ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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FallenSky
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Sleeping or waking,
Live every day the same dream,
Jump off the building.


*Game reference*
Yet, it's funny how the game fits the theme...

Now my entry:

The fall is quite long
When will I crash on the ground?
Send a text message...

Suicide IS boring...
No really I might submit another one later, though it won't matter if I'm the judge this week.
As mentionned in the judging post, I'm willing to give a taste of judgemanship to a subsidiary judge so if you're up to it, give me a whiiiiiiiiiiizzzzzzzzzzzzz.
If not, I'll gladly be the judge, as usual.

vinster132
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Orion told me that he misses judging. Haha.

thechosenuno
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Anticipation
I wait here patiently
Lets start the Judging

samdawghomie
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The tapping of feet
Pacing up and down the street
This is a real treat

W00t for rhyming.

aknerd
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Entering just for the shiggles (figure it out).

He no longer blinks
Eternal years spent Watching
Silent growing stones

dudeguy45
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the age old question
*sigh* what do you wanna do?
lets write a haiku!

vinster132
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When is this gonna to be judged? Fallen?

Google567
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constant frustration
absolutely nothing to do
lack of excitement

Theres my crack at it.

Google567
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constant frustration
truly nothing to achieve
lack of excitement

Sorry this is my real one.

FallenSky
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Ah yes! The judging!
Sorry, I'm crammed under piles of work and responsibilities these days...Guess I'm as unpuctual as can be; it's a shared trait among haiku judges.
Well, it'llbe up very soon, I swear!

Freakenstein
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You know, pure irony and all, but I absolutely have nothing to do and all the time in the world since I technically have no school left in my life (although I will be attending college in a few months), so maybe if people such as FallenSky need a hand at some judging, I could help hold the reins a bit. I have experience of judging here prior to my leaving, of course ;P

Google567
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That would be awesome if you were a judge Freak. I still wish Ernie were one.

Freakenstein
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I could do it! I just need permission

I came up with a Seiryu* poem to fit in with boredom, except this round is closed

*forgot how to spell it. Essentially, it's a humorous, yet satirical haiku.

thepossum
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Stare at a white wall
A vacant look on your face
Your life really sucks


Well, there you go. Do you like it? Sorry for not entering in the last one...

Google567
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possum how'd you get your armator to be pure black?
Yeah more entries.

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