Okay, now my thesis is done, I've thought about it and decided now is a good time as any to work on my verbal skills. The idea is this:
* Give me a topic, and a style (of a person, or the name of a style). I will attempt to write a verse or two accordingly.
* If you could, give me links to the topic and examples of the style.
* No redistribution, please. The verses I write here are mine.
For example, in a previous thread, Klaushouse asked me to do a rap in the style of Kanye West on the topic of Pokemon, so I wrote one that could be rapped to Homecoming.
Rap is just poetry with a harder tone But if Blackfang keeps that up he will end up alone Cursing a your opponent doesn't make you cool Actually I'd say you end up a fool Show you have time for a lighter approach Show you understand that you can encroach I guess this might show I'm not a rapper myself Just painting with word, you should try it yourself
Oh Gods.... Why do I keep trying... *bows head in shame*
@blackfang: Intentional. It's just in my nature :P ----------- You're good, but some of your rhymes don't make sense. This is my first rap battle ---------- I'll call this one a tie until you respond.
@Cenere: That one was actually good. I liked it ------------ Yeah, you think that sexual innuendos are cool? Well, the more you say, the more you act like a fool! Try to drown me in fuck instead of skill? This is a a habit of yours I'm gonna kill. I must admit, it's been fun but if your head deserves one thing, it's my gun! Glad you'll never again see the Sun. I get you could win but not without a rhyming dictionary! Hell, your skills add up to that of a drunken canary. You say my punches aren't hard but mine are inventive, like a bard and you're just trying to leave my young mind scarred. Well, it's easy to tell how miserably you failed, And now, I'm done with my rant and rail. Respect! Peace, all ye homeez.
Hey blackfang! You just suck! It like you're a hobo in New York. Or your just a little kid called dork. You suck at rappin While I'm still standin' Now I feel like the best rapp right here the score is 1 to 0 can't keep up, then you should give up. Now I'm gonna blow the roof up So just SHUT UP!
Kyle that was the weakest rhyme I've ever WITNESSED/ I'm not gonna say a lot I know your suicidal , I wouldn't want you to SLIT WRIST , or run in traffic and get cover in STITCHES/ But listen in rap you can't really SPIT THIS , I FLIP DISKS , faster then you can come up with a line or even THINK SHIT/ See I spit like I SEIZE PLANETS/ I put to sleep BANDITS , never injured but I SNEEZE DAMAGE/ I'll leave you in the STREET BANDAGED , and stick coolant down your throat so you can BREATH ANGUISH/
Lol So I see you WRITE BACK , but hey where the MIC AT? This is suppose to be RAP , but I'll cut you some SLACK cuz it's been a TIGHT MATCH PERHAPS I'll end it with a NICE RAP , my lines are at the top , yours in the gutter where YOUR MINDS AT!
@fang: Man, you thought that that was scary? You must have, 'cuz ya responded all wary. That wasn't serious, and neither is this, because I'm too bored to make this rap worth it!
I sit here and see a lot Fools WRITE WORDS/ Try to make a TIGHT VERSE , but all is JUST LIGHT WORK/ Some say they DONE DIRT , but really just talking a bunch of TONGUE HURTS/ There are some with some skill that PEEK IN/ New people to scared to test the waters , don't even walk in the DEEP-END/ Cuz we say words that make SPLEENS BEND , newbies can't stand like we cut their KNEES to Their FEET , and that's just work DONE ON THE WEEK-END/
I sit here, see ya holdin' on to a spent force I'm gettin bored, this is a lent course. Hell, say what you need to. Keep actin' like a fool in this pool, you're on floaties in the shallow end, that ain't cool. I'm a-restin', not givin' a shit every time you throw a goddamn fit. Peace all ye homeez.
YEAH HALF OF IT"S MISSIN , and HALF OF THEM WISHIN Cookin to hot HALF CAN"T EVEN STAND IN THE KITCHEN Some eating salads , don't want beef cuz there UNDERSTANDING is SLIPPIN There Knowledge is TWITCHIN , Feeling femalelized there rest get left BITCHIN!
