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Maverick4
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Peasant

A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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murasaki9
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Blacksmith

The new theme for the next round is: Restoration

This round is due: January 5th, 2013.

Arceus12
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Shepherd

Restore colleague,
This refrigerator.
To it's glory now!

pangtongshu
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Jester

Restore colleague,
This refrigerator.
To it's glory now!


1) are you implying that you, the speaker, work for a repair company? Or did you put colleague to take up syllable space?

2) 4-6-5
Arceus12
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Shepherd

Pang the colleague part was trying to imply that they work in a repair compagny
Corrected Haiku
Renovate colleague,
This microprocessor now!
To it's glory now!

EmperorPalpatine
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Jester

it's

*its
it's means "it is"
Arceus12
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Shepherd

Yes.So?

Arceus12
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Shepherd

Ah it is OK i get i you sugest that i change it's to its.OK why not.
Corrected Haiku
Renovate colleague,
This microprocessor now!
To it's glory now!

acmed
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Nomad

Lord, heal my wounded,
Restore the strengths you've given,
Protect me from harm.

Hey guys

Freakenstein
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Jester

Honey dewdrops morn
gives Green respite 'fore the day
To sparkle with life

Maverick4
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Peasant

I can't help but be reminded of Mark 15


Bingo.
Lee_Blade
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Peasant

Heal me from thy wounds
Restore me from the darkness
God,guide me to light

ArgamenPhish
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Nomad

Pained and broken down
Lost in despair, looking up
Bestowed strength to me

Lee_Blade
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Peasant

I hope I win this round because last round I did not win.

pangtongshu
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Jester

Heal me from thy wounds


You know what thy means..correct?

Your sentence means: Heal me from your wounds
nichodemus
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Grand Duke

Charles II

Death for his father,
Merry Monarch plots away,
Return of the King.

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