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Posted Jun 1, '11 at 2:39am

MageGrayWolf

MageGrayWolf

9,673 posts

Knight

I have a bunch of half baked ideas for stories that need fleshing out. Moon and others have suggested i create a thread here to work some of it out so here is will I will be placing them.

Some of the ideas I have floating around I plan to work on are...
A futuristic world. I will be using some of the things that have come up in the 'General Science Discussion' thread in the Tavern and I have a number of ideas for aliens as well.

A story for a sort of Land of thee Lost style island outside of time using plants and animals from the past present and future to create a working ecosystem.

A Ghostbusters fanfic set in modern time using my own characters. (I might do a forum rpg if there is interest.)

A story for a zombie apocalypse.

And what ever else I might think to do.

I just have bits and pieces for each of these ideas right now.

 

Posted Jun 1, '11 at 2:45am

FallenSky

FallenSky

1,716 posts

Well, I shall be waiting for these ideas to come out. Funny coincidence though since I made a thread for a scenario just a few hours ago.

 

Posted Jun 1, '11 at 10:07pm

MageGrayWolf

MageGrayWolf

9,673 posts

Knight

Ghostbusters

Moans and screaming could be heard down one of New York's side allies. Suddenly passing through a closed door from one of the buildings leaving a thick coating of slime behind, was a blue ghost with gnarled yellow teeth and huge vacant eyes. It's four fingered hands with long nails yellowed and gnarled as it's teeth scratched at the air as it screamed.
The blue ghost streaked down the ally. Appearing in front of it from around the corner, was a robot that looked like a modified bomb disposal robot with a neutrona wand mounted to it. The robot rolled into place and fire trapping the Ghost in the proton stream.
Moments later the door the ghost had previously passed through burst open and out stepped a man wearing a proton pack with blue slime coating his left shoulder. "Hold it him there #1!" the man yelled to the robot as an identical robot rolled up from the other end of the ally. "#2 ready the trap!" He yelled as he placed his own capture beam on the ghost. The second robot moved into position as a trap attached to a hydraulic powered arm extended out from underneath it. "steady..." the man said to himself as he and the first robot better positioned the ghost over the trap.
"TRAP OPEN!" The man yelled and a blinding bright light emanated from the trap. The capture streams were shut off and the ghost was pulled into the trap. Several multicolored lights on the trap momentarily flashed, finally settling on a single blinking red light indicating it contained a ghost.
"Wrap it up." the man said as the second robot retracted the trap back under it's chassis. The two robots then turned and rolled back to the van they came out of as the man took some final scans and collected samples of the slime from his shoulder and door.

Back at the firehouse.
The van rolled in and the man got out. "Any more calls today Joy?" he asked the middle aged slightly overweight lady at the receptionist desk. "Jack, you know it's against protocol for you to be going out in the field with out a team." the lady said giving him a stern look. "I have a team." Jack replied pointing to the two robots just behind him on either side.
"THEY DON'T COUNT! HQ has been waiting over a year for you to pick a new team. Since you haven't they are assigning you one." Joy rounded at him as she handed him his new teams files. Jack quickly looked over the files. "Rookies?!... You've got to be joking?... Have they even completed the basic training program?" he asked while look from the files to Joy and back. "No they haven't. Venkman has some half baked reality tv idea to promote the franchise. It will be like a day care!" she said smiling at the increasingly agitated ghostbuster. "Great... If anyone wants me, tell them I've went to go get drunk." Jack said as her turned to leave again.

 

Posted Jun 2, '11 at 2:30pm

MageGrayWolf

MageGrayWolf

9,673 posts

Knight

Being that I'm a Star Trek fan as well I came up with my own design for a tricorder.
http://i5.photobucket.com/albums/y163/MageGrayWolf/tr640tricorderxii2.jpg

 

Posted Jun 6, '11 at 3:42pm

Sonatavarius

Sonatavarius

1,344 posts

will you be sketching out any of the scenes for dramatic effect? or just text and word play? ( i c ur tricoder...)

 

Posted Jun 6, '11 at 4:02pm

MageGrayWolf

MageGrayWolf

9,673 posts

Knight

I might drawing some of the equipment and ghosts for the Ghostbusters story. Maybe some of the futuristic technology as well.

 

Posted Jun 6, '11 at 7:18pm

wolf1991

wolf1991

3,061 posts

*confused*

You're in AMW... Has the world ended? Have the Flamingoes finally won? You'll have to excuse my shock, I don't think I've seen you here before. And I am ALWAYS here. Trippy...

 

Posted Jun 6, '11 at 8:25pm

MageGrayWolf

MageGrayWolf

9,673 posts

Knight

I've been toying with the idea for a while. MoonFairy finally convened me to make a thread for all my half baked ideas.

 

Posted Jun 9, '11 at 12:44am

MageGrayWolf

MageGrayWolf

9,673 posts

Knight

Could use some feedback on this.
This is the recognized Class system for Ghostbusters.
http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb2 … system.png

But I was never that happy with it. Especially the relationship between class 3 and 4 ghosts being rather subjective. Further more the class system used in the animated series used a system up to ten, in a later animated series expanded on it to at least 13 classes. But the animated series wasn't very clear what made a ghost a particular class other then something to do with it's power. A non canon novel released on the first movie had it's own class system. The recent Video game seemed to have it's own class system as well.

I though a merger of these would be in order for my stories, but I have two versions and I'm not sure which would be better to use.

Class 1: Non sentient manifestations with undeveloped forms. Harmless with limited interaction with their environment. In most cases these manifestations can only appear as harmless lights, sounds or indistinct mists.

Class 2: vague, incomplete, and inconsistent forms, e.g. vague disembodied body parts. Non sentient and may be capable of limited manipulation of objects.

Class 3: Distinct but often inconsistent forms, e.g. shadowy figures. May or may not be sentient, most often not. May be capable of limited manipulation of objects, mostly harmless.

Class 4: Distinct sentient form of a diseased human or diseased extraterrestrial with an equivalent to human intellect . Often possessing a distinct personality. Capable of manipulating objects as if it were still physical. Can be harmful if desires and it may be possible to communicate with these entities.

Class 5: Ectoplasmic, often vaguely humanoid manifestations. These are entities that were never alive to begin with. They are just as capable of physical interaction as Class 4 ghosts. A Class 5 can be a ghostly entity from another dimension that entered our world through interdimensional portals or simply "born" out of ecto-energy into whatever form they wear now, through side effects from ritual summoning or byproducts from emotionally-charged events.

Class 6: These are distinct forms of diseased animals. The possess the same abilities to interact with the physical world as they did when they were alive. May possess distinct personalities reflecting their former species.

Class 7: Entities possessing extraordinary "super" powers for a ghost. While powerful, they do not exceed the limits of physical possibilities.

Class 8: Exceptionally powerful like Class 7 entities but also possesses the ability to control or even create other entities at will.

Class 9: Demigods, extremely powerful entities whose power approaches that of a god. They may possess or exceed the abilities observed in Class 7 or 8 entities. Able to alter reality if even on a limited basis or preform actions beyond what should be physically possible.

Class 10: Gods, a supreme being in reference to a particular attribute. Able to alter reality to their will.

Notes: Class 1-3 may be weaker forms of Class 4-6 ghosts. Class 7 and up may be strong forms of Class 4-6.

The other version is similar to the above but combines Class 4 and 6 into one classification and moves Class 7 abilities to Class 6. Class 7 is like Class 6, but are capable of firing blasts of ecto energy.

 

Posted Jun 9, '11 at 2:06am

MoonFairy

MoonFairy

3,221 posts

Your class system is basically well organized. Although I don't understand this part:

Class 7: Entities possessing extraordinary "super" powers for a ghost. While powerful, they do not exceed the limits of physical possibilities.

Normally when you say a ghost, it doesn't have PHYSICAL possibilities.

What exactly can a ghost do?

 
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