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Strop
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Okay, now my thesis is done, I've thought about it and decided now is a good time as any to work on my verbal skills. The idea is this:

* Give me a topic, and a style (of a person, or the name of a style). I will attempt to write a verse or two accordingly.

* If you could, give me links to the topic and examples of the style.

* No redistribution, please. The verses I write here are mine.

For example, in a previous thread, Klaushouse asked me to do a rap in the style of Kanye West on the topic of Pokemon, so I wrote one that could be rapped to Homecoming.

Have at it!

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BlackFang17
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This is for Kyle , whats up thisisnotanalt been a while I haven't seen you drop in a minute well here it goes............


I'll give you effort for your WACK VERSE , I'm a MACK your a TURD , and I'm battlin on RANS TURF/
You lack vision and SLACK WORDS , I'll make you RUN IN REVERSE to late your verse already looks BACKWORDS/
Fall BACK SACK , I'll make your NECK SNAP , I make HEADS BOP , and BEDS ROCK , and LEAD KNOCK , I'm the one that gave technology to BEDROCK/
Make your HEAD STOP , and BRAIN POP , your delusional if you think you can win , you be smokin to much DREAD LOCKS/
I'll BURY YOU , have your MIND SPLIT IN TWO , my words viscous and STICK like GLUE , I see you in a crisis with-out a THING TO DO , so Ill merk you and let you say your prayers that's my GIFT TO YOU/

thisisnotanalt
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Whoa man,
that shit was whack,
didya write it on crack?
You n Kyle doin' a freaky battle now
but after readin that, Kyle'll have a cow.
Yeah, i'm the commentator
think of me as a human terminator!

BlackFang17
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thisisnotanalt , I'm turning a new LEAF...leave you resting IN PEACE out by the BEACH , I make pyro music cuz I lyricly rape songs , so I can say I can fuck with a BEAT....I spit furious YO , I'm serious THOUGH , I'm pure warfare , you just try hitting me with STONES , never blow up at best on a PHONE as a CINGULAR TONE...

DDX
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back down from my boi alt,
he says some things but it aint his fault.
I got his back and he got mine
we do this till the end of time
come back here when you get your rep up
its about time you started to step
you say spit furious,
now i'm curious.
cause all I see is drool
going down this fool

peace, neegs.

representing my man alt.

DDX
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edit:

ts about time you started to step
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mattt15
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I'm a beginner at this -.-

Today i'm walking from school
I see a fool
He's just holding a tool
And he ain't no cool

So i went up to him
I got his car rim

He only had 1
Then i throw it to him and run.

While i was running the right way
I saw someone gay
He's under a ray
He's gonna pay
If he doesn't he won't have anything to say

because he will be dead
in his bed
all red

because he's nervous

no reason why
so don't have to cry

it is my,
my pie
then i will throw it at his tie

samdawghomie
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Thats really good for a beginner mattt!!

thisisnotanalt
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thisisnotanalt , I'm turning a new LEAF...leave you resting IN PEACE out by the BEACH , I make pyro music cuz I lyricly **** songs , so I can say I can **** with a BEAT....I spit furious YO , I'm serious THOUGH , I'm pure warfare , you just try hitting me with STONES , never blow up at best on a PHONE as a CINGULAR TONE...


I think it's funny, really pathetic
you say I rap like crap, and you like an ascetic
but you're recycling lines like you live in San Frans.
So just go home and mess with your Warriors Clans!
Evilpumpkinman
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YoYo my name is Jo,
And I live in the snow Yo,
my bike goes ding ding,
my phone goes ring ring,
where my labirene goes,
my ferrii flows,

I old one I made in PRIMARY SCH00L

We always used ton sing it all da time!!!

XxLBJames23xX
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Um, I cant rap but I will just say random stay and see what I get.

Dont be hatin'
Just start waitin'
Cus' when I'm done with you
You would want to sue
And, its not about the salary
its all about reality
and making some noise...

The end, I know, it was horrible so start the hate mail!

DDX
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destroyre dont be talk smack
you cant rap much better than that
back of from the newbie
got something to say? so sue me.
I aint never been a hater
still I love them in a crazy way
but you just don't gotta hate
don't make it seem like fate.
cause you'll be gone without a trace
so turn around and leave this place.

D to the X

trippinongoodstuff
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da robbery

bring it on
i trigger tha alarm
take the cash
get massed,
on my mask
now i got a rash
so i thrashed through the dou
grabed my gat,
now the girl is gone
course that is what happens
when you mess with a playa
you get smoked
now im out the door(douu)

BlackFang17
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Trip you got be on your FEET talk quick SEE , I spit SICKLY , I see you've been practicing for WEEKS , that was a nervous rap , I think his heart skipped a BEAT , hes the type to ask soulja boi for advice on how he can be the best RAPPER ALIVE , soulja bois response would be say OH and fuck 3 GUYS , speak in VIBES , and repeat you lines at least 3 TIMES , at that's the best advice hes HEARD , hes a HERB soft , couldn't come with action if he only spoke in VERBS.

BlackFang17
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I'll make anybody DIE SLOW , all bitches on the LOW , just pussies tryin to ROLL , I kill by INSTINCT , make SKILLS SINK , destroy there immune system them after to them proscribe ZINC , I'm the missing LINK to the rap GAME , all LAMES , I'm with plenty of RANGE , can't be touched , every bodies else's lines are like a 2 minute fuck with a girl , just get left laying in SHAME , see there mind thought they could do FAME , but none could be famous even if they were CHAINED to DAVID BLANE!

call out to anybody trying to challenge me.

Rap
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I used to Text battle and stuff on forums, but I upgraded to Itunes.

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