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Strop
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Bard

Okay, now my thesis is done, I've thought about it and decided now is a good time as any to work on my verbal skills. The idea is this:

* Give me a topic, and a style (of a person, or the name of a style). I will attempt to write a verse or two accordingly.

* If you could, give me links to the topic and examples of the style.

* No redistribution, please. The verses I write here are mine.

For example, in a previous thread, Klaushouse asked me to do a rap in the style of Kanye West on the topic of Pokemon, so I wrote one that could be rapped to Homecoming.

Have at it!

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Cenere
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Jester

Okay; I challenge you
I tell you here what you have to do
No more caps for adding stress
Stop using words the site can't access

I as seemingly
1) too tired
2) not good at this

thisisnotanalt
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Shepherd

2) not good at this


You're doing pretty good insofar. . .the rap that challenged him was a pretty clever inclusion.
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I say, this'll be cool
but here I am, to watch, oversee and rule
I'll be waiting, with baited breath
and watch this battle get more rockin' than Nazareth!
sourwhatup2
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Jester

Lol what's with the caps and the cussing? Lol

I suck at this as well. And really i don't like rap so w.e.

Rap
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Nomad

Caps are to show rhymes/multies

Zega
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Zega
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Peasant

Rap posted here... The irony baffles me.

Baaah.... I don't really like rap..

Rap
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Rap
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Nomad

Why don't you like me?

Shadowphoenix39
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Nomad

I decided today-
that I would play-
in this little rap game-
Even 'cause ma raps are lame-
Most of them seem the same-
I mean I'm not in it for the fame-
Now ima leave as fast as I came.
Word.

DDX
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Nomad

you think raps are justa game,
well I'm here, I don't think the same.
I'm perfectly emasculate with a spirit of a hustler
and the swagger of a college kid,
allergic to your counterfeit,
raps that don't have heart or beat
I just got to come and bust your feat.
now run along, and best go far
I see your tail behind that bar.
Dejected cause you can't make rhymes,
cant keep up with the speeding times.
You gotta be in for the fame,
Cause raps without just not the same.
I rep my raps so loud and clear
My fame eats you, so 'd better fear
and my lyrics that you gotta hear
ain't that ain't I outta here?

Peace G.

-D to the X

DDX
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Nomad

you think raps are justa game,
well I'm here, I don't think the same.
I'm perfectly immaculate with a spirit of a hustler
and the swagger of a college kid,
allergic to your counterfeit,
raps that don't have heart or beat
I just got to come and bust your feat.
now run along, and best go far
I see your tail behind that bar.
Dejected cause you can't make rhymes,
cant keep up with the speeding times.
You gotta be in for the fame,
Cause raps without just not the same.
I rep my raps so loud and clear
My fame eats you, so 'd better fear
and my lyrics that you gotta hear
ain't that ain't I outta here?

Peace G.

-D to the X

Edit: sorry there was a typo in there.

emasculate => immaculate

immaculate means clean and tidy.

Bluydee
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Nomad

Imaa rapper
I work all day
I never have time
I want to play
I have no friends
It all depends
Whether or not that I am stupid
I am not like a cupid
I just a bozo
I move as slow as slowbro
It just takes time
Imaa rapper
I work all day
I never have time
I want to play
I have no friends
It all depends
Whether or not that I am stupid
I am not like a cupid
I just a bozo
I move as slow as slowbro
It just takes time

What do you think?

Bluydee
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Nomad

I thought of another


Yo bro
I can rap
Its not like taps
All you get
Is some little respect
Don`t disrespect
Work hard on your song
Its not just drums doing bing bong bong
Like I said in my last rap
Im just a small rapper
My songs are like constallations
They connect like the my songs
It takes work
But don`t dissapoint
Do not rush and you`ll get the point
It just takes time

Bluydee
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Nomad

And another

Stars are just big light bulbs
Hanging from the sky like some lamps
They make some little shapes
Like the bear and the hunter
I said in my last song
My songs are like those shapes
The sun seems big
But not big enough
Planets look like stars
Bright and shining
In the mid night`s darkness
Then theres the dog star
Named sirius
Why call it dog star?
There`s better names
Like light bulb or shining star?
Stars are weird
I will never under stand them

Bluydee
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Nomad

I like to rap
What else can I say?
Rapping is my life
I never have a peaceful day
People come to my door
And what do I say?
Go away!
They never stop
Go bug soldier boy or 50 cent
Do not come to my door
You mfbs
Stop coming to my door
I will kill you
If you do

tennisman24
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Farmer

You no I can rap I just don't want to show off. I just came here to say that Blydee most of them were terrible except the last one.

BlackFang17
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Nomad

I STACK BIG PAPER , do me A BIG FAVOR , and quit before I send you back to your day job making minimum doing CHEAP LABOR. Him a BEAST? Plz the only time hes animalistic is when he uses his hand to try and RELEASE. He ain't FIT for BEEF , he SKIPPED THE STREET , treat it like a girl he a pinky man so I know he ain't COMING DEEP. He a real BUM , only speaks DUMB , don't make no sense like trying to do sign language without THUMBS. I'm like splenomegaly , I'll start the attack on his SPLEEN , MEAN quick to gut him CLEAN , Hes the worst rapper I've SEEN , worst rapper he should be crowned the QUEEN!

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