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This is my first story ever, it probablly isn't any good so feel free to give constructive criticism. I am always up for new ideas as well.


Over ten thousand years ago a powerful Demon Lord was banished from Armor to the Realm of Chaos. Now he is back, and he is not alone. Hordes of demons have joined him in the conquest of Armor, and the destruction of its people. Though King Barret I(the one who banished the Demon Lord) died long ago his descendants still ruled and so the Demon Lord would exact his revenge on them.

Chapter I: Discovery.


Braketh and his royal knights had been marching for hours. The sun was hot and in a full set of armor it was unbarable. Why had his father sent them out on a day like this. But then again he had been acting strange lately. Ever since the dark clouds appeared to the north, King Halder had been on edge. Sending scouting parties farther and farther north, each returning with the same results absolutely nothing.

Brakeths party was sent the farthest north yet. The dark clouds were close. But no enemies were in sight. Braketh wondered what they were looking for anyway. His father had told him before their departure. Be careful my son, I fear that I'm sending you to your death. He still didn't understand that either. His men were considered to be some of the strongest in the kingdom, having survived many wars they were all battle hardened. Fighting was second nature to them. One of his knights spoke up. My Lord, someone approachs. A man came from farther up the path. Dressed in a black cloak and hood. He carried a staff as well.

Leave now knight, or he will crush you and your men. What are you talking about old man? Braketh began to wonder what kind of trickery this was. The Demon Lord has returned from the Realm of Chaos. Seeking revenge against King Barret I. But he will not do this alone. Thousands upon thousands of Demons have joined him. Leave now and escape his wrath. Before Braketh could ask another question the man disappeared in a flash of blinding light. When their vision was clear the old man was gone. Braketh don't you think we should head back? Bane was looking at him, eyes wide and terrified.[i] Do you actually believe him Bane? It was just a crazy old man. Lets keep moving, we need to find a good spot to camp for the night. Night came more quickly than usual. Braketh's men had been on edge since the old man's appearance. They finally stopped in a small grove of tree's, starting a fire the meal was cooked and eaten in silence. Watch was unnessecary for as they settled into bed and the first watch began. Demons ambushed their camp, lashing out with anything they could, claws, fangs and wicked weapons crafted from God only knows what. The battle was over before it began. Braketh and his men were caught off guard. Many fell where they had slept. Braketh swung his sword in a wide arc cutting down many of the vile creatures. After a long time of fighting the demons retreated disappearing into the woods surrounding the camp. Braketh was the only survivor, the rest had been massacered. Blood soaked the ground, he looked at the bodies of his loyal men. All of them dead. Thrown down like they were mere children. How could a force be that strong as to take out the finest men that Armor had to offer. Now he understood what his father had meant about sending him to his death. He had to get back to his father and warn him of the coming danger. But how he thought, if those beasts attacked again he would not make it. But this new discovery must not go untold.

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Well the backstory sounds strangely similar. KOA? 0.0

It'll be better if you could split them into sizeable chunks, not a whole paragraph. And I see you've encountered some problems with the BB codes. Just highlight the text you want to italize, bold or quote, them click the appropriate button.

Overall, pretty good. Carry on.

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Chapter I(continued)iscovery



The sun was starting to come up. But that was no comfort for Braketh as he walked across the dusty plains just north of Armor City. During his journey back from Dark Wood he had been attacked multiple times by demons. Blood ran down his face, making it hard to see. The gash on his head was deep, every breathe he took pain shot through. Making the journey even more unbarable. Braketh figured that being this close to Armor City, no demons would attack him. But that was no reason to let his guard down. Needing a rest he stopped and sat under the shade of a small oak tree. Braketh was still worried about the forces he had encountered. They struck out with hatred, so blinded by their own anger were the demons that they even struck down some of their own. Braketh knew those were not creatures of Armor. Darkness and shadow was their maker. He would have moved on but to tired was he to take another step. So he fell asleep under the oak.


Awakened was he by the sounds of battle. Wiping the crud from his eyes, he found one raging on the plain. A patrol of knights had engaged what appeared to be a small band of goblins. Not hesitating Braketh drew his sword and joined the battle, body aching with every blow he dealt. The battle ended, knights victorious with not a single casualty. Brakeths legs collapsed under him. He felt a hand on his shoulder. It's alright Brak, we'll take you back to the city but for now rest you look awful. Braketh found himself unable to resist the mans words.

He woke up in a comfortable bed, the gash on his head was bandaged but was still sore. His armor and sword sat on the table next to the door. The familiar tapestries hung on the walls. The door opened, in came a woman carrying a tray of hot food. Good morning master Braketh, how is your head feeling? Her voice was soft and had a tone of worry in it. Good morning Sarany my head is feeling much better. Where is my father? She sat the food on the table next to the armor and sword. He is in the great hall as always. But before you go any where you must eat. Braketh glared at her, I am not going to eat when an army of demons is heading this way. He thought, getting up from bed. Legs flaring with pain as he walked over to the table. Sarany knew her attempts were no good. She left the room without another word. Braketh put on his armor and grabbed his sword. Leaving his room behind, he walked down the left path and entered the great hall through open wood doors. Halder was sitting in his chair over looking the room. Braketh thought he looked a bit older than when his father had last spoke with him. His beard a bit greyer, or maybe it was just the light. Halder watched him as he walked over to the throne. My son, I see you are better. A great smile spread across his face. Father there is no time for my well being.... Son I know, Demon Lord Lonith brings his hordes to my kingdom. You are puzzled by my knowledge of this, but the hordes have already begun their march towards Armor City. Then we must take action, we can not wait for them to strike! Braketh was enraged at his fathers taking of this as small talk. How could he be so calm when the greatest force on all of Armor marched towards his home. We have faced many enemies before Braketh and our walls still stand. They are just another enemy and they will fail like all the others. Father these are not just another enemy. These are our greatest enemy, so strong are they that I am the only survivor of my patrol. So strong, all of my men, the best soldiers in all of Armor were crushed! If you think them just another enemy you are a fool! But still Halder was unhindered of Brakeths declarations. If they are as strong as you say. Then it would be foolish to face them on an open battle field. Make them bash down our gates. We will see how strong they are. Braketh realizing his fathers strategy and his own foolishness apologized and as he walked away Halder spoke. Rest my son, you will need your strength for the coming days.


Chapter II: The Siege of Armor City.


The day had come, battle was soon to begin. Braketh stood on the wall battlements, watching the enemy movements carefully. Just over one hundred yards away the strongest force known to man sat. It looked as if a black sea had formed in the night, cloudy it had been and the force had marched, they were noticed due only to the racket they had made. Feet stomping in time with the drums, blood lustful roars, clanking of steel on steel. If they were fully armed Braketh thought, the fight was going to be ten times harder than it was already going to be. The sun was just now starting to come up over the mountains. But the knights were already alert. The sight of the force was so great for some that they just, jumped off the walls. Braketh longed to walk out the gates and fight right now. To avenge his fallen comrades at Dark Wood. Vengeance would come soon enough he thought. Halder was standing on the wall as well. Seeing the forced made him cringe. But he was not worried, or at least did not show it to his loyal soldiers. He walked among the men asking them how their families were. Encouraging them not to worry. Braketh wondered how his father had come to do this. And was rather jealous of the ability. The effect of it on the soldiers was amazing. What had been a silent and almost grieving bunch of men. Became a talkative and some what cheerful one. Seeing their King was not worried made them more confident. Braketh moved down off the wall. Archers took his place, as did cauldrons of oil, and large grates of fire were distributed evenly between the rows. Braketh hoped that the demons weren't fire proof as well. Talk the men stopped, a roar errupted from over the wall. Though Braketh could not see he knew what was going on. The siege had begun. Earth shook as hordes of demons charged across it. Braketh found room for himself on the wall. The spectacle below was terrifying. Demons were running at a dead sprint for the walls. Some dropped their weapons as to run on all fours. Trampled were others that could not run as fast. Hundreds of them died before any attack had begun. A voice rang out over the bedlam below. Ready your bows, three second pause, aim, then two seconds passed, FIRE!. The hum of a hundred bow strings sounded. And a hundred arrows hissed like snakes. All found their targets. Striking down many, tripping over their dead many more demons were trampled. The stampede was unabashed, none looked back. Smashing into the wall at full force, the gate did not move under the force of the blow. Arrows still rained down upon them, the demons seeing that their attempt had failed. Began climbing on top of eachother, forming a ladder of steel. And so the pots of oil were dumped over the edge of the wall, screams came as the heat burned them. The archers dipped their arrow heads in the grates of fire and they shot them into the horde. More crys of pain rang out as the fires burnt their flesh. The fire spread throughout the enemy and they were forced to retreat. As they cleared away from the walls the dead were easily numbered. Piles of bodies were laying against the wall. The smell of burnt flesh came over the wall as a breeze blew. The first attack had been stopped and the men cheered as the demon horde grew silent once again. Braketh did not cheer with the men, not even a smile. For he was watching the enemy. Splitting into two groups a large black figure stood in the gap between them. The men silenced once again. What is that thing? A man standing close to Braketh had whispered. That my friend is the battering ram. Braketh ran down the steps, sword drawn. He stood in front of the gate, sword held out before him. All the men that were not on the wall did the same. The figure in the gap stood motionless, as if it were a statue. Swiftly it took off towards the gate. Without command the archers fired, arrows sunk in to its flesh, but it did not stop, it did not show any sign of pain. The black beast was at the gate in seconds, slamming into the stone, but unlike its lesser brothers it found results. The stone gate flew open, the stone bars running acrossed it were shattered. The force of the gate hitting against the walls knocked some of the men off. Swinging it's arms like giant clubs the beast knocked several men into the walls. It picked up two more and smashed them together. Another it ripped in half, men from the walls above jumped onto the back, stabbing their swords deep in flesh. At this it let out a roar of pain. Braketh and many others began to hack it as well. Blood flew from every part of the beasts body. Ripping several other knights apart the beast finally fell. Thank god it had died, Braketh thought. Men carrying shields and spears rushed over to the gate entrance, making a new wall. They readied for the next attack. But that attack did not come. The demons had formed back into one large group, but were still unmoving. With this small respite from fighting the men built a makeshift gate of wood. Braketh helped carry the wounded into the castle. The sun went down, but the demons did not attack as was expected. Braketh thought this to be rather odd. Why had the demons not attacked, here was their chance to take the city and they did not act. The night was short, and before Braketh knew it the sun was up. Braketh had slept in his armor, so incase of an attack he was ready. He once again was standing on the wall watching his enemy. The force seemed to have grown over night, or so it seemed from afar. Braketh went back down to find his father. Halder was sitting on a stool near one of the many campfires. Braketh walked over and sat on a stool next to his father. Son the siege will end today. Halder was looking at him intently. You must take the army and escape. Father I will not abandon you, either will your men. If you fall in battle they will follow. Listen to me son I am old, to old to be fighting wars. My royal guard will stay behind with me. The city has already been evacuated to the mountain fortress. Take the army their, the demons will be hard pressed to find it. For it is hidden well against the mountain side. Braketh knew his father would not be swayed. His word was final. So he gathered the forces of Armor City and began the march to Baldron Fortress. Leaving his father and the royal guard behind to face there death.

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Looks good, but it would be alot better if you would:

A) Split it down into smaller parts, instead of one big chunk
B) separate speaking ex:

[quote]Son the siege will end today. Halder was looking at him intently. You must take the army and escape. Father I will not abandon you, either will your men.quote]

"Son the siege will end today." Halder was looking at him Intently. "You must take the army and escape."
"Father I will not abandon you, neither will you men." Breketh said

This way, you can tell who is saying what, instead of wondering why one person has split personalitys

Other than that, it looks good. Maby you should add other people from Armorgames? But you should know them. It would be akward if you had sombody in their and they were total;ly differnt then they were in real life.

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Length the paragraphs better. Some paragraphs are triple the size of others. Also, indent at the beginning. That should make it look proper.

Good work on the story so far

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Sorry if the length of each chapter varies greatly I'm still trying to figure out what size they should be, and same with the paragraph length.




Chapter III: Flight




Three days passed since the Siege of Armor City.
The mountains were just coming into view. Braketh believed it would be two days more before they reached Baldron Fortress. He wondered what had happened to his father and the royal guard as well. No demons had been spotted since the battle. Could his father actually have stood against them? "King Braketh." A scout approached on horse back. "Yes what is it?" Braketh glanced back. "There is a demon scouting party heading this way." [/i[i]]"How big is the party? Braketh had now drawn his sword. "They number thirty and are moving quickly my lord, as if some dark force is pushing them. We have an hour or so to prepair, maybe even less than that." Braketh nodded and the scout road off. What are we going to do. He thought to himself. It would be hard enough to hide the supply wagons and horses, let alone eight thousand men. There was no chance of out running the beasts. And another engagement, even with the lopsided forces would prove fatal. Braketh left sixty men behind, all experienced and well trained. But this was just a tactic to slow the enemy. Braketh knew that marching would be brutal on his men, for if they were to outrun the demons. It would have to bewithout stopping. Turning his horse around, the army haulted before him. "My commrades, our march from here on will be long and hard. The enemy is close, outrunning them means we must march until we reach Baldron Fortress. Do not stop for anything unless told to by me or a superior. If a wagon breaks down, leave it." Braketh turned his horse back around. The march had begun. Many considered this foolish of him. But he knew it was the right thing to do. For where there was an enemy scouting party, the main force was not far behind. Braketh knew that his men would follow orders given. For how long was the real question though. Hardened they were, going days without food and rest was doable. Yet Braketh was not his father, now being king would they be as loyal for him as they had Halder for all those years?


Hours passed and the march went without incident. Braketh seeing how tired his men were got off his horse and offered it to one of the soldiers. Falling in rank with the men he marched along side them. A scout reported that the main force for the demons was close now. Having tasted blood once again they marched faster, never taking breaks. But the scout had also reported that the force was half the size it had been while at Armor City. Braketh knew this was bad, where could the other half run off to. They finally came under shadow of mountains. Not stopping for fear of attack. The men marched faster seeing that they were close to Baldron. As they entered the pass that led to Baldron the other half of the demon army reared its ugly head. Striking from inside the pass. Braketh realized that Baldron was already conquered. That enemy forces had charged around his own and destroyed Baldron. Braketh called an immediate retreat out of the pass. But before a third of the force could get out. The rest of demon forces closed off all escape slaughtering every last one of them. Braketh seeing his forces were out numbered led them into the forests near the mountains. When they finally stopped running there were less than two thousand left. So tired he and his men, all collapsed. Braketh found that when he woke up most of his men did not. Many had died from exhaustion and or a lack of food. Now less than a thousand were still breathing.

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Well this is nice, but you really should stress that this belongs to you....

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Thanks for reminding me I would have forgotten.



This is a product of Braketh and no one else. In other words it belongs to me. So no one can take it. Special thanks to Gametesta for reminding me to tell you all this.

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When you are all done with the story you should really look into getting this published!

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Chapter IV: The Meeting.


Braketh and his men were out of options. So far the demons had not attacked them. Establishing a new camp they hoped to remain hidden for a few days longer before setting off for another fortress. "My lord, the old man from Armor City is back." Askath one of the few that had survived from the first siege had recognized the old man. "Let him in." Braketh sat in his tent. A single candle lit the room, casting a shadow on Brakeths face. The tent flap opened again. Standing before him was the old man. Face obscured by his deep hood. Black rodes torn at the fringe staff still in hand. He walked with no support from the staff. Sitting down without request. "Once again we meet Braketh. I see you are doing well." His voice was strong and deep. "I am fine, but my men are not. Most of them are dead. If you haven't noticed." Braketh looked into what he thought were the man's eyes. "I have come to bring you good news my friend. Bane is alive, he brings with him a force of Dark Elves. They march from the north and are expecting a warm welcome at Baldron Fortress." The man lowered his hood. Revealing black pointed hair, and eyes blood red. As was common with magic folk. "Have the demons not spotted the force that approachs?" Braketh was shocked to here of Bane's survival. "Of course they do Braketh. Nothing escapes the eyes of the Demon Lord. Our meeting now is under his watch. Your camp is not safe, he does not attack because he wishes to see you attack him at Baldron." "I would never attack him there it is an impregnable fortress." Braketh was appalled at the thought of such a move. "Then you will die here in this forest. If you do not attack within the week, demons will surround your camp. Burn the woods they will, and with that you will burn." And once again as quickly as the man had come he dissappeared, the same flash of light from Armor City. Braketh stood and walked out into the camp. The smell of cooked pork made his mouth water. At least someone was getting a nice meal. Braketh walked through the camp looking for a scout. Finding one he stopped near the scout's fire. "Yes Braketh, what is it you need?" The scout was now standing. Looking at Braketh, ready for any orders his master were to give him. I need you to travel east until you exit the woods. Then head north, Bane and an army of Dark Elves should be on their way to Baldron. Bring Bane here, I must speak with him." The scout dissappeared into the woods without sound, or question of his orders. Braketh went back to his tent, took off his armor and let sleep consume him.



Chapter IV(continued): The Meeting. (Things to come.)




Braketh fell to his knees, the smell of burning flesh burnt his nostrils and turned the stomach. All his men were dead except he of course. Every last one of them, and before him stood the Demon Lord, armor black, two fiery orbs where eyes should be. In his hand he carried a great sword black like the armor. Demons stood in a circle around him and Braketh. Yelling some vile chant from a language long forgot. Defeat overwhelmed Braketh as the Demon Lord stepped forward. There was only one thing to do. Braketh knew it, he had to fight this foul being. If he wanted to live this Lord must be defeated. Standing with the help of his own sword. No words exchanged, the Demon Lord charged Braketh. Sword raised high above his head. Braketh blocked the strike, the force sent him sliding backward. He then launched his own attack. Swinging for the devils head. But this blow did nothing. The Demon Lord blocked it unmoved by its force. The two dueled back and forth. Both striking harder and harder with each new offensive. Braketh began to feel the strain of fighting. The Lord seemed to sap his strength with every new attack. He knew death would come soon. Now he was just trying to block each attack, to stay alive another second. The Demon struck faster and faster. Finally the Lord landed a hit. Cutting Braketh across his right leg, and then the left. Once again Braketh fell to his knees. A voice came from the faceless helmet shaking the earth. "Your attempts to defeat me have been futile. I was expecting more of a challenge than this. Yet here you are, like many other heroes before. Kneeling at my superior strength." Braketh laughed at this, looking up into the burning eyes of the Demon Lord. "You are more ignorant than I expected Demon Lord. For everyone knows that I kneel to no one. Not even the Gods themselves." "If you do not kneel before me then you shall die!" The Demon Lord roared, walking to Braketh's side. Braketh lowered his head wishing his legs were still intact. The Lord raised his weapon, bringing it down swiftly......


Braketh jumped up from his bed unnerved by this nightmare. "My Lord, Bane has arrived." A scout was standing at the entrance to Brakeths tent. "Very good let him in." Braketh's breath was still uneven, heart still pumping from the nightmare that had seemed so real. Hopefully this was not among things to come.

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Chapter V: The Battle of Baldron.




Brakeths army now sat on the plains just outside the shadow of the mountains. Bane and his force had joined Brakeths and they were preparing for an assault on the Fortress of Baldron. Dust danced across the plains, sounds of preparation were everywhere. The mens morale was stabalizing, having had a few days of food and rest his soldiers came ready to fight. And with news of Bane's dark elf army they felt hope of winning a fight against the demon hordes. This task was daunting and seemed rather impossible Braketh thought. Though he would never admit this to his men. Even with the Dark Elf forces their number was still under ten thousand. Braketh still wondered how Bane had stumbled upon this force. But Bane had told him it was a story for another day, if they had another that is. It was nearing noon when Braketh called forth his armies. The pass leading to Baldron was visible from where they had camped. And was less than a mile away from them. Braketh, being at the point of the army was the first to pass through into the mountain pass. Walls of stone rose up towering over him on each side. Fifty yards between the walls. But his force was small enough for this pass. They were well equipped for a battle here. Where as the demons had numbers uncountable. Braketh doubted that even the Demon Lord knew the size of his own force. Chills ran down his spine thinking of such a Lord. If his dream were to come true it would not be hear. Braketh recalled the dream clearly. An open plain was where that battle had been fought. No trees in sight, only the dead. Yet where could it be. Braketh figured he would know soon enough. He no longer rode a horse, for it had died during the ambush in the pass days ago. Baldron came into view, high up nestled against the side of mountains. A ramp led to the main gate. A force of demons equal in size to Brakeths own stood at the base of the ramp. Waiting for an enemy to attack. Howls came from amongst them as they spotted fresh blood. Ready to fight, they waited for Braketh's men to charge. Fortunatly, Braketh thought, demons lacked the need for bows and arrows. His force would be safe from volleys off the ramp and inside the fortress. "Charge!" Braketh yelled raising his weapon. His men ran forward, weapons drawn and ready for a fight to the death. The demons followed suit and began to charge at Braketh's forces. Thunder errupted as the two forces collided. Echoing throughout the entire pass. Sounds of steel meeting steel rang out along with those of steel meeting flesh. Men and demon alike screamed in pain as they were cut down. Braketh was suprised at how well the offensive was going. Pushing back the demons, his men were exilerated. Distracted, Braketh was knocked down, a demon fell on top of him. Tearing at his throat, but he was unable to get the beast off. It slashed it's claws deep into his arms. Teeth sank in as well. Braketh let out a cry of pain. Now the demon was locked on. Brakeths arms were the only thing keeping it from ripping out his throat. Finally the demons grip loosened as a spear pierced through its back. Braketh was dragged back behind his ranks. Unable to move his arms, trying not to scream in pain. His vision was blurred. And he began to lose conciousness. The sounds of battle were the last he heard as his eyes shut tight.



The man in black robes walked along the top of the cliffs. A battle raged below him, deep inside the pass. Screams could be heard even this high up. He stopped just above the demon force. Grabbing his staff tightly in both hands the man in robes spoke the words of old. As he did so a black cloud formed just above the mountain. A single bolt of lightning flashed from within the cloud striking the rocky wall opposite the mage. Cracks ripped through it, small pieces began to fall. Sounds of battle stopped as all turned to watch the spectacle overhead. The demons realized what was happening and began to retreat back to the gates which now stood open. But they were to late. A ton of rock crushed them into the ground. At least this will give Braketh and his men a break. The man in black thought as he dissapeared in a flash of light.


Braketh awoke to the sound of thunder and the falling of rocks. His men cheered as the demons were crushed under them. Still unable to move his arms he fell back asleep. Hoping the next time his eyes opened he would be inside of Baldron.



Braketh found himself standing on the plain again. But this time the bodies of demons were strewn across it instead of his mens. The Demon Lord was on his knees. But Braketh saw this dream to the end. He raised his sword above his head, bringing it down hard upon the Lords neck. The Demon Lords head severed easily from his body. Cheers of victory rang out from his men as he held the head up for all to see. Hopefully this was among the things to come. Braketh thought as his eyes opened to a blinding light.

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That was awesome braketh.

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Glad you enjoyed it, the next chapter will soon be finished.

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i cant wait for it.

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Chapter VI:Chapter VI: The help of a friend.



A healer stood over Braketh. Dabbing his face with a wet cloth. Infection was spreading through his body. Burning heat radiated off of him. But the healer knew that he could not help Braketh. This sickness was one of magic. Some type of poison must have been on the demons claws. If they did not find the man in black robes Braketh would die. And so search parties were sent out. Scoring the land for any hint at the man. No demons had attacked since their defeat at Baldron. None were spotted during the search either. Braketh had three days, or so the healer thought. But after two days his breath became shallow, pale and cold his skin. A report came back to Baldron of a tower deep in Vale Wood. Inside the tower they found the man. Upon hearing of Braketh's sickness he immediately teleported to Baldron. Entering the room he walked to Braketh's bedside. Speaking words of magic long forgotten he touched Braketh on the forehead. The healer stood in the doorway, watching. The man looked up at the healer. "He will wake soon, give him water. He will be able to fight immediately upon awakening. So do not worry if he gets up." The man left the room. And as he had said, Braketh woke within the hour.



It had been over three days since Braketh had recovered from the magical poison. He was surprised to hear that no demons had been seen. Where could they have gone, he thought. As Bane approached a worried look on his face. "Braketh, a messenger from the Dark Elf nation brings word of demons raiding their villages. Since I am commander of the Dark Elf forces I think it my personal responsibily to go and aid them." "I trust your judgement Bane go, do what you must. But do not die, for I will need your strength in the journey ahead." Bane nodded and left the room. It pained him to lose the Dark Elf allies. For they made up most of the army. Now his force once again numbered less than a thousand. And so Braketh fell right into the trap of his enemy. The Dark Elf messenger was not a Dark Elf at all. But a mere illusion, the Dark Elf villages were perfectly safe from the demons. Braketh had no choice but to wait for Bane and his army to return. For if they planned to assault the lair of the Demon Lord. A much larger force would be needed. The man in robes returned during his wait for Bane. The two sat in the Baldron library. "You have saved me and my mens lives many a time. Shall you tell me your name?" Braketh sat back in his chair arms folded. "If you must know friend, I am Rianbron one of the last magical beings in Armor. Besides the Demon Lord that is. I have come to tell you of a way to defeat the Demon Lord." Braketh leaned forward, this caught his attention. "There is no way to defeat him. I can barely kill the demon spawn let alone their creator." "There is a blade, hidden deep within this mountain. I do not know where. But I do know where the entrance to the mountain is." "How can a blade destroy a being so powerful?" "It is no ordinary blade Braketh. It has been blessed by the gods. And was carried by your ancestors. It is the blade that destroyed the Demon Lord all those years ago. That is why he attacked Baldron." "You said he watchs our every move. Then he will attack again, now that he knows the blade is here." "You are right Braketh, that is why I will defend Baldron. While you search for it." The plan was set. Braketh and a few select men would go in search for the legendary blade. While what was left of his force, and Rianbron would defend against the inevitable attack. Braketh and his party of six followed Rianbron down into the cellar of Baldron. Barrels sat everywhere, some full, most empty. Rianbron walked to the far end of the cellar. Placing both hands on the wall. Whispering something, unrecognizable to Braketh. The wall cracked where Rianbron's hands were. And it fell to pieces, revealing a dark tunnel. "This is where I leave you Braketh. You can not fail. For you are the last member of the family line. If you die the blade will be useless. Good luck my friend." "I will not fail, that is not an option." Braketh stepped into the tunnel. Followed by his six companions. What lurkes in these dark passages, Braketh asked himself as he walked deeper in.

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Chapter VII: Search for the Holy Blade.





Braketh and his men were deep in the tunnels below Baldron. The darkness was eating at them. Making their nerves unbearable. His torch light only went so far. Creatures ran across the fringe. Staying out of the light yet getting close enough to be seen. They were not harmful creatures, just curious at the strange beings who entered their long forgotten home. Some brushed against the men. As they walked farther Braketh saw lights. Coming from an opening far away. Closer they came to the light. Sounds of chanting could be heard now. Deep monotone, voices, speaking in the same language as Rianbron. Could there be others like Rianbron down here. Surely not, Braketh thought. If they were he hoped they were friends and not foes. Braketh passed his torch to one of his men. Drawing his sword, clasping it so tight his knuckles turned white. He realized that the creatures were no longer watching them. They were far back now, not daring to go towards the bright light in the tunnel ahead. Braketh raised a hand ordering his men to halt. He crept toward the lit opening. The chanting was loud now. Drowning out all sounds, his footsteps were unheard. He put his back to the wall peering around the opening. The bright light made it impossible to see. Braketh's eyes adjusted, revealing a large chamber carved into the mountain. At it's center stood a cirlce of hooded figures, all in white. They seemed to be staring at the center of the circle. Where the light was emanating. Though Braketh could not see what was causing the light he knew it was something important. Braketh sheathed his sword, ordering his men to follow. They walked down the steps. Braketh was looking around the chamber, at the unrecognizable symbols. Trying to decipher their meanings. When he realized that the chanting had stopped. Looking back at the circle of men, they were all staring at him. One of the men stepped forward. "What business do you have here?" He seemed to be the leader. Braketh scratched his head as he spoke. "Uh, I've come for the Holy Blade of Barret." The man looked around at the others. Whispers came from within the circle of men. "We have been awaiting your arrival." The man who seemed to be leader walked over to the light in the center. "This blade has been under our watchful eyes for a very long time. We have been expecting this visit for several weeks now. Ever since your father contacted us." Braketh looked at them suspiciously. "You have spoken with my father, he is alive?" The man spoke again, sorrow in his voice. "I am afraid not, we have contact with the spirit world. That is where your father told us of your coming." Tears welled in Braketh's eyes at the news of his fathers death. The man looked at him. "Do not cry young soldier you have a war to fight. Take the blade and leave this place. But be aware, those creatures you saw in the dark tunnel will attack you. For meer prescence of it will drive them insane." Braketh wiped the tears from his eyes and walked to the center of the circle. Reaching into the bright light he grabbed hold of the blade. Raising it into the air. Power ran through his veins, it was his to wield. Braketh stepped out of the circle. The men disappeared, Braketh led his men up the stairs. Back through the tunnel. The creatures were easily seen now. With no place to hide their grotesque figures were visible. All bore long sharp claws, and fangs that reflected the light. But they did not attack Braketh. The blade protected him. His men were not though, they lunged at them. Claws ready, Braketh swung out at them. Trying to protect his men. But there were to many of the monsters. They were torn to pieces no chance at a counter attack. All of them died, accept for Braketh. When he reached the cellar of Baldron again. The battle had begun. The door to the hidden tunnel closed, Braketh ran out of the cellar to the gate. Where the battle was being fought. Cheers rang out as their lord appeared. Braketh rushed into the battle. The demons ran every time he got close. Some he cut down, but most fled. Before he had killed ten of them. The demons called a retreat. Rianbron appeared next to Braketh. "I see you made it out Braketh." Braketh smiled at him. "Yes, and the blade I have brought with me." "They will return once their Lord has arrived. The final battle is in sight. Their strike will be relentless with their master leading them in person." Braketh looked out across the bloody and body strewn field. "Let him come, I wish to fight him."

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