughout these time periods the state has exercised its power to control classes and repress the 'undesirable.' The system has gained much efficiency and enabled an imminent ability to wield the power of homework. It grants the ability to control the details of a student's life: passing, free-time, and ideas. When the state has the ability to determine what the lives of its citizens are it has the ability to determine if its citizens have lives. It can determine what is undesirable and it can determine to expunge that. Genocidal imperialism is given a foothold within the grounds of homework. Foucault said, "If genocide is indeed the dream of modern powers, this is not because of a return of the ancient right to kill; it is because power is situated and exercised at the level of life, the species, the race, and the large-scale phenomena of the population." [9] All of these can be seen in the current regime of homework, the ability to know and control the details of a students life, what is 'desirable,' and the interaction of the population with the world and economy. V. Solution The most immediate and effective solution is a complete dismantling of homework system. Without that institution the growth of destructive cycles may slowed. Others disagree and opt for making homework "not count." [12] Yet this will not solve problem, in fact, it may make it worse. It will veil the teacher's power without it affecting grades; instead the teacher is even more of an unseen observer able to trace the 'deviants' who refuse to do the work. It makes those unwilling to work more apparent and therefore more able to be subjected by the system allowing the class oppression and removal of enemies. The only way to end this omnipresent possibility to is to erase its presence. 1. 8th Grade Final Exam, Salina, KS: 1895. "4.Define Verse, Stanza, and Paragraph." "8. Name events connected with the following dates: 1607, 1620, 1800, 1849, [and] 1865." "3. What are the following, and give examples of each: Trigraph, subvocals, diphthong, cognate letters, [and] linguals?" "5. Name and describe the following: Monrovia, Odessa, Denver, Manitoba, Hecla, Yukon, St. Helena, Juan Fermandez, Aspinwall and Orinoco." and "5. Give some general directions that you think would be beneficial to preserve the human body in a state of health." All of the questions asked to recall information or demonstrate a specific skill like marking diacritics on words rather than provide analysis or opinion. |
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Posted Mar 18, '09 at 12:08am 374 posts
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your opinion is astondingly similar to that of wikipedia.... |
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Posted Mar 18, '09 at 4:20pm 639 posts
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@yioup~ 1) I do display a clear opinion in the picture i.e. I dislike the tradition of pinching those who don't wear green. 2) The essay is actually being satirical of debaters who take perfectly good writings such as those of Michel Foucault, Nietzsche, Arendt, etc. and link the entire topic to genocide. Its annoying, stupid, and somewhat insulting to victims of genocide; I understand the ways that Foucault/ Arendt/ Agamben link things to genocide and discuss it in conjunction with other functions of a powerful state, but debaters make up bs to do so. However, without in-text references to debate, it is also just to be funny and random. 3) The poem was just exploring how to write in a different voice and mood. 4) You have included no internal logic to what you say making it nothing more than an opinion. 5) Wikipedia has a lot of opinionated articles. 6) I don't have a sixth thing to say... I kind of assumed you were joking as per 4. |
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Posted Mar 25, '09 at 8:57pm 639 posts
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Oh, and it would be nice if you commented on anything, its helpful to know what people like. |
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Posted Mar 26, '09 at 6:43am 3,227 posts
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I like the T-shirt it made me laugh, The balls above make me wonder, |
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Posted Mar 26, '09 at 6:45am 1,299 posts
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The T-Shirt thing made me laugh!
It was very very hilarious! And those poems are good man ever considered becoming a poet? |
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Posted Mar 26, '09 at 8:36pm 639 posts
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Thanks KR, I liked your poem, lol. Riou, thanks, but no, I don't want to be a poet, very few are wealthy. :P |
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Posted Mar 28, '09 at 3:04pm 639 posts
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