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Strop
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Bard

Okay, now my thesis is done, I've thought about it and decided now is a good time as any to work on my verbal skills. The idea is this:

* Give me a topic, and a style (of a person, or the name of a style). I will attempt to write a verse or two accordingly.

* If you could, give me links to the topic and examples of the style.

* No redistribution, please. The verses I write here are mine.

For example, in a previous thread, Klaushouse asked me to do a rap in the style of Kanye West on the topic of Pokemon, so I wrote one that could be rapped to Homecoming.

Have at it!

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ialwayswin
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Jester

One more battle to end it all
We will see who stands tall
When you come knocking on my door
crawling on nuthin but the hard brick floor
Saying that you just can't think of a rhyme
Well I guess that its just your time
You can only now call for a tie
we both deserve it and thats no lie
yet my faith will lead be to believe
that only one can achieve
strop will see,who is the king
and who is the one who can sing
but at the end of the day
I will be the one to stay
that is just how I roll
you cant pass me without a toll
the only good reward you see
is the self dignity
there was blood all through the night
it was a great ongoing fight
but in the end you wont win
cause the water is already past your chin
I was born to to rap to the death
walking on nothing but a single breath
I think you will not deny
that its impossible to get by
but my one piece of wisdom to you
never face someone that is more than true
lets finish this once and for all
then we will see who will stand tall
The crowd cheers to the one they like
as the other can just take a hike.

Rap by:ialwayswin

Kingy
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Nomad

Thats sweet Ialwayswin!

tehblackknight
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Nomad

Hey nice rapping that was really nice ialwayswin dude you are a beast

skater_kid_who_pwns
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Blacksmith

well the crowd they all turned away
they all seem to want you to stay
it seems like your the winner of today
but i will leave wit my head held high
and i wont let all of my pride die
but man i tried to make ya' cry
my rapping just wasnt that fly
so ya got the title of king in ths rap
but maybe some day i'll be back
i'll take ya' to the shack'hang ya on da' rack
but for to day with what breath i got left
i just gotta pat ya on da' back
but the water's jus' rising to fast and so i say with my final breath if ya' need support i got ya back
cause you taught me a lesson in raps
$SKWP$

skater_kid_who_pwns
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Blacksmith

so i might have lost that battle but now i got some experience under my belt any one wanna challenge me to a rap off? PM me if ya do then we will bring it here

skater_kid_who_pwns
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Blacksmith

come on any oneeeeeee

ialwayswin
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Jester

haha I guess people are too afraid to challenge you! Looks like you made a better impression then you thought

Lilboi3000
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Nomad

its okay idea.

skater_kid_who_pwns
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Blacksmith

Ha, sadly i guesse i did. O well, people just gotta give it a try, if strop got one and posted in here again, people would come like crazy but sadly.....no strop.

skater_kid_who_pwns
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Blacksmith

A post!!!!!!!! O dang it no challenge though, o well.

squidlidink
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Farmer

Here is my rap:

Yo. Yo. yo. Yo!
I want mo, mo, mo, more...
Cookies! Cookies!
I want mo, mo, mo, more...
Cookies! Cookies!
When those cookies come knocking.
I can't keep from smiling.
Cause I know your watchin'
so I have to eat those..
Cookies! Cookies!
I want mo, mo, mo, more
Cookies!!!!!!!



That is my first rap eva so don't judge it too harsh.

TheMetalGrunt
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Nomad

I'm so infectious, I'm a money machine,
I'll inspire you, or give you gangrene!
I'm uh survivor & and supplier-
Of the drug that you do!
I conspire in my mind, to create-
The perfect crime, kill all the-
mimes!
I'm so powerful, so daring so-
Original, if I'm after you,-
I'll kill you with uh Pikachu!
So don't mess with me, I'm lyricly-
Unbeatable, undefeatable, the-
Champion of all,
The one who bought duh shopping mall!

Book in one hand, ninja Stars in duh other,
How do you respond when I ____ your mother,
I'll beat you at Mass Effect, COD4 and Halo 3,
I'll beat you in a day, you ain't good like me!

evil_empire
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Peasant

heyy do this song in pokemon style, if this is what you mean:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=K47W0UTq_9o
Thankyou

kingryan
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Farmer

Hey look I'm here,
I just ate some deer,
Kingryan is Back!
So cut me some slack.

Change has happened to the name,
But I would say it is the same game.
Strop can't even capitalise,
The incorrect grammar hurts my eyes.

It seems that Grunt has gone too far,
But I am gonna break that car.
His brain will seem like mush to mine,
He won't be able to keep up with my steep incline.

So it's not a rap if I don't mention,
I think this will get Strops Attention.
I'm gonna rap about Bum Rash Pikachu
I don't think he would be able to poo.

Strops a genius, I'll give him that,
But that pikachu looks like a cat.
And was a sick mind to give it a rash,
It wouldn't get anything if you sold it for cash.

So I betta go and unpack my case,
If I want to win that races.
Random Boost Girl, I love you,
But not remembering your name makes me feel like poo.

KINGRYAN

Strop
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Bard

Not bad not bad, I see some talent in these past few pages.

*sigh* see, I dislike rapping about me but I've been asked to, so your guest artist is back at the mic! Spin the disc, DJ!

*old school beat*

The name's strop, spelt S-T-R-O-P,
No studio G, his philosophy,
Is the way of the immortal ninja,
Challenge him? Don't say I didn't warned ya,
Who is this guy nobody knows,
Nobody sees where or when or how he goes,
So tell me how am I supposed to write-
About that which ain't ever graced the spotlight?
But the legend of strop spreads far and wide,
Even if he ain't here there's no place to hide,
With his mod-eye and speed there's no way to run,
Coz his ninja-skills are second to none,
So if you must, give strop a buzz,
Let him know what's all the big fuss,
And in a flash (or in his own time),
He'll solve your issue better than he can rhyme!?

Lol, I don't know if that's saying much, tho.

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