ForumsArt, Music, and WritingTanka Contest Theme: Miracles Pg 19. Due: 29th

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MoonFairy
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As most of us know, the last Tanka Contest died. This is the new Tanka Contest! Ta-daaaaa!

Tanka consists of five units (often treated as separate lines when Romanized or translated) usually with the following mora pattern:
5-7-5-7-7.
The 5-7-5 is called the kami-no-ku ("upper phrase&quot, and the 7-7 is called the shimo-no-ku ("lower phrase&quot. Tanka is a much older form of Japanese poetry than haiku.

Rules
1) Must be original. NO PLAGARIZING ALLOWED!
2) Has to fit the Theme.
3) Submition deadline will be inforced.
4) Only one submission per user
5) The winner cannot win twice in a row.
6) The Tanka MUST be created for this contest.

Easy enough? And If you are questioning Rule #5, it is because some people may be Beastly at any type of poetry and have really good submissions every week, and I am sure that you would want to win too right? See? Fairness makes the world go round. (not really) And if you are questioning Rule #6, it is on here because if you made something beforehand, that is giving you a better chance at winning, and it isn't fair to the other participants *if any)
The Frist Theme is......
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Music! Deadline is the May 29th, 2010 Judging will be Either the 30th or 31st.

Also, Me and Thepossum will be the judges. I am the first judge, Next week will be possums. Good Luck to all!

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thepossum
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Once in a while on your nose


Eight syllables, therefore not a Tanka.


Sorry.
Nater
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Eight syllables, therefore not a Tanka.
Sorry.



Ok i'll change it.

Fire comes and goes
The ice far away from here
Burning it's path way
It is burned into my soul
The heat contained forever
TYCClub
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Cool this is coming back.
One question:
Did you get mods permisson to have a merit prize?

FallenSky
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Snack, crackle and pop
Are sounds fires may produce
But it is also
The names of three little twerp
Rice krispies are pretty bad

I like winning since I can permit myself such nonsense^^.
I'm pondering about entering this one, but I'll probably make something more serious.

MoonFairy
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Well, truthfully, I forgot to even ask. But if this gains some popularity and that, then after this theme, then I think thay might award a merit
But I don't want to annoy a moderator with some new thread asking for a merit. I will as soon as this theme is over alright?

MoonFairy
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And rice krispies are amazing! > >

samy
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Oh just go annoy a moderator it's their job to be annoyed be us normal user folk.

You might want to have them get rid of "non-dead" out of the title as well because I doubt the other thread gets necroed.

I actually have an idea for this theme I'm excited >=]

MoonFairy
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psh. I like the non-dead-ness.

samy
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Well being non-dead is a pretty good thing I suppose.

You win this round fairy, but I'll be back, with a butterfly net.

MoonFairy
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O...m....g..... I laughed so friggin hard when I read that. XD
And you would need more than a butterfly net to catch me bud. maybe an all you can eat buffet! then the butterfly net. XD

samy
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*Sets up buffet*

Fairy?

*Stand ready with said butterfly net*

'Twas Prometheus
Who gave the gift of fire
And made man from beast
It continues to burn today
As both wisdom and power

Always have trouble with the last two lines and with my meter; hrm.

samy
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'Twas Prometheus
Who gave the gift of fire
And made man from beast
It continues to burn today
As man's wisdom and power

^^^Revised.

MoonFairy
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What is in your buffet excatly? :P

Your second to last line has 8 syllables man... hinthintnudgenudgewinkwink

thepossum
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It continues to burn today


MoonFairy is correct. That has 8 syllables, therefore it is not a Tanka. Re-entry?
samy
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'Twas Prometheus
Who gave the gift of fire
And made man from beast
Through the ages it still burns
As man's wisdom and power

There :P

And fairy everything in the world that has even been consumed and isn't mayo. Mayo is nasty.

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