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Cenere
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http://i428.photobucket.com/albums/qq1/Cerene_Cerine/hinthintnudgewinknudge.jpg

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Gantic
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I don't mean to exclude anybody when I tell people I liked their story, and it certainly doesn't mean that I disliked entries that I haven't commented upon. However, people enquiring as to whether I have kind words for them put me in a difficult position because if I tell them what I really think about their piece I may be forced to reveal my hand in entirety and that wouldn't be so good for the tourney itself.


It was okay.

But anyway... I realize that we don't know much about how the actual buildings look, especially the important ones. (The Ampitheatre being the only one at the moment. There are sketches of buildings but it's hard to tell what's what.) So it's not important how the buildings look? Or rather, is the Ampitheatre a pit in the ground or something rising up like the Coliseum. I want to know if when one enters is he looking up or looking down? or are we waiting outside?
Cenere
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Wow... Fail....

Full size, then.
http://fc01.deviantart.com/fs47/f/2009/200/f/8/WoM_Cast_base_by_Caelann.jpg

Pixie214
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Looks cool, especially the wings and the chicken And I still love the t-shirt.

dudeguy45
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I love my shoelaces. And why don't you color yourself, Cen?

Cenere
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And why don't you color yourself, Cen?

Bad habit of either making sure everyone's got, or waiting with the best or, perhaps, simple self hate. We might never know.

Looks cool, especially the wings and the chicken And I still love the t-shirt.

And the writing is visible, even though it should be black... Black..........

I love my shoelaces

Well, hoped that was what you meant with "Vibrant".
crimsonblade55
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is the Amphitheatre a pit in the ground or something rising up like the Coliseum


Why not use an Amphitheater as reference(There is apparently two different ways to spell the word)

http://www.ratsound.com/tours/peppers/peppics/nimes1.jpg

They are a different form of Coliseum from what I know about them.

I f***in hate black.


hmm...you must have enjoyed drawing my character then...
Strop
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Uh, Jdogg. You need to check your email. In fact you need to check a lot of things, so I'll send you another email (from waomod@yahoo.com) to bring you up to speed.

And yes, Amphitheater is, in fact, an Amphitheater. For convenience, you may think of a Coliseum, except chopped in half.

Strop
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Oh crap, I just realised something:

a) I need to confirm with Cholo what colour George is. Unless that was specified and I missed it?
b) Slight change with Klaus- his muzzle is lighter (see armatar in reference sheet), but that's minor.

Sorry, should have gotten onto that much sooner!

More amphitheater stuff:

I want to know if when one enters is he looking up or looking down? or are we waiting outside?


It's a building risen from the ground, in your entries you may enter it through the grand archway... I'll have to draw up plans for you guys I guess. Shouldn't take too long!
Strop
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And one last thing:

And the writing is visible, even though it should be black... Black..........


Yes- I was wondering whether we should just get rid of the writing or make the writing white or something. What say you, Pixie? I mean I like making jokes (at user's expense) when drafting stuff up, so it doesn't have to stay or anything...
the_manta
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Hey, Manta looks really good Cenere. I love the finished version of all of them.

Wait. And. See.


Sorry... I didn't see you say that... I won't bother you anymore. <_>
Flippin3500
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Hey Manta, guess what? Strop's gonna let Flippo de Hippo in the story, as a cameo! lol, this is going to be so much fun.

the_manta
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I saw! This'll be awesome! *Girlish squee*

And something horrible's going to happen to mine! *Girlish squee trailing off into an effortless groan*

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I highly doubt a one day temp ban would disqualify me, and this submission was already approved - so here it is.

Lost in thought, a mug of tea in his hand, Chill looked out over Armorcity from the bay window of his study. It was a sunny day, as usual - sparse clouds hung in the sky, above the usual hustle and bustle of the city, the only thing breaking the horizon Strop's tower. But. . .there was something wrong. It appeared to be snowing, but the sun was shining and the clouds weren't the type to drop precipitation - making it stranger still. He finished his tea, grabbing his hoodie from the hanger on the wall it clung to. He was going to do some investigating. Slipping down the stairs, he pushed through the door of his mansion deep within the Aristocrat Way out into the crime-ridden Top 100.

People pushed through the Aristocrat Way in a seething crowd, moving almost as if it were a hive mind. Cries of 'lol u have tons of ap' coming from the top 10 area pervaded the air as Chill pulled the hood over his head so as to be unrecognized. He felt sorry for the top 10 users - such bombardments of pointlessness. With this thought on his mind, he continued.

Exiting the Aristocrat Way, he took the eastern path to the Atrium. He walked down by the Cathedral, passing the mass or worshipers. He slipped through the Armor Bank, stopping to check his Ap levels.

"Hello, Chill! You're over 10,000 now," the bank teller said to him.
". . .good for me."

The teller opened his mouth to respond, but Chill kept walking.

His mind dwelled on the moment. Should I have stayed? No, it doesn't matter. . . .

The atrium and plaza stretched out before him. There were people playing video games, people slinging. . .mud, flaming being passed around, and heated debate going on. Just how he liked it. Equilibrium found in noise. . . .

He took a seat and relaxed in the Atrium. People were passing by in higher frequency than usual - among the regular users, he saw a phoenix darting through the air and the crowd. The bird looked as though she was heading towards the Ampitheatre - Chill wasn't sure why, but the general flow of the crowd seemed to gravitate in that direction. He got up, remembering why he went on this escapade in the first place - to see why it appeared to be snowing. He got up, a migraine brewing in his head, to go home.

He made a quick stop in the Imaginarium. Entering his own thread, he went ito the vault, coming out with framed fractals and a few books. Putting the books on the shelf to his left, and the fractal pictures on the wall, he left a note saying 'leave replies here, I'll get to them later :/' as he disappeared back into the Armorcity proper.

Arriving back at his home, he opened the window that made up most of his living room wall, with a nice view of the regular profile pages stretching out before him. He sat down, letting the breeze in. Then, he unintentionally found out what was falling from the sky.

A flyer hit him square in the face, obscuring his vision. He peeled it off, and it appeared to be some sort of recruitment poster.

"Hmmmm. . .a new moderator? August 6th? The Ampitheatre?" he mumbled as he examined the piece of paper.

Suppressing his migraine, he took the flyer, folded it up and stuck it in his pocket. The walk to the ampitheatre would take a while. . . .

Taking a bottle of pomegranate soda to drink on the way and some money, he departed.

Turning onto the Index Road, he weaved his way through the crowd. Bumping into ghosts, spammers, flamers and benign users, his hood over his head, he reached the construction zone, which he navigated through. He took his hood off to widen his field of vision - there were bugs, glitches, and unfinished graphics strewn throughout the place nonchalantly, the occasional ratespammer lurking in the shadows. The developers were working, but weren't present in the usual sense - games could be seen popping into existence and being modified, but the workers were more transparent then a 0 Ap ghost account locked in a clear glass box.

Careful not to pass through any of the phantasms, Chill continued. Traipsing through the network of alleys, he eventually came out into the courtyard outside the ampitheatre - Zoph was yelling announcements out of the something-awesometastic-blahblah1337-ItotallyforgotwhatthismegafoneiscalledsoI'mmakingitupasIgo-megafone [FORGIVE MEEEEEEE!!!!!] and there really weren't many people at the signup. huh, I'm actually early for something. . . .

Picking up a pen, Chill blessed (cursed?) the signup sheet with his scrawly excuse for handwriting in the shape of his name, hoping the tourney wasn't some lame joke like when Strop cross-dressed at Halloween. If something that happened a few months before I came here can have such a lasting impact, McNeely only knows what the hell's gonna happen if this is a gag.

Flippin3500
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Ugh, I feel stupid.

Major change with my character's name.

Flippo le Hippo.

'le', not 'de'.

the_manta
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Oh yeah. Flippo De Hippo translates into "Flippo of Hippo." I'm surprised I didn't notice that. I have the highest grade in my French class =\\

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Um... um... I got nothing, actually. O O

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