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Oh for goodness saakkeeeee~

Also, was my gift to Jess for her birthday.

Cause my phone's froze and I can't seem to reply to you or Ry-

And it would be so much easier for me to ignore you,

Anywho (XD) I liked it alot, but could you help me on meter? Its just having a close amount of sylabuls in each line right? When ever I google it, The links are filled with stuff poor Mav cant understand, and I'm NOT smarter than the average bear (I cant stress it enough)!

Erm Mav...it would be better to ask Alt, I'm totally usesless and helpless at meter.

Was It All Worth It?

When the mountain finally crushes,
When the fire finally burns with fury,
When the hurricane finally rushes,
When thy life is put on the jury.

I keep thinking is it all worth it?
Was it all it was meant to be,
The endless cycle of pain,
A blasphemous duel with God.

When the patience thins to a halt,
When the stress finally bursts forth,
When the wounds are rubbed with salt.
When thy blood finally stains the cloth.

I keep thinking is it all worth it?
Was it all it was meant to be,
The systematic breakdown of me,
A path that leads to no return.

When the structure finally gives way,
When the pressure proves too great,
When the mind no longer holds sway,
When thy words are filled only with hate.

I keep thinking is it all worth it?
Was it all it was meant to be,
The rise and ebb of a soul,
A mad dash for something thatâs running.

When the only constant feeling is pain,
When the hurt keeps coming back,
When the tears are naught but all in vain,
When thy heart is beginning to crack.

I keep thinking is it all worth it?
Was it all it was meant to be,
The thoughts that keeps repeating,
A punishment for daring to dream.

When the people start to slip away,
When all my hopes and dreams are dashed,
When the darkness shrouds my day
When thy system teetered and crashed.

I keep thinking is it all worth it?
Was it all it was meant to be,
The face-off that destroys and consumes
A desperate plea for deaf ears.

I keep thinking, was it all worth it?
It doesn't matter now at all,
For nothing can stop this monster
For nothing can help me now.

Sweet thread Nich!!

Hehe thanks again Sonny.

Just to clarify...I made a similar thread on Cracked.com. So if you guys see it, that guy IS me, don't go posting messages on his wall, telling him he's a copycat.

I see you there.

This thread has a new name now, doesn't it?

What's next?

I don't know. Thread title changes according to how I'm feeling.

Aww, Nicho, why didnt you go to the dark side? Did I mention that we have cookies?

Would you mind writing a poem that shows meter at its simplest form? Googling meter gives me a bunch of things I cant understand. I'm not smarter...

Oh whats the point...

I'm totally usesless and helpless at meter.

*puts up neon sign advertising my profile*

Totally Alt. My thread is the right place to advertise. Oh go on, I don't have the will to oppose.

I'm not in the dark side. I'm in a tiny island of light that is steadily being reduced when the dark side encroaches.

The dark thunders past,
Of broken rules and mistrust.
For war is now in my blood,
Shiver and drown in Flanders mud.

That last part totally reminded me of WWI.

Thinking of possibly writing something longer than a short story. Perhaps twenty pages, thirty, a novel? I'm not clear at this moment.

Just know, the story is partially inspired by my life, though of course the main character's life is much worse. But there are parallels.

Oh, and what's he's name?

Fabian. Like duh. Quite the obvious.

Where does he live?

Wherever the carnvial moves.

How old is he?

Like 15?

Does he like purple dinosaurs?

No.