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Posted May 18, '12 at 8:39pm

jezz

jezz

1,447 posts

I like this thread. This is a lovely thread..

How about,

I can't make up my mind

 

Posted May 18, '12 at 9:06pm

murasaki9

murasaki9

1,342 posts

I can't make up my mind
but this is a great find
is it very valuable
is my knowledge infallible

Or am I losing my wits!!?

 

Posted May 20, '12 at 1:19pm

kevin8ye

kevin8ye

514 posts

Or am I losing my wits?
Well i dont know,
You tell me.
Am I losing my wits or not????

_________________________________________________________________

BONK!!!!!!!!

 

Posted May 20, '12 at 3:13pm

lC4l

lC4l

47 posts

Bonk!!! Crash!! Crack!!
I think I've broken my back!
An ambulance wails
My face goes all pale
I'll never go rock climbing again.

... |: |...

The door slams shut.

 

Posted May 22, '12 at 4:58pm

numino

numino

217 posts

The door slams shut
Leaving me behind
They all stare at me with their blank faces
Me in my strait jacket
Screaming in agony
They took my opioids away!

-------------------------------------------------------------

This journey

 

Posted May 23, '12 at 6:25pm

kevin8ye

kevin8ye

514 posts

This journey
is a journey like no other,
there are no
monsters
dragons
or knights in shining armor,
but this journey,
is a journey like no other

 

Posted Jun 2, '12 at 3:10pm

aknerd

aknerd

1,275 posts

A forgotten line
an empty space
A beginning that never began:
Without being told what to do
We just freeze our eyes and watch
As the world tears itself apart
I never thought it could die so slowly.

Next line:
Cheer Up Buttercup, its Friday!

 

Posted Jun 2, '12 at 4:14pm

Faunbard

Faunbard

464 posts

Cheer Up Buttercup, its Friday!
I fear your condition is severe
But the weekend is near!
So lets forget that ache in your ear!

The doctor said 'take green tea with thyme.'
But your father says 'Have some playtime!'

Next line----
What Rhymes With Love?

 

Posted Jun 5, '12 at 9:44pm

Chris707

Chris707

65 posts

Here's a poem i made when a little girl in my neighborhood died in a fire.

Dark girl so filled with strife
Dark Dark girl she'll take your life
Dark girl stay for a while
Dark Dark girl she makes me smile
Dark girl she shows no fear
Dark Dark girl is always near
Dark girl wont see her cry
Dark Dark girl just wants to die

But Dark girl lives in the dark
so you dont see her painfull mark

Dark Dark girl may never know
just how much the light can show.

 

Posted Jun 6, '12 at 11:46am

light_chaser

light_chaser

659 posts

What rhymes with love?
I think buv.
What is buv?
It rhymes with love.

the trollface cometh

 
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