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Strop
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Bard

Okay, now my thesis is done, I've thought about it and decided now is a good time as any to work on my verbal skills. The idea is this:

* Give me a topic, and a style (of a person, or the name of a style). I will attempt to write a verse or two accordingly.

* If you could, give me links to the topic and examples of the style.

* No redistribution, please. The verses I write here are mine.

For example, in a previous thread, Klaushouse asked me to do a rap in the style of Kanye West on the topic of Pokemon, so I wrote one that could be rapped to Homecoming.

Have at it!

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Klaushouse
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Nomad

It's a shame for you Devoid,
That you think you can rap,
You just filling a void,
Stuffin' it with load a cr*p!
You may think you got skills,
But you just got cheap thrills,
You're rhymes are like a river,
they are fast and choppy,
Only I can deliver,
Good rhymes that are snappy.

Now go play by yourself,
With you childsplay rap,
I can do better than this,
While I am taking a nap,
fool!

Strop
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Strop
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Bard

Ryan: this is in fact practice for me to do freestyle in real life!

'void: Do you realise that your 'oldskool' rap just dissed old school rap by painting the clock face in a derogatory light?

I'll inform you in more detail when I get back!

Klaushouse
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Nomad

Strop you're ruining the gangster atmosphere,
I really don't think you even belong in here,
The least you can do, to please my soul,
Is rap everything, into a whole.

Devoidless
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Jester

Pfft...everything has to be dissed now and then.

And I hope you all realize I am flying by the seat of my pants for all of this. These are the first times I have rapped. EVER. XD

TheMetalGrunt
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Nomad

Strop, do a rap about Carls JR.
XD

TheMetalGrunt
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TheMetalGrunt
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Nomad

If you try to step to me, then you'll lose.
Don't act like deez other fools.
Look at 'em tryn' so hard to be a rappuh,
I'm sorry to tell you but you such a disastuh.
But I'm honest, essentially, lyricly physically-
and mentally, I'm honest. Why you wunna-
step to me, I'm uh straight up G, and-
you'll see...That I'm honest.


Yuh dig ?

TheMetalGrunt
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TheMetalGrunt
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Nomad

I like this type of meter, listen to the music on the menu, and maybe listen to some of his songs. They're not really any expletives, but if there are, then I apologize. Anyone heard of him, Lupe Fiasco ?

kingryan
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kingryan
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Farmer

Ah sorry Strop me mate, I just forgot,
I just got caught up with the who lot.
I guess I will just quit.
Maybe I should be learn to knit...
My rapping was always slightly lame...
Maybe we need a real rapping game!
Good Luck Strop with your rapping
I think I will go back to clapping!

KIngRyan

Strop
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Bard

Oh bummer, I didn't mean Kingryan, I meant Ryan7g!

Anyhow, I have the following requests:

A rap on Hershey's Chocolate in the style of Immortal Technique.

A rap on Carls Jr in the style of Lupe Fiasco.

I'll get onto it shortly!

kingryan
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kingryan
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Farmer

Oh yay that means I'm not in trouble!
I'll start rapping again on the double.
You know that I am just writing words that rhymhe.
I actually do this all the time!
In english we are doing poetry.
So that makes it really ... umm ... doetry?

Seeing that I always get stuck...
I guess that I am out of luck.
I think I might just eat and orange.
Oh no!!! Nothing rhymes with orange....NOOOOOOOOO!

Sorry guys I've lost my skill.
I think it was because I fell down a hill.
Cya later I'll see you soon.
And no, I aint a baboon.

Bye my friends and don't eat a lion.
Because my name is...

(All shout...)
KINGRYAN!

kingryan
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kingryan
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Farmer

Once again no-one wants to rap with me,
I just got back from doing a wee.
I like watching comedy
I feel like singing do-daa diddlee!

Rapping is getting kinda slow.
I don't want to do by homework though.
I have a science prac due tomorrow
Maybe I should drink away my sorrow.

I think I'll go get something to eat,
Hey Strop I thought of something neat.
What if you rapped about a metal,
A metal called silver or a stinging nettle.

I'm going now to eat a pie...
BECAUSE MY NAME IS...

KINGRY

flappybob999
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flappybob999
798 posts
Peasant

Hey, "Kingry",
your rap is very sly.
But no one,
not even me,
would give up this to eat a slice of pie,
A metal?
A stinging nettle?
Nothin' to say about that,
your rapping,
it sounds like a gnat.

Well, i'm off to other forums,
cause' i'm feeling a sense of boredom,
this game is too easy,
you all are sayin "really?"
And so i'm be back later,
to take all ya'll on,
take this as a sign....

My names flappybob999.

kingofgames
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kingofgames
612 posts
Farmer

ok just so 1 strop rap about pizza and flappy you rhymed every 4 part LOL

flappybob999
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flappybob999
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Peasant

Um..... Say again? I didn't understand a word of that.

BlackShadow
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BlackShadow
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Nomad

Hahah.Funny to read you guys.

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