ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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Voyageur
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It's about PDSD

The shadows running
In my head, frighten me
Scars of where I've been

~V

thepossum
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I assume you meant 'insanity's mind'.

MRWalker82
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They say it's madness
Crazy, I was called at times
Then I ate their hearts

Freakenstein
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In all honesty, I found this theme rather difficult. There's simply too many avenues to take. It makes it hard to choose what your Haiku should be about.


I thought too many avenues is a good thing..it makes for a large variety. And with haikus, it's pretty difficult to relay your message in so few words.
Graham
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Once, twice, thrice, then then,
Lest I lose heartbeats again.
seven, eight, nine, ten...

MRWalker82
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Once, twice, thrice, then then,
Lest I lose heartbeats again.
seven, eight, nine, ten...


I would recommend that you revise either line one or line three, as a haiku is a non-rhyming poem following the syllabic formats of either 3,5,3 or 5,7,5.
FallenSky
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the syllabic formats of either 3,5,3

Ummmm...No?

Well, I don't know if I'm entitled to participate yet, but here goes. Here's my old style; it proved to be more efficient.

In silence I wait
For him to awaken me;
Loosest as I'll purge

Insanity has its own rightful morality. No seasonnal reference, no cutting word; just a thoughtful take on the theme.

BlackSkullDragon
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Crazy they call me
the ones with minds blindfolded,
they won't see the truth.

dudeguy45
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The Winner of the Merit is.... M


Jeez, that's suspenseful.

are they watching me?
alas, there is no one here
just 'ol straight jacket


I'm still Haiku admin.
Zaork
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Teetering iceberg
Progressively dissolving
It plummets within

Freakenstein
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Zaork I do believe the weather theme is done. We're doing insanity now. And if that relates to the theme just ignore me lol

FallenSky
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Teetering iceberg
Progressively dissolving
It plummets within


Bright pick on the theme Zoark ^^.
That's clever work, kudos to you.

Hypermnestra
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Imprisoned, tested
You came in sane and healthy
You won't be for long

Zaork
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Zaork I do believe the weather theme is done. We're doing insanity now. And if that relates to the theme just ignore me lol


Yeah it should relate hopefully. As the joker says "Madness is like gravity. All it needs is a little push".

kudos to you.


Thank you very much. Who is judging this weeks contest?
FallenSky
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I've made up my mind.
This will be the last time I won't be judging. After that I'll take back my post and be the best judge for this thread yet, I swear it.
If need be, I may request assistance for some to try their hand at rating haikus; that way I'll keep an eye on those qualified enough to be temporary or even full fledged judges.
After this week, I'll much likely be asking regulars to send me a mail about how they think the judging should go, and use such opinions to better forge my own judging.
If it's okay with freak, I'll let him judge that one last time.

@Freak : You're free to judge earlier if you fell like getting this out of the way, I understand it was never your job to begin with.
Of course, if you want to relay that task to someone you think could be qualified for the job, you're free to do so.
And thanks again for that paired judging idea, it's quite a brilliant proposition.

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