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Alright, this is allowed right? If not, a mod can lock it...



Anyways, I'm doing this because I feel that my previous thread for my work is being brought down by *cough* 'lesser' works that I had done without really focusing on the affect(s) it would generate, or simply put, if they were 'good'(because greatness is irrelative). I'll just put the new works that I really work hard on here, along with the previous ones that I view as 'acceptable'(what is really acceptable anyways? What with the world as it is...). Enjoy...

Thanks once again to Nichodemus for encouraging me to make the first thread (I got your name right this time :P, maby you should look at YOUR OP :P). Haha...
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Published: June 15 '09 at 1:10 PM

Rise of the Lycans
By: Mav

And where do they go?
That is a secret no one may know.

Plundering Murdering Lycan Thieves
Who blend with stone
And meld with trees

GLinting eyes and mottled fur
Appear like nightmare
Vanish like smoke

What steals upon the silent air
Razor fangs and hidden claws
A deadly killer lieing there

No one living can hide from thee
O those who tread invisibly
Cross hill and dell, wood and stone
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Published: June 18 '09 at 9:29 AM

Wondering
By: Mav

Sitting here today,
Wondering what price I have to pay.
A though, an idea, its all I want!
But still the words just sit and taunt.

And still, I ask, shall I continue?
Before I chance to offend you?
Words that used to flow quite nice
Now instead have turned to ice.

The inspiration that was my flame,
Has gone out, and i must blame;
Was it fear or lack of skill?
These harsh words oh do they kill

Alas, I know not my fate
And I fear that I may be too late
Tendrils escaping afore they begin
And to this all i say is 'fin'
---
(revised edition)
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Published: Jun 22 '09 at 2:41 PM

Uprising
By: Mav

Sitting in the quiet night
I watch them as they pass
Preparing for the final fight
awaiting the command

A silent hush besets us all
Like the quiet before the storm
Wondring what will happen to us all
For we are slaves no more!

Come to exact our deadly fee
Upon our overlords
As we race towards the melee
War cries ringing out

Slashing claw and gnashing fang
The skirmish rages on
The fight for our freedom hangs
By a single thread

Crimson blood staings their milky skin
And gruesome wounds we sport
But the Vampire's line is getting thin
And soon they turn and flee

We give chase with howls of glee
And hunt the Vampire scum
But sadly none of us could see
The trap t'was being sown

We chase them towards a shade glen
We fought with the magnificent thought
That we would surely win
But oh were we wrong

Before we knew what was going on
We were all surrounded!
We had all thought that we had won!
The cause was surely lost

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Published: Jun 22 '09 at 6:39 PM

Something in Nothing
By: Mav

A shadow in the night
No one knows my plight
Muddling my mind
It is everything but kind

It is unique to all
But all of man will fall
Creepy, crawly, skuttling things
Those horrible, ghastly paings

With nothing to fear
But no one will hear
Enclosed in their mind
To be free all you need is someone Kind
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Published: Jun 28 '09 at 5:13 PM

Lost
By: Mav
Turning round and round
I don't know where I am
Hoping to be found
I am lost

To survive is my goal
To die is not
And deep down my soul
Knows that I am lost

Seeking shelter, food, and hope
I wander this lonely place
But soon i sit and mope
Because I am lost.

Wandering round this wood
Wildlife scared at my pressence
This situation is not good
For I am still lost

Yet suddenly in the air
My wildest dreams revealed
A person came that really care'd
I am lost no more

The helicopter that saved my life
Took me to my home
It ended alot of strife
But in the urban jungle...

I am lost
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Published: Jun 28 '09 at 5:38 PM

Up
By: Mav

Standing in line just waiting
The advertisements baiting
Snaring you in like a hungry fish
Saying it is all you wish

Happy thoughts flood through my mind
But soon do I find
That I'm in front of the line
The pilot reassures me that I'll be fine

Rising higher, higher, higher still
My worst nightmare is now fulfilled
In this ballon above the ground
A shred of courage cannot be found

Eyes shut tight
I ponder my plight
Till the pilot says where going down
And soon we begin heading towards the town

With clammy hands and a pale face
I sit and wonder about my case
And when we land and I can leave
I hop off and through the crowd I weave

Looking back to that day
With regret all I can say
Should have I just glimpsed down
I could have seen the whole town...
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Published: Jul 2 '09 at 6:01 PM

Im not buying it...
By: Mav

Billy May's Here!
At the tv I Peer
Sighing outloud at what I hear

You should buy Sham-Wow!
I want to give you a Pow!
Just so i can hear you say ow...

...so you should Buy!
I want to cry
Advertising makes me die
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Published: Jul 6 '09 at 11:05 AM

Lead Rain
By: Mav

On the Western Front
To the East of Normandy
American Troops seek refuge
Against the a'cursed rain

Thunder booms out
But not a cloud can be seen
The Men cower in fox holes
And seek protection from the rain

There home on the front
The holes where they hide
Can be there grave too
If the rain hits them

The thunder gets lounder
Men prepare for the worst
And hope for the best
And pray the rain doesnt come

Death comes quick
To those who are hit
By the rain unawares
And unprepared

Like shrieking pipers
The rain comes
And hits the ground
With a lound boom

Trees explode and
Dirt is kicked up
Where men used to be
A smoking crater lies

Wounded men scream
Cries of 'medic' ring out
And yet the rain still comes
And comes and comes

And then the rain stops
The storm is over
And men sink into their holes
To await the next storm
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Published: Jul 6 '09 at 3:44 PM

Marching On
By: Mav

Dissapointed faces
Stand out like a wart
on the tip of a nose

I give it all I got
But it sometimes isnt
Enough to carry on

Writing all the time
Yet mediocre reigns
Over all my poems

This could be the end
It would not surprise me
If I dont continue this legacy

To re-write history was the aim
But somebody always beats me
Like a worn-out drum

Yet I continue on
Renewing forgotten paths
Instant gratification

But people notice
My poor attempts
And still I write

I write of what
Ever I feel and think
In sickness or health

People leave comments
Good or bad
It all helps to keep me going

I continue forging
Out old trails
And forsaking new ones

To be unique
In this same world
I think I still believe that

Yet all veiw me as the same
Another guy trying to survive
And crashing, and burning

Through the wind-blown ashes
I reneiw my life
Like a phoenix

And the game continues
The anthem still plays
And I still continue this old beat

Like water soiled with oil
I am clear deep down
But muddied at the surface

As a flame dies down
And is forever extinguished
All writers must go

Yet this is not a farewell
As much as past recollections
When the weight of it all was lighter

And we all hope
That people will look back and say
Your just like Nicho, Alt, Jezz(ss), or Gantic

And your name included
Like the ringing bell
Brings you notice

Depressing this sounds
Yet happy at the core
A beacon in the night

Words are immortal
Yet people are not
And the people write the continuing, the immortal

By writing I hope
I can create a legacy
Of my own

And stray from renewing
And to begin forging
New paths

So I shall March On
To the same old beat
And resilient I will be
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Published: Jul 8 '09 at 6:53 PM

Books
By: Mav

Reading a book
Thats got me hooked

It takes me to unknown places
And lets me see brand new faces

Riding along side heros or
In a cafe, watching it pour

When ever I begin to read
Magical images to my mind feed

Where will I go
I do not know

So I open that book
To get Hooked
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Published: Jul 10 '09 at 9:30 PM

Lost and Gone
By: Mav

Growin' inside me
That hated thing
It controled my life
And through fear it reign'd

Emotions outside and
a monster within
The woe's its caused
From them I can't hide

Trying to fix and
Searching in me
It controlled my life
Its demise It could not forsee

The war is waged
My hatred at the boil
Its life is mine
My hands its blood will soil

Lost and gone
That part of me
Its crazed eyes
I will never see

I wont look back
I wont shed tears
Lost and gone...
Now I have no fear

(Authors Note: The poem has no relation what-so-ever to the song 'Dead and Gone'
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Published: Jul 16 '09 at 11:13 AM

A Life In A Day
By: Mav

Thirty Seconds!
Till the gate drops foward
Putting us out on the beach

The cliff-face is silent
No movement seen
Maby they all ran away...

Twenty Seconds!
The tension builds
Whumps of shelling in the background

Ten Seconds!
Then hell is unleashed
On this god-dammed beach

Five Seconds!
The bosun screams out
And still the cliff are silent

Drop!
The gate falls down
And the cliffs come alive

Bullets ping off the sides
And the men in front fall
And the bullets still come

We burst into flame
And jump over the side
To stay alive...a bit longer

Wading through the waves
Like sitting ducks
We get picked off

The tide turns crimson
The bodies float
And we cower behind eachother

Mother! Mother!
Some kid cries out
He soon stops...

A LCT* explodes
Raining shrapnel and
Body parts on us

A man walks around
Holding his disembered arm
He ask us where it is

We make a break
For farther up the beach
Only three of us make it

We race up the beach
And see some men
Pinned up behind a wall
We dive next to them
To avoid getting hit
The guy next to me has no head...

Pshooooooowww!
The Rangers launch there rockets
At the point

Krauts drop grenades
As they climb
Blowing them off the ladders

Dirt puffs up
And yet they still miss us
Behind this wall

A guy dashes over
And dives
And hits a mine
It blows his chin off
And moans out
He's gone within the hour

A day in the life
A life in a day
On Omaha beach

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I'm writing the second part to 'Shadow in the Night'. I'll be done in about 45 mins to an hour.

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Shadow in the Night

Part Two: Semper Fi; Always Faithful

"I'm sorry Mr-ah,..." The Police Sergeant looked down at the form he was filling out. "Huang, but we are all tied up right now"

The police station was filled with stiffling heat from the after sun. The whirling fans did little to counter the heat. Mr Huangs face was a ruddy red with rage, possibly adding to the tempature in the building.

Mr. Huang forced hisself to remain calm.

"Did I mention that my body guard was murdered"? Mr. Huang spoke tersely. "And that my wife and I were rudely awakend in the middle of the night"?

"And that your guard has a history of heart problems"? Countered the Sergeant. "The autopsy showed he died from heart failure. Mr. Huang, I'll see if we can work on this, but I'm not promising anything-"

He stopped because Mr Huang had already walked out of the station, but not before dialing a number in his pocket and letting it ring three times before hanging up. Mr. Huang owed his financial sucess and power to his ties in the Chinese Mafia. Any opponents who could steal his promotion, or clients unwilling to sign with the bank had had several gruesome accidents. The most recent of which was a bear accident in the Rockies, several hours from LA.

The Sergeant sighed with relief as Huang walked out the station. He pulled the wad of bills out from his pocket, held together with a ruber band. 5.000 US Dollars, cash. The bribe was such an addition to a cops pay that it was nuts not to accept it. Or so Jerald, the Police Sergeant in the outskirts of LA thought so when he accepted it.

A bead of persperation slid down Jerald's forehead. Never again... He thought, sliding the money back into his pocket. He would visit the local Wachovia after his shift and get rid of the money.

Why did I not bother to find out who was even sending the money?
He thought again. All he got was the money in his mail box and a note that read:

'Do NOT take up anycase Huang brings to you or you will face the consequences...'

He was quite surprised by the message, and happily took the money and thought no more of it.

Jerald was even more suprised when a bullet hit him right between the eyes, not that he was even alive to realize it.

(srry it was kinda short, Im really, really busy)
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The next part will be longer, and will be out this weekend sometime. Maby Friday it I'm lucky, Monday it not. Mostlikely Saturday or Sunday.

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And...

nobody post. Just Ignore the huge wall of test! PWEASE!!!

[s]dang[/s]

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Good one. Keep it up, don't be discouraged when people don't post. I started out that way, perhaps even more pathetically.

And unforunately, the thread isn't, but I am a pathetic loser. *hate hate*

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If life gave you something, and that something was nothing..

'Something' is 'something' and 'nothing' is 'nothing'. 'Something' is not 'nothing' and 'nothing' is not 'something'. The only thing 'something' and 'nothing' have in commen is 'thing', and since 'thing' is obviously a random object whose origin we cannot know, 'thing' is quite most certainly 'something'. There fore, assuming that 'thing' really is 'something', then 'something' is 'nothing' and 'nothing' is 'something'. Along the same viewpoint, Rich is poor and poor is rich. Therefore, having nothing means really having something, and welfare checks are now obsolete.

-My tribute to Douglas Adams

'I teleported home one night,
With Ron and Sid and Meg.
Ron stole Meggies' heart away,
And I got Sidneys' leg.'


Excerpt from 'The Resturant at the End of the Universe', used without permission.

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Sneaky Little Boy
Hiding In An Apple Tree
Sir Newton Sits Down...

(from 'Creative Writing Exercises' By Lady Turtle Toes)

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Shadows in the Night

Part Three: Live by the Sword...

If anybody ever walked into the Public Library, located across the street from the police station, they would have seen a large collection of old books, freezing air conditioning, even in the winter, and a sleeping librarian.

If they ever decided to sneak past the librarian, ignore the 'Employees Only' sign, and go to the roof, they would have seen several large AC units, vents, and 2 generators. If anybody decided to go on top of the roof after the murder of the Police Sargeant, would have found a single cartridge to a L115A3 Sniper Rifle.

The L115A3 Sniper Rifle fires an 8.59mm bullet which is heavier than the 7.62mm round of the previous L96 and hence less likely to be deflected over extremely long ranges. Put the 6.8kg rifle in the right hands and it can hit a human-sized target from 1400 metres.

It was a wonder the round, from such a close prozimity of only 75 feet, hadn't blown Jeralds head off.

Right now, the assasin-cum-burgular was walking about 3,000 miles away in New York City. After flying bussiness class to La Guardia International Airport, the Gentleman was standing in an alleyway just off of Broad Way.

The Gentleman got his name for two reasons. One, because in his profession, if anybody knew your real name, you were as good as dead. And two, because he had a habit of not killing people in his assignments unless told other wise. He had been told in his previous assignment to kill the Guard, but not the Huangs.

When most 'employers' learn that the Gentleman rarely killed people, they think that he's soft or shows too much mercy. The reason why the Gentleman really rarely kills people is because the Gentleman suffers from a large ego. You bust in somebody room in the middle of the night, scare the crap out of them, and let them live, the victims will spread stories about how the Gentleman came into their room.

Over time, these stories will become exagerated, warped by the many people telling them, and it goes from busting in to lifting the roof off with a helicopter and dropping in.

The Gentleman, whose real Name was Ian Swartzkoph, was a quite, mild-mannered man, in his late twentys.. He was a fisherman, working on various boats fishing for swords. On the off season, he was a painter, and most people, after leaving his small yet homely apartment, remember most distinclty the mounds of impressionist art, and Ian's distinct hatred of any classical pieces.

The apartment where Ian lived was small, only 3 rooms, and contained worn but comfortable peices of furnature. Scattered throughout the apartment were stacks of art, Ians own creation. Worn Chairs, shelves, almost every availible surface had atleast something that related to Ians art.

Ian was reclining on his sofa, above which hung a large taxidermied swordfish. It was a monster, nearly 14 feet long, which Ian had caught when he was a mere boy, only 17 years old. The fishing trip had been a gift from his late father, pennace for the missed birthdays, child alimonies, and holidays that resulted from his dad living in Nevada after his parents divorce when Ian was 9.

His first kill was his father.

Over the years, termites had invaded the apartment building where Ian lived. They had eaten through the wood supports of the building, and eventually into parts of the walls. It was just bad luck that the section of wall supporting the stuffed sword fish had deterioted from a combination of dry rot, old age, and termites. While Ian was napping on the couch, the wall eventually gave way, sending the sword fish, head first, towards the sofa, and on it, Ian.

Police arrived several days later due to calls from a disturbed neighbor, saying Ian hadnt left his apartment in almost two weeks.

Shortly therafter, police discovered that Ian Swartzkoph, was not lower middle-class man he claimed to be. He had, infact, accumulated over 7.5 Million dollars in the past decade.

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Untitled

Shrouded sea of pine
Orange-robed monks meditate
Nettles drifting down
Raking through a rock garden
Crumbling-lichen covered wall

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Interesting...

Mystery storeh, eh? I see I have mimics. :3

Or did yours come first...

No matter, keep it up!

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Not mimicing, I hope. The first one was written for school in January of this year, and I simply modified it for Sequel purposes.

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Contatutional Informative Degree

Any person(s) attemting to find a moral in this thread will be shot. Any person(s) trying to find a reason in any poems will be electrocuted. Any patrons, assitants, secretaries, or children under the age of 13 trying to find reason to the unexplained reasonably explainable calmness that exist in the anarchy of said thread will be hung by the neck until dead. Any person(s) trying to figure out who REALLY is in charge of what is written in Informative degrees, other than 6 men, a lunatic and a cat, both of which are in a shack on a deserted island, will be tied to a stake, and burned. So concludes Constitutional Informative Degree 1.

Any person(s) who try to figure out the purpose of the Contitutional Informative Degrees, or those who attempt to find purpose in writing this after I(the Writer) have said the degree is over will be executed on sight by a firing squad. Thus ends the First Constitutional Informative Degree.

Signed,

Maverick, Cat, Lunatic, etc, etc.

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*tries to figure out the purpose of the Contitutional Informative Degrees*

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Constitutional Informative Degree II

Any parties or persons pretending to break the law, clearly stated by the unofficial Constitutional Informative Degree will be deal with severely, as so states the unwritten bill of writes, in which it clearly states, in Article A, subsection 3, subpeona VII, that all persons attempting to break the law with out really breaking the law, and only breaking the law to see what will happen, even though they are really innocent except for the fact that this degree states so, will have their limbs attached by ropes to wild horses, and ripped apart. This Article is not so written by I, in so much as 6 Men, a Cat and a Lunatic, both of whom are currently residing in a shack, which presides on a deserted island.

Signed,

Cat, 6 Men, etc, etc.

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Long sentence is looooooooong. Anywho, got any writings in the making? And also, I'm gonna try and start on the RPG today, but if I can't, expect it sometime before/after Monday next week AG time.

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