Okay, now my thesis is done, I've thought about it and decided now is a good time as any to work on my verbal skills. The idea is this:
* Give me a topic, and a style (of a person, or the name of a style). I will attempt to write a verse or two accordingly.
* If you could, give me links to the topic and examples of the style.
* No redistribution, please. The verses I write here are mine.
For example, in a previous thread, Klaushouse asked me to do a rap in the style of Kanye West on the topic of Pokemon, so I wrote one that could be rapped to Homecoming.
Alright alright, so there were some unicorn raps...but I say!
Why you paint with words so grey, With your back to the day, with a character fey, All you wanna do is lay on the grass, while it- passes you by, and you fret and sigh, I know your type, for all the hype, You wouldn't dare enough to care to reach for the light, Or for that matter, hear the pitter patter- Of dancing fawns on the lawn with prancing unicorns!
None of you knew that with bars I was a psycho// I was never hit with a drop , just hit with typos// This is a light post for this ghost thread// You want mo dead , well come and post some gross dread words// Explore a verse with bursts of hurt// Or put in work to poetry or curse// Slay day to any attacks make you Un-born// Or if your happy rap about unicorns//
Flag Alright alright, so there were some unicorn raps...but I say! Why you paint with words so grey, With your back to the day, with a character fey, All you wanna do is lay on the grass, while it- passes you by, and you fret and sigh, I know your type, for all the hype, You wouldn't dare enough to care to reach for the light, Or for that matter, hear the pitter patter- Of dancing fawns on the lawn with prancing unicorns! lolololol
The unicorn didnt rhyme. At least mine rhymed even though it was simple. Horn-Unicorn
Here is a new one but with no unicorn
The dancing fairies came today, they made haters like hitler gay, come on everyone hear me say, hey, hey, hey, hey............hey
you wanna be the girl to marry me but you try to act like you dont see, you stumble in my arms, that also in the farm,
i like it but i know you are not blind, i wont think less of you in my mind, if you admit the truth....... admit the truth, your efforts will bear fruit.
Picture me rolling Into the night with no respite Working up until dawn comes Bathed around in morning light But some of us still keep their eyes On their lies thinking time to criminalize, uh. They have no sight Just think that rapping is to put on a fight Emotion coastin' wrong ways Caught up in the craze But still I go on Asking when the light comes on Still heading towards the east For the sunrise Picture me rolling!
sonam: I'm sure if Strop verbally dictated to you his rap it would make sense. As such, rap doesn't just rely on pure rhyme. It also relies on assonance and alliteration just as much as rhyme. There's a bit of flexibility given in rhymes to make it flow.
My rhymes shake, cause an earthquake your crack pipe don't help you make good raps, you spin old words like an old flake So STFU, GTFO for God's sake your screechin' bad ryhmes givin' me a headache.
