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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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darknes4ever
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tiger's arround us
snake's biting us
feasting for them

darknes4ever
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excuse me i did got confused @ topic name (A)

the artic one

snowstorm trough my mind
solid frozen arms
the ice breaks

if any grammar errors were made i take all the blame

Maverick4
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You can't end a line with "the". You just can't. Ever. It's against the unwritten laws of haiku


If they're not written down, they're probaly not important. :P
darknes4ever
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haha lol well normaly i write fully poems
and this is the first time i heard and writen "haiku's"
so yeah i don't know the rulles
i thought they're pretty good for a "first timer"

jacksonghuntington
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Here's mine.
______________________

"Winter and the Unknown"

White blur, falling snow
This barren wasteland I walk
The first sign of life
_______________________

This is about an Arctic scientist who is looking for... really anything. I'll leave the rest to you. Hope you like it!

Endscape
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"I Ran"... Towards that beauty

Such lights are above
the aurora shines so bright
her beauty un-matched.

Endscape
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i apologise if this is irrelevant but, i would like to compliment ernie on the expedent and.... incredibly detailed response, thank you.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uUjIA3Rt7gk

Quirinus1
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The sinister award: what I was aiming for!

Peggster
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i would like to compliment ernie on the expedent and.... incredibly detailed response, thank you.


I agree, it is good to see constructive criticism which can help people in creating better works of art, cheers!
Quirinus1
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Arctic prison

The infinite snow,
In vain I try to survive.
There is no escape.

Krizaz
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I knew I should't have rhymed the two.. Eh.

The screaming wind blows
The cry of a thousand men
The birth of the night

Dramatic right?

CommanderDude7
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Breath coming faster
Fire burning down to ashes
Cold all around me

FallenSky
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Hmm, well, I'm am little disappointed in this, I was really confident in my ability to win.

So, has anything been decided on that judging matter while I was on vacation?

idontsuckthatmuch
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Cold

Forever frozen,
The horizon wrapped in ice,
As this world slumbers.


I must admit, I had to go on Rhymezone to find a 1-syllable synonym for "covered."

This will probably be better, since my last poem was only "adequate."

:P

KingLemon
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wow just noticed the fact there's a new theme...whoever won should really ask a mod to change it
anyways so the theme is "the artic"?
hmm here's my entry, this took several edits actually.

A frozen wasteland
An undefined majesty
Slowly leaving us

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