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thisisnotanalt
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"Hey Alt, what are you doing now?"
"Reading my story on armorgames. It's called the Neverending Story."
"How could it never end if it only ends up being four lines?"
"Read it closely." 0.o

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Pazx
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I am not coming back. and my grammar is fine.


Capital A plsplspls.

an Avicus should get a cough drop now stop criticizing me or I will keep posting.


I'll let the lack of D go for the sake of Typos, but capital A would help.

Now get out and stay out. I already /threaded
zlith
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back, and my

and Avicus

Stop criticizing me so I can leave.

Pazx
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Pazx
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Peasant

Stop criticizing me so I can leave.


Just get the hell out.

I am back, and my:


Fix'd for you.
thisisnotanalt
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Alt: Zlith, you shouldn't wait to evacuate a burning house until the fire is out, should you? You should take the quickest, most efficacious path out possible. The criticism is the fire - the NES is the building.
Chill: Wow, nice wise-man monologue.
Alt: . . . .
Chill: . . . .
P: Stop stealing M and I's trademark filler!

10facepalms

the_manta
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Ma: *Tsk-Tsk* zlith, zlith, zlith... Please go away. K? You can go anywhere else, except here and the Aftermath.
A: See, you could have stayed if you had any idea of structure or if you realized you don't have to use spellcheck. Why don't you just go through and fix the mistakes yourself?
Ma: Good day to you, Sir. *Walks off*

Pazx
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10facepalms


RAWR! THAT'S ALSO MINE!

10bowserfowardsmashes
zlith
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Nomad

I am leaving already, and I just read the aftermath quietly judging.

thisisnotanalt
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10toonlinkdodges

The Aftermath is different than the NES, zlith. It's my story, wih user-created content added in to make it more interesting. If you lead it astray too much, action will be taken.

the_manta
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10Lucariocounterattacks

I like the way your Aftermath story is going, by the way, Alt.

zlith
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Nomad

I am not going to post on it just read it it is cool.

thisisnotanalt
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thisisnotanalt
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10toonlinkdodges

Kay then.

ShoddySpec
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What happened to the neverending story? Has it ended? Did you divide by zero? Cos if you did then FUUUUUUUUU-

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