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Inspired by jezz.


You can't beat water. Not with fire. Land will only adsorb it, only to make devastating landslides. Ice only will make water tougher. The Kingdoms try and move it with their tin cans, only making a problem somewhere else. This is why, when i was on the brink of death, i chose water to empower me. Now, loneliness scares me more than death. Without Water, i would be another farmer, soon to be engulfed in floods. The castle can't protect themselves from my immense power, and what many brave knights don't understand, is that, I am immortal. Arrows go strait through me. Sword are useless. Even if they attack me while sleeping in my coastal hut, they can not kill me.

They do not understand why I am ruthless, why I constantly drown out the kingdom. It is because the King betrayed me. I had done him a job, working in his castle, and he treated me like a slave. Denied me ever working for him. So now I must kill him. So no one ever gets shunned like that again.

But I do not only plan my vengeance, with my powers comes forever caring for sea life. I am constantly asked to get a crab out of a fisherman's net or escort baby turtles into the waters.

But one day, i hear a rustling in the trees and out appear 5 heavily armored knights. Each with vibrant flags and horses, they yell "We have come under decree of King Andrew the IV, and are here to kill you." As they approach, I lift my hand up, and with it comes the whole sea behind me. "You prepared to come here with armor, you thought it would protect you, but with one million pounds of water on you, it will only kill you quicker. Back off now, I do not want to kill you. It is the king that i would like to release every shark and lobster on." They looked at each other, and one dressed in royal blue said "We accept you terms." And they whipped their horses and trotted away. I put the body of water down, and sat down. This happens every week or so, and I have become a master in the art of intimidation.

I am also well acquaintance with the sky, and receive messages of the kingdoms doings every so often. On day a dove comes to me and says "The kingdom's army is on its way here with 3 catapults and about 100 soldiers, heavily armed!" I thank the bird, a lay down. About 30 minutes later, I here something of a stampede of animals and see a giant projectile on fire land about 60 yard from me. As i saunter closer into the woods, I see giant catapults firing towards me and 100 knights galloping towards me. I douse the ground with thousands of gallons of water so it is much like shallow quicksand. I fall back, and watch all the steeds get knee-deep in mud. The knight get off their horses, but are stuck too. Now for the catapults. Much of the forest around me is in flames, and more fire balls are coming. I quickly get about 100 square feet of water and throw it toward the catapults. The sheer force breaks them like saplings. The knight have taken off their armor now and are retreating. As for the horses, I will tend to them now. I put out the forrest fire, and take out all the water from the drenched ground. I set them free, and lay down on the beach once again. There is steam everywhere. Like I said, you can't beat water.

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jezz
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I have become a master in the art of intimidation.
I love that line xD

Well.. the story is pretty epic. I like it. I can spot quite a few spelling and grammatical errors, but all in all, its very good.
It is your first story, right?
For a first story, it's done well.
I'm glad I inspired you and i'm glad you took my advice to post it!
dudeguy45
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First story, yup. Yea, i had fun with it.

Pois0nArr0w
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Interesting story. Some gramactical errors, sentence structure malfunctions and such, but otherwise not bad.

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what sentence structure malfunctions?

Pois0nArr0w
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It just seemed a bit odd the way you put some of the paragraphs together. I assumed something was wrong with it, but then again. assumptions can be dangerous.

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Agreed. Next part of water-lord story coming.

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what is the point of this thread. its like your place for APs

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It's a thread he uses to post any art/writing stuff he might have made. Not for AP gain. If that were the purpose, then this thread would be a lock-target/spamfest.

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I did like it. seems threads like this are getting more and more popular. therefore, and call me a copycat if you must, I am making my own soon.

oof... need to stay on topic... just a few grammatical errors, but they didn't take away too much from the overall effect. generally good story, dude.

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I felt great do this the first time.

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http://api.photoshop.com/home_07252c3daae341a8af3c49dd483afee3/adobe-px-assets/8d8c92dfd8d84b30b291af255a3b2642

Some very VERY crude concept art.

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Lol, awesome concept art? >_< I like the story. I'm able to ignore any grammar errors and just enjoy the story. I hope to see more soon. And I'll try and continue my story, too. :-)

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DUDEGUY'S Anti-drug short poem.

Death.
It's what comes of meth.
Even if you quit next May,
You'll soon be thrown in the clay.

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My WoM character!

<img src="http://api.photoshop.com/home_07252c3daae341a8af3c49dd483afee3/adobe-px-assets/e43ad67fbe4848fda4aacf714c551a07" width="511" height="634"/>


IDENTITY:
Name: Dudeguy. reason behind this still unclear to even him..... born as Alex.
Age: Tween.
Gender: Male. Really.
Species/Race: Human, but sometimes that is questionable.

PHYSICAL ATTRIBUTES:
No super-human ability, but is very stealthy and acrobatic (from years of gymnastics.)

Height: four foot ten. 4'10".
Weight: 80-85 pounds, depending on how many helpings of dinner.
Features:

* Dirty blond hair in summer months, brown in winter
* Tan
* Small feet for his age
* Forest Green eyes
* Blond body hair

PERSONAL EFFECTS:

Clothing: often seen with an Ace of Spade sweatshirt, with black Bermuda shorts. Dudeguy is not afraid to take off his shirt if he is over heating. For athletic wear: orange shorts with a white shirt. Dark-colored shoes with vibrant laces.

Accessories:

* Always has a pocket cylindrical flashlight with him.
* Has some sort of coupons or crumpled-up money in his pocket.
* Has a small dagger in his pocket in case of self-defense in the land of Armor Games.

TRAITS:

Personality: Can be laid back and non-caring at some times, but most of times energetic and kind if treated the same way. Friends think him to be funny. Does not fight unless really needs to. Can bring up things that are really neither here nor there. Extremely smart for a blond, and can think logically.

Likes: Food. A good laugh, fun games (actual physical), recent events (gossip or not), the part after a 5k, has a soft spot for animals, and dudguy likes feeling smart.

Dislikes: People who try to be someone they are not, people who can't except one another, and people who's driving ignorance gets in the way of your driving. Dudeguy does not like country even though he is from North Carolina. Also, he does not like being rushed.

Note:

* Dudeguy is a carnivore, and nobody can ever make him change.

BACKROUND:

Occupation: trying to make the world just a little more funnier.
Hobbies: 4-H (A.K.A. cleaning up after animals.) Plays clarinet, taking a go a drawing. Gymnastics, long-distance runner, chicken and explosives expert.
Housing: Somewhere close to the AG castle, and he yearns to be in it one day.
Backround: Dudeguy came to the land of Armor Games as an unknowing farmer, and he did not even know of the community for a long while. But AG has taught him how to be profound, and has lead him on many exicting endeavors, like this one.
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Don't laugh at him....

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Your guy looks ugly.

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