ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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Ernie15
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I haven't gone anywhere. What makes you think I won't be judging?

Maybe I should post here more often so people don't think I'm dead...

KingLemon
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maybe some sort of assurance that you'll be judging or when you plan on having the results up? haha!

Ernie15
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If I haven't judged by tomorrow, expect them on Saturday or Sunday. No later than that.

FallenSky
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I haven't gone anywhere. What makes you think I won't be judging?
Maybe I should post here more often so people don't think I'm dead...


Haha, well maybe it's just me that's posting so often about the judging's progression that I forget some users are a little more...dicreet.

Everyone says thank you to Ernie. You really should give us some sort of cue that you're judging though, I really thought I'd be the one to do it. Anyhow, sorry for the commotion everybody.

What a relief, I'm already busy enough.

LazyOne
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How can a Haiku be a Haiku if it's not about one of the five seasons?
*Note: Before some retard tries to prove me wrong; In Japan New Year is a season as well.

If you just want a poem in the style of a haiku, call it 7-5-7 thread, or senryu spin-off thread.

I'll probably forget about this post, so if you want to respond to this, do it on my profile.

LazyOne
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5-7-5*

Endscape
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very true by definition... but is it trully necessary to make that statement this late in the threads developement...... watever...

Quirinus1
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How can a Haiku be a Haiku if it's not about one of the five seasons?


It doesn't have to be entirely about a season, it has to contain a word or thought that refers to a season.
deathopper
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Alright here's a try.

Oxigen is great.
Without it were all dead men.
So let's just breath air.

If this was a tanka I would have continued it. It would have been about the problems of pollution. Too bad.

Nater
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Breath in my life
My soul is downright painful
Someone stop this please

chitown
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@deathopper and Nater, I think the deadline already happened so I thin you two are late.

deathopper
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Darn, forgot to look at the deadline. Well thanks chitown.

deni123
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Maybe im so out of that thing but WHAT IS HAIKU??

HahiHa
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Maybe im so out of that thing but WHAT IS HAIKU??

Maybe read THE FIRST POST??
sheesh...
KingLemon
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If I haven't judged by tomorrow, expect them on Saturday or Sunday. No later than that.


You are a day late
why would you get our hopes up?!
I will go cry now
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