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Strop
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Okay, now my thesis is done, I've thought about it and decided now is a good time as any to work on my verbal skills. The idea is this:

* Give me a topic, and a style (of a person, or the name of a style). I will attempt to write a verse or two accordingly.

* If you could, give me links to the topic and examples of the style.

* No redistribution, please. The verses I write here are mine.

For example, in a previous thread, Klaushouse asked me to do a rap in the style of Kanye West on the topic of Pokemon, so I wrote one that could be rapped to Homecoming.

Have at it!

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BlackFang17
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I'm holding my BREATH , GOT A GUN TO MY CHEST//
From all the PAIN I IN-JEST , Its not a game , ITS A BET//
I keep hearing THE WORD DEATH , dude its time for you TO LAY REST//
I have to STRUGGLE WITH LESS , having to live life with NOTHING BUT HEX//
I should put a NEEDLE TO MY NECK , leave in a box , maybe that way my soul will be IN CHECK//
Tell me WHAT'S NEXT , I'm I dying or am I BLESSED , is my life a LIE , or I haven't LIVED YET//
I don't got all the ANSWERS , are my plans CANCER , or will I BE AMERICAS NEXT BEST DANCER//
Should I GIVE IT A CHANCE , or do I DIE AT MY STANCE , Should I OPEN MIND , or be stuck CLOSED OFF SHINE , should I SHAKE IT OFF , or be SHAMED AND TOSSED// ok changed it

BlackFang17
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This is a drop I put on a girl that was talking to much smack.........


LEAVE FOR f**k SAKE , stop trying to CHANGE YOUR FATE , you couldn't evolve your lines if they were chimps and you were BREEDING APES!//
I'm an ACE , and your LOSING PACE , the only way your drop would blow up is if YOU KEPT EATING CAKE!//
Your IN HATE but it's ok , I KNOW YOUR LACKING THE FAITH//
TRYING TO ESCAPE TO PLACE , the only thing that escaped you was your WEIGHT!//

LuciferSatanis
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ahahaha nice, thats great.


I don't want to drink the stuff from that.
It's white and gross, and taste like smack
I'm not talkin bout semen or about crack.
I'm talking milk from a cow's sack.

Who was the genius, please step forward,
You'd think you'd be even a little cultured
Don't hide there don't be a coward
answer me or you'll get hammered.

doesn't that cow thing look like a dic*?
even the stuff comes out is thick
How could you know to drink that you prick?
That kinda stuff is just too graphic.

BlackFang17
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I'm the HYPE TYPE , I just MIGHT FIGHT , up all day I PSYCH NIGHT!//
Live the LIME-LIFE , take anybody out of THE SPOT-LIGHT!//

that's all for now I've been rapping all day , I'll come back tomorrow with more...........

DDX
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Damn straight youre gonna be back, And we'll have a topic rap off. Which will be decided by me. Anyone can join. the topic is: GLASS (i.e. windows) think about it SOME and spit me an ALBUM.

BlackFang17
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I'll rap about glass tomorrow just for you DDX.

DDX
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Sick, I'm looking forward to it.

BlackFang17
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Ok cool home skillet.

phsycomonkey
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What makes rap "good" to you... Why do you like it, whats the point of it?

Strop
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Okay, having heard your responses, I have this to say:

a) Site policy clearly states no excessive swearing. This comes above everything else.

b) On the internet, nobody can tell if you're lying or telling the truth. Everybody with an internet connection becomes that white middle-class kid (which was what I was implying). Even the Asians, like DDX and myself.

Now I'd love to see people working towards a theme of hope and love and unity and sparkly unicorns lolol.

thisisnotanalt
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that white middle-class kid

Lol, so everyone is me on the internet? :/
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Why are we fightin'?
Tryin' to make ourselves into false Titans
too much more of this, we'll get indicted
so let's try to be more like the Unicorn
and into peace and love, we'll be reborn


Is that close enough to the sparkly unicorn theme?
DDX
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Even the Asians, like DDX and myself.


stroppy you know what doctors have to go through... they are (censored) poor for like 8 years when they go through residency/med school. That was the hardest time of my life O_O
BlackFang17
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So whats the topic on rapping today?

DDX
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sparkly unicorns lolol.


Theme^^
BlackFang17
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Can it be about something else?

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