ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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Maverick4
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This sucked. I hated it, Mav! It was so stupid and I felt so bad about your lack of intelligence, I gave you a merit


Let me just remind you who made whom a judge now, shall we?

Yes, lets.
acmed
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Let me just remind you who made whom a judge now, shall we?

Yes, lets.


...

Guilt sucks.
nichodemus
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Er no....I live on a tropical island that does not have snow.

nichodemus
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The drink from Belgium has transportational powers, duuh.


The beer bottles migrate to warmer climates to mate when it gets too cold in Europe.
acmed
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The beer bottles migrate to warmer climates to mate when it gets too cold in Europe.


Oh yeah, I forgot, nichodemus is foreign.

Well either way, I liked the haiku.
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re:

Down by the fireside,
I come to know its meaning:
Peace and Harmony.


Fire is one syllable but two phonemes. Regular haiku writers don't imitate 17-on Japanese haiku because we have an alphabet (26 letters) and consonants and vowels and syllables, and they have a 400 plus character based number of written language systems.

We just can't compete with that. :-)

I made the same mistake, thinking this haiku was 5/7/5:

yellowing fields
hovering not hovering
the nankeen kestrels


But I was firmly told by a well-known haiku writer who works for Microsoft that field is one syllable, but two phonemes. :-)

Here's a 575er from me that did do well though.


another hot day
a leaking water pipe stopped
by the jackdawâs beak

Alan Summers
Honourable Mention, 14th Mainichi Haiku Contest (2010)

Cheers!

acmed
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Your haiku doesn't count. It has to match the theme, I'm a Believer.

Maverick4
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This one's for teh lulz. And we all know what song it is:

Then I saw her face:
And now I'm a believer!
No doubt in my mind.

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Then I saw her face:
And now I'm a believer!
No doubt in my mind.


All hail the Monkees. LOLOLOLOLOLOL!
DairyHick
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Comrade In The Trench

Pouring Wine Out Of The Holes

Yet Firm To Return.

- DairyHick

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Comrade In The Trench

Pouring Wine Out Of The Holes

Yet Firm To Return.


Comrade In The Trench
Pouring Wine Out Of The Holes
Yet Firm To Return.

I just need to do that for judging purposes.
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Water

Water goes drip-drop
It makes you crackle and pop
And it never stops!

That is an original from me I SWEAR!!!!!
It's an awesome poem about water thought in my opinion.(DUH, cuz i wrote it)

Maverick4
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Haikus aren't supposed to rhyme. Feudal Japanese culture held it to be bad-luck.

Besides, it doesn't even fit the theme 'I'm a Believer'.

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I know in my heart,
Sunshine through shadowy doubt;
Something to fight for.

DairyHick
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Sorry guys, can I actually ask who decides the winning Haiku? Will there be a poll of some kind or is it a decision from a single person?

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