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jorjor35
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Nomad

let me introduce you to The Ninja! (BTW everything here is made 100% by me)


http://www.freeimagehosting.net/image.php?6a7d2961e5.jpg

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jorjor35
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Nomad

oops here it is again (oh yeah i forgot not 100% because i stole the outline of the comic from another comic lol but then i changed it so it pretty much is mine )

http://www.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/6a7d2961e5.jpg

If it didnt work please tell me how to post an image.

tennisman24
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Farmer

That was good except way to short.

sunnyb
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Nomad

Very nice. Does the Ninja have any other adventures? Or are they in progress?

Naruto
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Naruto
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Nomad

That was cool i like ninjas they are awesome.

jorjor35
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jorjor35
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Nomad

ima make a lot not just one. but thanks

jorjor35
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Nomad

Gun
http://www.freeimagehosting.net/uploads/6245b46961.jpg

Check in again later for more!

Ricador
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Shepherd

Uh, no offense, but that really sucks. It is poorly draw, there is nothing in the background (AKA to simple) and the humor needs serious work.

Valiant effort though <.>

Wigginometry
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Nomad

The first one was pretty funny, the second one wasn't really. Yeah with a bit more artistic effort this could be a lot better.

kingryan
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kingryan
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Farmer

I did not notice the blue and white until I tilted my screen. Please change the colours and spend a little bit more effort on it.

There is potential...

nichodemus
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Grand Duke

There is potential...


Third time th charm? They were pretty cliche...and it'll be better if you could draw his face and expressions. Sure it's funny to watch a stickman ninja own himself, but after awhile it runs out of steam.
jorjor35
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Nomad

oops i didnt mean to put a link i meant to put a picture.

these are the first comics ive ever made but ill try to make it better. and i didnt use any colors.

Zega
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Peasant

I liked them! What was bad? The simpleness gives some attraction to it.

I'll be expecting some more. :] Good luck!

jorjor35
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jorjor35
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Nomad

thanks zega. you just gave me motivation to make more. lol

nichodemus
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Grand Duke

Yes more...but we will decide yes...if it gets better in terms of quality.

Wigginometry
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Nomad

thanks zega. you just gave me motivation to make more. lol


It couldn't hurt... much. Yeah keep 'em coming the criticism you get here can help you out if you take it the right way.
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