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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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TerryLasVegas
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Nomad

Isobars dancing
As the record is broken
And the earth is crushed

FloydTC
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Nomad

I feel the pressure
of my fist against your face
you have a fat head

MoonFairy
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Shepherd

Our Lie

The crushing pressure
Keeps building up on us both
We should tell the truth.


Yes. It sucks. But its all I got T-T

DrElmer
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Shepherd

I've been pushed too far
More is expected of me
Than I can pull off

Teeheegirl123
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Nomad

Everyone watching
Success or failure awaits
Too late to back down

dudeguy45
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Peasant

Think of it as more of a tribute than a line robbery.


Well, that makes me feel good. But at least put one of these:

-Dudeguy
samy
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Diet coke and mentos
Or society and peers
Which is your pressure?

Well it's better than my darkness haiku at least. Had some trouble on thE last line though :/

MoonFairy
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I think it has. I joined it like 2 weeks ago lol at first it looked dead. Now it is getting buzz. idk how.

EnterOrion
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Sometime this weekend when my new RAM's for my computer arrive in the mail. My parents are going to get mad at me if I don't give them their RAM back.

Mine fried so I spent half an hour stealing theirs, lol.

Until then I won't be able to have enough time on here to do half decent judging.

XVERB
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Tell me what to do?
don't pressure me into it!
theres too much pressure

EnterOrion
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Oh yeah, I never did close submissions.

Submissions close right about . . .

12:00pm noon, Saturday.



So you have time if you haven't submitted an entry yet.

Parsat
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Blacksmith

Standing above clouds
The roof of the world conquered
Air too thin to breathe

FallenSky
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Sky crumbles and fall
The cloudless panorama
Is one of no dreams

FallenSky
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Of course.
Just because the theme isn't said doesn't mean it don't refer to it in a way.

samy
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@Beast way to stalk this thread ;P

I think Parast's does although I'm a little confused about how Fallen's relates.

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