Sorry everyone, I thought it was about time I put everything about me here, in this thread. By that I mean everything i've written and ever will write. I've recently realised that the only creative talent I have is being an okay writer. I would definately not say I'm very good, but I enjoy it and seem to have a knack for it.
So i'll post anything i've done here, be it written stories, poems, lyrics, doodles, etc.
First few works'll be posted in a sec. I'd love to hear your feedback, and if you'll would kindly not post your own works in here, thanks?
Firetail, if you read what I wrote before the story...
I checked all the mistakes in word, but then realised I couldn't be bothered to c/p it into notepad again and change the symbols. So, sorry, but this is the one with spelling and grammar mistakes. A draft, if you like.
Thanks Alt
I get the feeling I should change alot of parts to the story. Is the overall story good or no?
~ I'm not sure what it is that made me leave, but I know it isn't you. My figure moans in mutual pain and theres nothing I can do. (Nothing I can tell you. Nothing here is true.) I know its not over and I'm foolish to think otherwise. Every word I speak doesn't seem to compromise.
I can't tell you how it feels, every word hangs in the air. The noose that ties me to the spot is frayed and dripping with despair. I'll try so hard to make you see, trapped behind a glass facade, You've always had the chance to be the one who's not afraid.
Say I gave you sorrow; yes, I hate myself for that, I also gave you joy, why in my face you spat. Only my words can comfort you, but even those can fail, Warmth flickers feebly around you, concealing you to no avail.
My mind offers no salvation, it's the home of roaming thoughts, I realise I've cried a battle that you'd easily have fought. If it wasn't for the wince I make before I bare my teeth, When my eyes catch your gaze and watch your hands drop to your sheath.
This drags on forever 'cause I dart around the truth. My lips want to betray me, youthful, cunning and aloof. I figured I can write if I just let my senses go, Whether the words make sense or not, the scarlet ink will surely flow.
Every night I lay awake wishing not to fall asleep, 'Cause every night after your writings my face softens as I weep. This echoes in my dreams where I imagine you stone dead, When I take to frozen lakes and take my own life here instead.
I'm not saying I can't live without you,but I'll certainly take my life, Should that ever be the case, should my emotions run rife. If I told you how I feel, you'll just say I'm being too cliche, But I need you to know just how it is, that is to say;
Should someone harm you i'll harm them 'cause I can't see bear to see you hurt, If you need someone to talk to, come to me 'cause I wont blurt. But if you tell me that you love me, get too scared to say my name, I mean... you know I really like you, I just can't tell you the same. ~
No title. No explaination. Make of it what you will~
