great story. it needs a title, but thats just my opinion. please continue it in the future! by the way, i have begun to post my own poems, its called: thoughts of a freak.

It has a title. Its called 'Not Without Will'.  Its a continuation of the story I posted on page 5 (I think that's the page).

Dandelions surround me, a lifetime of wishes
Delicate, fragile biographies, the empitome of life
Each fluffy seed an achievement to be gently pulled away
The winds of time stripping the stalk bare,
And sending the wisps floating through the air
To land and grow elsewhere.

The things that bring us joy never seem to last.

Your poems are awesome Alexis. Write some more.

The deadly dance of immortal foes
Clashing, crashing, sowing destruction
Tilling the barren earth with stolen bones,
Planting seeds of despair with each sloughed off scale.

No hope for the innocent
No relief for the broken
All humans in turmoil.

They reap their crops with the Scythe of Death
And consume all in their fiery passion.
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Hey, everybody!  Check out Peace and War, a collaboration by Maverick4 and myself.
Its going to be awesome.

A Bit of Sunshine

Tip, tap, tip, tap

The rain is falling.
I breathe slowly,
The window fogging.
My reflection is fading

in, out, in, out

And becoming clearer.
I wrap myself in thoughts,
To keep myself warm
Thoughts of you

you, me, us, we

And I.

A
Were I not human, I would say
Give all your sorrows away.
Don't hold to griefs that cloud your past
Live each moment as you would you last.

If I had no feelings, I would advise
To ignore their prods and petty lies
What's done is done and it may have hurt
But stand up, child, brush off the dirt.

Yet I am only human, flawed and frail,
My sorrows write my life's rich tale,
To release my griefs and my regret
Would be to erase my being, my soul forget.

Emotions, weakness, bring true strength
Wisdom gained through pain, at length
Shown through actions, hateful and kind
Passed, the legacy of an ancestral mind.

B

Your breath upon my hair,
My head upon your chest;
Never has the safety of another's arms
Felt so true.

We could lay like this forever,
Away from the world.
Content with just ourselves
Our lives in limbo;

Together, bliss.

C

I know naught, but what thou hath told me.
I have grown sheltered, yea, verily,
No parcel of will or hope to lead me.
I seek adventure, divine release from this monotony,
To sail blue seas, borne of Posidon,
O'er tides and swells, to reach the horizon.
To battle with creatures, nay, monsters abroad
Ye children of demons, creations of gods.
Smote by sword, baptised in blood,
Pretty dreams of a peasant son.

Valentine's Day Haiku :D
You make me happy,
You make me smile when I'm sad.
I love you, Austin.

Yayy for V DAYY!!!!!!!