ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

5299 3118890
Maverick4
offline
Maverick4
6,800 posts
Peasant

A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

  • 5,299 Replies
Ernie15
offline
Ernie15
13,344 posts
Bard

Here, have a drink of this mild sedativ--er, I mean, Budweiser. Yeah, that's it, Budweiser...

Alcohol hasn't much to do with haiku, though, so it seems as though we're using it as filler for this thread.

Avorne
offline
Avorne
3,085 posts
Nomad

Hokkaido springtime
Rice wine under sakura
Tranquillity reigns

Savingthedream14
offline
Savingthedream14
170 posts
Nomad

I love you too, so I brought more

I love him more!! Come lay in my bed Avorne!
Saving123
offline
Saving123
1,258 posts
Nomad

Social lubricant
Nectar of ancient cultures
I love alcohol


Saving loves it too,
you and your random haikus
this doesn't count rhymes
FallenSky
offline
FallenSky
1,813 posts
Peasant

Beneath the pink leaves
The old man savour rice wine
That is twice his age

Avorne
offline
Avorne
3,085 posts
Nomad

Oh dear - I knew judging this contest would get me hordes of fangirls.

Of course, when I say 'hordes' I mean 2 or 3...

And when I say 'girls'...

FallenSky
offline
FallenSky
1,813 posts
Peasant

Oh dear - I knew judging this contest would get me hordes of fangirls.
Of course, when I say 'hordes' I mean 2 or 3...
And when I say 'girls'...

We've all gone through that...Any commentaries Enter...Oh yeah he's dead...
When I say dead, I mean ''Innactive''...

Saving123
offline
Saving123
1,258 posts
Nomad

Yeah thats me one of your drunken fanboys. Lawl.

Avorne
offline
Avorne
3,085 posts
Nomad

Requiscat in pace my moral code - won't be needing that anymore. I have fanboys! Fetch me a drink fanboy - and steal it from a young child.

FallenSky
offline
FallenSky
1,813 posts
Peasant

If I'm correct, preventing young boys from becoming drunkards is not part of our judging responibilities Av, we're straying from the deontological code pertaining to haiku judging.

Saving123
offline
Saving123
1,258 posts
Nomad

So don't steal it from children? Too late. And i brought candy too they just make this too easy.

aknerd
offline
aknerd
1,416 posts
Peasant

My Haiku comes with a side of vodka. And icecream.

My crushed compass
The directions discarded
I pick a new north

I might come up with something more traditional (like a nature metaphor) later. Maybe something involving a rose and thorns... but for now I'm good with this.

Saving123
offline
Saving123
1,258 posts
Nomad

My Haiku comes with a side of vodka. And icecream.

No fair, you cheat
My crushed compass
The directions discarded
I pick a new north

That doesn't go with the theme really.
thepossum
offline
thepossum
3,035 posts
Nomad

Yes it does. He has the freedom of choosing and going in whichever direction he wants, w/out being influenced.

Saving123
offline
Saving123
1,258 posts
Nomad

Yes it does. He has the freedom of choosing and going in whichever direction he wants, w/out being influenced.

Oh know I feel stupid, my apoligies sir.
Showing 1831-1845 of 5299