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Moabarmorgamer
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Hi. This is Moat. And this is where I would like to see people post some morbid poems, stories, etc. Although they don't have to, and I will be mainly the one posting here. First entry to my Morbid Literature Journal:

A very much more selfless, brighter, and, dare I say, more optimistic and therefore idiotic, view.

The Only Thing I Ask

I am on the test, the trial
For my life, the danger is dire
But, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Is to keep others from the same fate
Protect them from this amount of hate
Save the others
Please God the only thing I ask of You
Save my friends and my mother
From this horror
My photographs, my memories
Will have to help me through
I'm lonely and I'm tired
I'm missin them again
The hatred of others burns like fire
Why do they hate me?
I'm just a man
But, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Protect my family and friends
And my strength, it will hold
Through the dark and through the cold
I'm hurting and I'm hated
They hurt me with word and rod
But, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
The others around me have lost hope
But I pray to You
And I remember the good times
You have given me
With my family and friends
And I can pull through
Because hurt is nothing new
In this world
And all I need to do
Is pray again to You
I'm lonely and I'm tired
I'm missin them again
The hatred of others burns like fire
Why do they hate me?
I'm just a man
But, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Protect my family and friends
And my strength, it will hold
Through the dark and through the cold
I am weak outside
They have hurt my body and my mind
For no reason other than I'm different
I believe that the other prisoners went
Well, I am still alive
As long as I can, time after time
Think about those I love
Those left so far behind
But I can't help but wish
That I could be there again
Back where I love to be
There's nothing here for me
On this road of life
But I trust You, dear God
And I pray to You, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Save them this day
I'm lonely and I'm tired
I'm missin them again
The hatred of others burns like fire
Why do they hate me?
I'm just a man
But, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Protect my family and friends
And my strength, it will hold
Through the dark and through the cold
There's no one here
Noplace to go
My overwhelming fear
Oh, no no no
But it's not for me
It's for them
I will believe they're safe
Until the end
And there may be horror
There may be strife
But if I lose them
It'll be like a knife
And to you I pray
Dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Protect them on this darkest day
When I'm not around
When I'm much too far away
I'm lonely and I'm tired
I'm missin them again
The hatred of others burns like fire
Why do they hate me?
I'm just a man
But, dear God
The only thing I ask of You
Protect my family and friends
And my strength, it will hold
Through the dark and through the cold
Dear God
You can take me
Save them, protect them
The only thing I ask
Save the others from this fate
Protect them all, upon this day

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Moabarmorgamer
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I kinda wrote this as a view from the HMS Titanic.

I am sinking
Death is coming
What the hell was I thinking?
And there's no hiding, there's no running
Thought I was safe here
Well I was wrong again!
And as I feel myself being enveloped by fear
I know this is the end

dudeguy45
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What the hell WERE YOU thinking?

Moabarmorgamer
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Ummmmm??????????????????????????????

TSL3_needed
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What the hell WERE YOU thinking?


Who was that directed at? I have no idea. . . .

Good poem Moat. Creative.
Moabarmorgamer
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Dudeguy, what is it? Seriously, are you talking to me? Why are you so pissed? What are you talking about? I don't understand.

Moabarmorgamer
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Oh, thanks TSL! Both of them are really short, though =(. Do you have anything to add?*baby eyes*

dudeguy45
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I was referring to you poem... no one can take a joke anymore around here. *rants*

Moabarmorgamer
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Oh I see. Sorry, it's really hard to understand tone on the Internet, you know?

Moabarmorgamer
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Anyone got something to add? I'm really lazy tonight.

samdawghomie
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Me too. I might think of something short.

Bronze
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I would have some stuff, but I lost my story book that I was writing in >_<, and I can't remember how they go.

Moabarmorgamer
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Aw man. That kind of reminds me of what happened to TSL. His mom deleted his stories =(.
Anywayz, I am too lazy to type any stories or songs or stuff, so I'm relying on everyone else!

Moabarmorgamer
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Grrr...apparently I can't rely on you guys >;(


I have a feeling
That I won't be coming home
These wounds aren't healing
And I'm out, I'm all alone
For the fight!
Guess I never really thought 'bout this
Through the night!
And 'bout the people that I would miss
And I think I will just
Lay down
There's no more fight, I've done what I must
And think about
What I'll be leaving when I die
And wondering if those reasons are right
And wondering if what I believe
It's turned upside down and all around
During the bloodbath of the fight!

Moabarmorgamer
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And just a random pic of Manta. I don't see how this is morbid, but whatever.
http://i1004.photobucket.com/albums/af170/JJnapper/kick-1.jpg

Moabarmorgamer
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Sigh. Tell me what you think.

I can destroy this world
I can burn it all down
You know my secret
You'll never keep it
Hence, let the fallen
Rise up again!
I say I'm indestructible
Nothing can hurt me
You think you're just infallible
And you watch as I bleed
I wish I could say
That your words don't hurt me
But in fact, every day
I know you can see through me
And I cry for the ones I'm about to let die
But I'm indestructible on the outside
You say it's hurting you
But I know that ain't true
You broke my shield today
Found all my weakness inside!
My pain, it burns your soul
Cough words you can't scream
But still we remain dark and cold
So, you can sell your soul today
Let the fallen rise again
Because the indestructible
Have been sanctified!
In my mind
Up from the dirt!
I burn it down!(down down)
Try not to lose myself
In uncontainable rage!
I'll burn it down!
"Never again!"
You said as you walked away
Now, I can prove you wrong
Come from the soul
I'll burn it down!
I can hear your voice
Telling me to stop this
But I don't wanna listen
I gotta burn it down
To ease my conscious
For what you did to me!
My soul is dead!
And as the ground turns red
The fallen can rise again!
And we can all see this is the end
YOU'RE NOT MY FRIEND!
Yes, I hear the voice
Yes, I know you know my soul is dead
Yes, it will hurt my conscious
Something's just wrong in my head
No, I WILL STILL BURN IT DOWN!
See the sleepless?
See the fallen?
See the tortured?
RISE UP AGAIN ALL!
AND BURN IT DOWN AGAIN
Hahahahaha

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