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Moabarmorgamer
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Hi. This is Moat. And this is where I would like to see people post some morbid poems, stories, etc. Although they don't have to, and I will be mainly the one posting here. First entry to my Morbid Literature Journal:

A very much more selfless, brighter, and, dare I say, more optimistic and therefore idiotic, view.

The Only Thing I Ask

I am on the test, the trial
For my life, the danger is dire
But, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Is to keep others from the same fate
Protect them from this amount of hate
Save the others
Please God the only thing I ask of You
Save my friends and my mother
From this horror
My photographs, my memories
Will have to help me through
I'm lonely and I'm tired
I'm missin them again
The hatred of others burns like fire
Why do they hate me?
I'm just a man
But, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Protect my family and friends
And my strength, it will hold
Through the dark and through the cold
I'm hurting and I'm hated
They hurt me with word and rod
But, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
The others around me have lost hope
But I pray to You
And I remember the good times
You have given me
With my family and friends
And I can pull through
Because hurt is nothing new
In this world
And all I need to do
Is pray again to You
I'm lonely and I'm tired
I'm missin them again
The hatred of others burns like fire
Why do they hate me?
I'm just a man
But, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Protect my family and friends
And my strength, it will hold
Through the dark and through the cold
I am weak outside
They have hurt my body and my mind
For no reason other than I'm different
I believe that the other prisoners went
Well, I am still alive
As long as I can, time after time
Think about those I love
Those left so far behind
But I can't help but wish
That I could be there again
Back where I love to be
There's nothing here for me
On this road of life
But I trust You, dear God
And I pray to You, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Save them this day
I'm lonely and I'm tired
I'm missin them again
The hatred of others burns like fire
Why do they hate me?
I'm just a man
But, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Protect my family and friends
And my strength, it will hold
Through the dark and through the cold
There's no one here
Noplace to go
My overwhelming fear
Oh, no no no
But it's not for me
It's for them
I will believe they're safe
Until the end
And there may be horror
There may be strife
But if I lose them
It'll be like a knife
And to you I pray
Dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Protect them on this darkest day
When I'm not around
When I'm much too far away
I'm lonely and I'm tired
I'm missin them again
The hatred of others burns like fire
Why do they hate me?
I'm just a man
But, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Protect my family and friends
And my strength, it will hold
Through the dark and through the cold
Dear God
You can take me
Save them, protect them
The only thing I ask
Save the others from this fate
Protect them all, upon this day

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Alright, this is the last part of The Last Night for a Graverobber

When I returned to my home I boarded up the windows of my house. I decided that they would go away if I just didn't look out of the windows, but that wasn't the case. Closer and closer the circles got whenever I went out to investigate during the day. I kept myself secluded for weeks - quit my job at the hospital. Then it hit me just the other night - IT WAS THE STATUE! It made all the sense in world, the shapes and the circles, all of it began happening after I got that stupid statue. I laughed because I knew, I knew that I had to answer to end all of this. Not daring to leave the house at that moment - because I knew that they were making their little walk around the yard - I decided to leave for the graveyard the next day. I reached the graveyard the next evening and found the grave, but the soil seemed to have been disturbed, probably not longer than two days ago. Worried I dug, and it was quickly becoming night. When I reached the coffin I didn't hesitate to open it, but when I did there was something, something I didn't understand. In the grave was my friend, mangled and with an obvious face of horror. Horrified, I threw the statue into the grave with my friend and quickly and messily threw the dirt over it. Then the winds came back, and looking out onto a hill I could see the shapes, just like the first time I had seen them.
Here I am now, I don't remember how I returned home. I have given up hope, spent my last moments righting this letter. The winds haven't stopped, and I can hear something else in the wind now. Not words, just the sound of doom, you might understand it if you heard it. They should reach my house tonight, no wait, I can hear them now. But the joke is on them, I will not give them the chance to mangle me like they did my friend. I don't know If my fate was sealed when I picked up the statue, or If I could of returned it sooner, I donât know, so I'm telling this to the person who reads this - DO NOT LOOK FOR TH

Moabarmorgamer
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Agh! What happens to him?
Man...
Anyways, I'm going to sleep. See ya...after school. I hate that sentence.

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Good night, but enjoy school while you can, you will miss it when you graduate.

Kind of an Appendix to my story here, he was trying to write down don't go looking for the statue, well you might ask "How would they even know where to look." Well the good Dr. Green kept notes and descriptions of his "expeditions". So somebody could find them, and learn where the grave was.

Moabarmorgamer
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Tell me what you think

Illuminations

A brief flash of light
Illuminates the darkest night
And when I open the locked door
I find more than I bargained for
And now I know much more than I should
And I wish that if I ever could...
I'd go back
Back in time
I just wanna get off the knowledgeable track
And see why did I do that, what was going on in my mind?
But now it's late
Far too late
I know far too much
And I know that I'll never be quite the same again!
But does it really matter?
Cuz everything leads to the same thing in the end

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And in case you're wondering, I just got up much earlier than I needed to. School hasn't even started yet and won't for hours yet.

P.S.- I really need to take the bells off my cat's collar. She woke me up this morning.

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Here's Moats' requested execution. I made it an animation instead to test my newly acquired animation skills :P

http://i629.photobucket.com/albums/uu16/TSL3_needed/Execution.gif?t=1250189700

It sucks, and it's slow, but what the hay. It does the trick fine enough.

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MORE BLOOD lol,

I'm gonna try and start posting some of my drawings, and I specialize in evil faces >.

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MORE BLOOD lol,


It wouldn't let me -.-

Unfortunately. I would have put an unnecessary amount if I wanted to.
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Here's another one. It glitched out a bit though : /

http://i629.photobucket.com/albums/uu16/TSL3_needed/Hanging.gif?t=1250198014

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It glitched out a bit though : /


No it didn't he just used the force to pull the rope, but seriously, that s lot better than I can do. (AWESOME SHOW GREAT JOB)
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(AWESOME SHOW GREAT JOB)


Thanks. I got 1 more coming. Lawl suicide I call it XD

You can give it a shot. It's probably the most basic animator out there. It's called Pivot.
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Here's the last one. You can find others in my thread. Not now, but sometime later.

http://i629.photobucket.com/albums/uu16/TSL3_needed/SuicideLawl.gif?t=1250200191

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http://i584.photobucket.com/albums/ss282/BronzeCAE09/MrSmiley.jpg

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Does Mr. Smiley make you happy or just plain creeped out?

Moabarmorgamer
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Creeped out man. Creeped the hell out. Like one of those clowns that has that fake smile plastered on their face...but they're not smiling. And they look totally evil.
I might post some more poetry later, but I need to submit my ratings for the Picture Changing Contest. I'm a judge, and so is TSL(who hasn't submitted his ratings as far as I can tell, btw).

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