ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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Armpit
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you really think everyone is gonna re-post their Haikus?


Nobody is reposting anything.

could you please just post your entry after this so I don't have to sift through all these page?


He didn't mean to do it this round. He just doesn't want people to have random conversations next time (because it's too late for this round), which is understandable, because useless banter just clogs up the thread.
Yodadude53
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Aww come on dude! I'm too lazy to copy and paste it, and to even find it in the first place! D:

chitown
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Waves towering above
Terror in the peoples eyes
One word: tsunami

I was a good person, and put it here, just make it easier for the judges, there is too many pages of this.

Kyouzou
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Controlling all lives
Drowning, Destroying, Killing
Everyone shall die


Happier?

Armpit
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I took the liberty of sifting through all those pages to make dudeguy's job much easier. Tell me if there are any corrections, but I'm pretty sure this is every entry.

EnterOrion:

Hydroelectric
The power runs in rivers
Dams produce it all


marioman327:

Veins willing to burst
All liquids at my command
Could overtake me


Kyouzou:

Controlling all lives
Drowning, Destroying, Killing
Everyone shall die


Ernie15:

Waves as high as clouds
Crashing down on enemies
Drenching evil ways


chitown:

Waves towering above
Terror in the peoples eyes
One word tsunami


Freakenstein:

Grace and fear inside,
Calm and deadly: everything.
Water controls all.


FloydTC:

running from my spout
I guide it into the bowl
wait thats not water


beastahayes:

As the water swirls
Making a deep hole of doom
I churn to my death


Yodadude53:

Deep and treacherous
A deadly wave comes crashing
Down the sandy shore


Teeheegirl123:

Water controls me
My eyes close for the last time
My soul swims away


ulimitedpower:

As the water sleeps
The ocean still wields it power
Hungrily licking land


Google567:

It keeps coming to
Water its all around me
I hope to resist


DrElmer:

Sea of floating life
Rocked and mastered by villains
I run out of breath


komputerkurt (not sure if it technically counts or not):

the pond is sea blue
the pond is very awesome
total awesomness

Parsat
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Forgot my haiku:

Endless line of brooms
Waves splashing out of control
The sorcerer's hat

Armpit
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Alas, and I forgot my own as well! How ironic!

Water is easy
I've already mastered it
What do I do now?


I forgot Sargantfrosty's as well:

Many have attempted
The only one victor though
Is just a big rock


Just to be safe, someone should go double check to make sure I got them all.

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Err, you sort of got mine wrong. That's the second correction, and I had a third underneath.

As the water sleeps
Ocean still wields its power
Tonguing the soft sands


There it is (I took the liberty of taking out my mistake. Nice list, will probably help out.
dudeguy45
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Armpit, I love you. And you can have conversations, just not off-topic ones. Alright. A little bit more.

ulimitedpower
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Ahh, I believe today is the day of judgement, am I not right? Can't wait, hope I'm online then...

Armpit, I love you. And you can have conversations, just not off-topic ones. Alright. A little bit more.


So we can't talk about cooking? Too bad... Lol. I find that unless Strop posts Grammar Nazi again we'll be safe.
chitown
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Hmmm, today is Thrursday, and dudeguy said it would be Wednesday. Is this going to be another long wait for the judging again?

EnterOrion
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I would judge right now if Dudeguy wouldn't get mad at me . . . .

ulimitedpower
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I would judge right now if Dudeguy wouldn't get mad at me . . . .


Still, I find it a bit mean to the participators to make them wait so long. I keep freaking out when I go to this thread, 'Has the decision been made?'.

If he doesn't post in a few hours, I'd recommend just posting it. It's Thursday, one day overdue.
chitown
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I don't care who dose it, I just want it done, the quicker the better.

EnterOrion
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Still, I find it a bit mean to the participators to make them wait so long.


I was on my way on Monday, but . . .

Oh, never mind.

Once I clean my room, I'll get started.
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