ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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Savingthedream14
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Day and night whoo hoo
The darkness is everywhere
I can't see nothing.
Awesome a double negative and I got to fit an interjection I'm awesome. Haha. So here is my horrible, or I believe its not all too good, but that's my opinion, anyways here is my, haiku. I hope that's right anyways.

Savingthedream14
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Day and night whoo hoo
The darkness is everywhere
I can't see nothing

Maybe it will look better like this.
Katrina18
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When Mother Nature
Casts her blush on hushed waters
We breathe the shy dusk

MRWalker82
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Before the sun sets
Under the horizon's edge
The sky becomes dusk

MRWalker82
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When the day sun sets
Under the horizon's edge
Bright sky becomes dusk



Sorry, I switched from editing it in the text box to editing it on paper and forgot to put my finished version in here before hitting submit. My apologies.

Nater
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Theres a difference
Between dawn and dusk, my friend
dusk is at night. Duh.

Savingthedream14
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Haha. Hurray for Nater being able to add humor and all!!

Nater
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Haha. Hurray for Nater being able to add humor and all!!


Humor? Oh, now I see. Yeah, I definetly meant to put that there don't worry.
vinster132
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With partial darkness
Brightness flows away today
Between night and day

Whoops, I noticed it rhymes...-_- thank you MRwalker for that.

With Partial darkness
Brightness flows away today
Between day and night

Fix'd.
slayguy8
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oh all of these are great

samdawghomie
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The gleaming sunset
Nocturnal creatures awake
Night sets upon us

FallenSky
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Spent life in your feet
The old man peers at the sun;
It's dusk for you too...

Intently made as if it was the old man talking to the sun on the last line. In any case, even if the dialogue like figure at the ned is not perceived the haiku makes its point remarkably. I'm glad about that one ^^.

FallenSky
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Spent life in his feet
The old man peers at the sun;
It's dusk for you too...

Sorry, that'd seem more appropriate.

Zaork
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Conflagration ends
Vulnerable time stands still
Honour the gloaming

Saving123
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Day and night they meet
And have the greatest affair
And then dusk is born

That's my try.

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