Its an alrite map... You need more scenery. But you really should use the grid, it makes things alot cleaner looking and it is easier to make things.
If you need to know how to make good ramps, here is one of my walk - thru's
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Also, If you need help making some scenery I can help too
Here is an example of an aligator...
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