ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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Ernie15
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Good luck with that, Carlie hasn't been online in weeks. I still haven't received my prize from the Mastery of Water round. Maybe she'll come back for you if you're lucky.

If there was more room, I would have put in explosion sound effects.


It reminds me of Futurama for some odd reason. It's strange, because they never say any of those things in Futurama, but it still feels like they did. :P
dudeguy45
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Try Cenere or Zophia for a merit.

Yodadude53
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My brain is still fogged up, UGH! D: Darnit brain, can you let me win at least one contest? xD

chitown
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My brain is still fogged up, UGH! D: Darnit brain, can you let me win at least one contest? xD


Don't blame your brain, blame the judges! :P
Freakenstein
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Very well written! Old English can sometimes get you a good placement!


Sooooo close... I was SURE that was my best haiku yet haha XD

Going from light to technology is a big jump... I may need more time ;-)
samy
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Automatons march
With silicon fueled minds
(A) Circuit board frenzy

After being shoot down for my syllables last time I used a calculator =P
But I'm arguing on it with the last line so whether the "A" is included or not is Ernie's choice.

Thank you.

pHacon
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"A" doesn't need to be included.

Cir-cuit(2) board(1) fren-zy(2)

Krizaz
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Shiny light, Gone BAD!!!

Shiny Shiny Light
You are so freaking bright now
Your a eye killer

pHacon
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Krizaz, the theme is technology now p.117, I believe.

Krizaz
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Why!?!?!?!
By: Krizaz

Zttz Ow Pain AH! Why?!
These are the words we say
When the techs strike back

samy
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Automatons march
With silicon fueled minds
Circuit board frenzy

@Ph gracias

There's ^^ my entry then

EnterOrion
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Entries close 6:00pm AG time.

Yodadude53
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Oh no! I have to get my entry in, quick! D:

FloydTC
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the entries are closed

chitown
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So since it is closed, when is the judging?

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