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Strop
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Okay, now my thesis is done, I've thought about it and decided now is a good time as any to work on my verbal skills. The idea is this:

* Give me a topic, and a style (of a person, or the name of a style). I will attempt to write a verse or two accordingly.

* If you could, give me links to the topic and examples of the style.

* No redistribution, please. The verses I write here are mine.

For example, in a previous thread, Klaushouse asked me to do a rap in the style of Kanye West on the topic of Pokemon, so I wrote one that could be rapped to Homecoming.

Have at it!

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Cholokid
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Shepherd

You need to learn your place,
you can't run the race
your in last place
can't handel the pace.


Linkin Park, Points of Authority...

Plagiarism is bad
it makes me sad
don't do it,
it results in a fit.

Yay!
thisisnotanalt
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Shepherd

hey skater, I thought you had skill
but no, it was just a fill.
You plagiarized some other shit
and stuff like that puts me in a fit!
Yo, ironic you say i can't handle the pace
when you're the one goin' all two-face.
So ya, you thought you pwned me,
but Cholo ruined your glee
and what skill you had is biried.
RESPECT! yo dawg, word.

skater_kid_who_pwns
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Linkin Park, Points of Authority...


hrm? not familliar with the song.

am very sorry If I copied sometinhg. Not intentional. If i had known I would have gave credit to them. Is that a new song or something?

Alt, I was told off once. It is enough. Doing it tiwce makes you look rather....bad. Well I suppose that made me look bad as well.
thisisnotanalt
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Shepherd

@skater, lol that's how the thread works. It's dog-eat-dog >:P

Kyle248
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Nomad

Style:Soulja Boy
Topic: Fear Factor

thisisnotanalt
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Shepherd

Style:Soulja Boy
Topic: Fear Factor

Ummmmm. . . .
Fear factor up in the oh!
Watch me eat dat, watch me go!
kiss me thru the phone!
When I get into the pit of rattlesnakes!
Watch me eat rat dead fish and pukin' man, and oh!
Watch me jump from 5000 feet
and jump from 40000 feet
and fall for 4000 feet!

lol, I don't know the style. I just replaced Fear Factor stuff with lyrics from some of the songs by souljia boy lol :P i know that sucked.
skater_kid_who_pwns
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lol, alt that actually wasn't to bad.

P.S. i tihnk I know how this thread works...if you look towards the begining you should find alot of stuff i did.

Kyle248
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Nobody got a shot gun
Cuz I'm the only hot one
Taking on anyone, anyday, any time
Today I'll win cuz I shoot you with my shotgun
All ya tricks will not work
Cuz I a freak'in ninja
I'll make my day with Sonny2 Anyday
Playing the best game in AG everyday
Rapp'in is a sport
As what Devoidless said,this isn't to hard
AS BECOMIN' A STAR
Now I'm gettin' my shot gun
And now ya fall down to the GROUND!

PEACE

I made that up like in 7 mins

thisisnotanalt
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Shepherd

I'm livin' all blazin' and high
You couldn't match my skills, so don't try.
I have more flow than all the water in the sea,
hell, pokemon watches me
on TV!
You think you have skills?
Well, it's just a trill
Your words so full of fail,
another crap rap
and I'm gonna bail.
WORD! TWO WORDS! Nothin' but respect.

BlackFang17
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Nomad

thisisnotanalt , you come at me with a weak flow , if you keep close to me , by the end of the week I'll have you looking bad like your cheap clothes.I don't need to speak though , just from your lines everybody already knows you don't rap you just blow.See I'm a pro , when I take it to the basket I never miss , your like shaq always missing at the free throw.

BlackFang17
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thisisnotanalt , you come at me with a weak flow , if you keep close to me , by the end of the week I'll have you looking bad like your cheap clothes.I don't need to speak though , just from your lines everybody already knows you don't rap you just blow.See I'm a pro , when I take it to the basket I never miss , your like shaq always missing at the free throw.

thisisnotanalt
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Shepherd

You don't know the meaning of RAP
your rhymes suck so much, you deserve a SLAP
All your words, rhyme and rhythm they LACK!
When you're writing a rap, all ya do is SLACK
So don't even try anyMOR,
your words make mah ears SORE!

BlackFang17
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Nomad

If that's your best I don't have to WORRY
In a moment of FURRY , you'll be yelling and crying plz don't HURT ME
So stop don't even REPLY
Your raps you'll DENY , your weakness you have to much bitch in your EYES
What makes you think you can even make it , you can't take it , at best in this your like a newborn trying to run a mile naked.

thisisnotanalt
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Shepherd

What? Is that the best you can do?
You can't get a single good rhyme through.
Your rap has the flow of a jacked-up sloth
every time you post, I just scoff.
You're so made of fail,
you'd see your rap CD as a target at a gun sale!
So go somewhere else,
before my fucking head melts.
because it's clear I'm the king,
so let my victory bells ring!
WHAT! Word.

Kyle248
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Nomad

I see you playing like a little soulja boy
when you rappin' just like a little baby boy
it's like your a just a bald headed girl
so you can stay in ya home just crying all day
When you got a girl and your bringin' her to dinner
She hears you rap and she just leaving
So when you think about rappin'
Just throw it away
And I'll head toward FAME.

By Kyle248-maker of "Too bad"
(Too bad is my first rap)

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