ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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Peasant

A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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killersup10
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Blacksmith

Well, is your Santa Clause such a nice man now?


A bloody soaked shirt
Small armies terrorize them
The fat man in charge

MagicTree
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Nomad

@nichodemus: Beware, you might be feeding the trolls. They are hungry!

@Lee_Blade:
Haikus have a format of;

First line: 5 syllables
Second line: 7 syllables
Third line: 5 syllables

Example:
Here's a haiku about haikus;

One: Five syllables
Two: There's seven syllables
Three: Five syllables

nichodemus
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Grand Duke

Better to help anyway. Just in case.

murasaki9
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First line missing a syllable.
Second missing two.
Third has one extra.


@nichodemus: Beware, you might be feeding the trolls. They are hungry!


Better to help anyway. Just in case.


Hahahaha!! So funny!
*sighs reminiscently.*
I'll go away. But really, that
was funny.
Lee_Blade
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Peasant

My other new version:

Naughty or Nice?

Nice rhymes with cool ice
Naughty sometimes can be nice
Christmas ice,Christ rise

xXxDAPRO89xXx
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Baron

You naughty or nice?
Better make up your mind soon!
Or coal you shall get!

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Maverick4
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Peasant

Friend, what have you done?
Innocent blood you have spilled,
To placate the crowd.

Lee_Blade
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Peasant

Friend,what did you said?
I cannot understand that,
Are you feeling sick?

Arceus12
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Shepherd

Good, good or bad, bad,
If your good nobody cares
But cops will get you

The last sentenceBut cops will get youmeans that if you have commited a crima the cops will catch you

Arceus12
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Shepherd

Oops i ment

Good, good or bad, bad,
If your good nobody cares,
But cops will get you.

nichodemus
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Grand Duke

Wouldn't the your be you're, which would make it more syllables than 7?

Arceus12
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Shepherd

Nicodemus thank you for correcting my mistake but you're only contains on syllable look at this link
The corrected haiku
Good, good or bad, bad,
If you're good nobody cares,
But cops will get you.

Arceus12
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Shepherd

corrected link [url=http://www.howmanysyllables.com/words/you%27re.html]

Arceus12
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Shepherd

Again corrected link

Lee_Blade
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Peasant

Be good then you're good
Be bad then you will be bad
Good or bad?choose none

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