ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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EnterOrion
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Both me.

Okay then. That'll do.

FloydTC
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I just lost my job
the boss kicked me out of here
I walk down the hall

technically it does fit the theme

adios194
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Good one FloydTC that is thinking out of the box.

Freakenstein
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Oooooh missing a D...Idk Floyd, you might be jumping the gun on this one

DrElmer
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Flares beating down hard
The trail of flaming fury
Blazing through the night

(Trail is one syllable)

Owen135731
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I'm baking cookies.
But why are they on fire?
Ow; third degree burns.

dudeguy45
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Lames lick up to stars
Sparks dash up to the heavens
Fire is life and death

Kyouzou
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Lames lick up to stars






typo?
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For all of you lovers of Japanese poetry, there is now a Tanka Contest running simultaneously! So if you desire to write Japanese poetry, but you've already entered in this contest, why not come down to the old house of Tanka and submit something there?

We need a theme, and I figured the best place to ask would be here.

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Entries are closed. Judging will commence tomorrow.

EnterOrion
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In an attempt to speed things up, I won't give an automatic award to everyone. If you want an award just ask, and I'll include a review! Only 1 AP! Lol, but seriously, just ask if it matters. Also, God dam* this is freaking hard. I can see why it would wear one down. A lot of very good entries.

Wood Award - Floyd

I just lost my job
the boss kicked me out of here
I walk down the hall

Honestly, I would have loved to place this higher for creativity in itself.

Bronze Award - Dudeguy

Flames lick up to stars
Sparks dash up to the heavens
Fire is life and death

I do quite like this one. It sounds like danger.

Silver Award - Ernie

The flames erupting
A barreling inferno
Lights up the night sky

It sounds like either a volcano or a forest fire. Either way, it's good.

Gold Award - Tanja

Fire in the sky
Dust to dust, ashes ditto -
End of the Old World?

It's good. Sounds like the apocalypse or warfare. Good job.

Platinum Award - Axel

Burning all day long
Mass destruction in the trees
Can kill many men

Forest fire? Maybe. Anyway, very good. Works the syllables very well.

Diamond Award - Devoidless

Sputter. Cough. Leap. Flare.
Source of the just and wicked
Master, slave to all

Took me a second (pun, lol) to get what it meant. Awesome job.

Lava Award - Kyouzou

Roaring and crackling
casting shadows, flinging sparks
logs burning, smoke drifts

I'm tempted to call you Deity of Imagery. That painted an image in my head masterfully. Excellent job, I must say.

Once again, if there are any objections to something, I'll see if I can reevaluate it. I like to be as fair as possible.

New Theme: Aircraft
Deadline: January 23rd, 2010, Midnight AG Time

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IS Diamond the winner, or lava?

ANyway here is mine

I like Italy
RING RING RING RING RING RING RING
My Private Jet please?

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I'm tempted to call you Deity of Imagery. That painted an image in my head masterfully. Excellent job, I must say.


I'm so gonna get a big head from that... lol thank you

Gleaming in the sun
soaring high through cold blue skies
trails of smoke follow


There it is....
EnterOrion
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IS Diamond the winner, or lava?


Lava.

I'm so gonna get a big head from that... lol thank you


Eeeeeeeeegggggoooooooooooooo . . . !
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Roflcopter flies with glee,
Soaring through the endless sky,
SOI SOI SOI SOI SOI.

Note: That last line is said by microsoft sam. :P

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