To many words unsaidSweet kisses, unsharedSunny days, ful of rainwhere joy lays next to ...pain,And all I gotta do is one step,....but I'm holding back, I'm to affraidso things stay the same,cold...undoneunsaidwithheldoff hold.written by Janine 25.12.2008
I'm not much of a poet, but the message gets a 10/10. As for the rhythm, it seemed a little off, but I might be reading it wrong. Average in to about a 9.5/10
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