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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.
Well, that said, heres the rules:
1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)
Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...
The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond
(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'
It's only been a month that I've been gone and already we're dealing with problems.
Salvidian, Murasaki changed the theme because the previous theme was too difficult to comprehend. Who would join a contest if they cannot comprehend what they are joining? That is when logic comes into play.
Murasaki also explained,"People don't like the one I chose because the last ones were kind of depressing." Also, in addition to that, there was tons of confusion about the meaning of the text, which caused many problems.
Salvidian, you have to apologize because all the evidence is in front of you. Why do you not look at the obvious statements in front of you?
At times, your criticism can go too far, and this applies to everyone. I would not insult people for what they do, just fix their problem and guide them to a solution. No need to be insulting and criticizing them for their wrongdoing.
Murasaki, I have faith in you. Don't quit now. Plenty of times I was hated on, but I hung in there.
Salvidian, Murasaki changed the theme because the previous theme was too difficult to comprehend. Who would join a contest if they cannot comprehend what they are joining? That is when logic comes into play.
Murasaki also explained,"People don't like the one I chose because the last ones were kind of depressing." Also, in addition to that, there was tons of confusion about the meaning of the text, which caused many problems.
Salvidian, you have to apologize because all the evidence is in front of you. Why do you not look at the obvious statements in front of you?
We're dealing with them because you failed to address them.
I didn't address them because they didn't exist.
It's only been a month that I've been gone
Uprising (because I happen to remember it)
poetry isn't logical
All the buttons are gone...
The "questions" were clarifications about how far the theme could be taken. In no way justification to change the theme. Likewise, the user who previously called for Murasaki to be judge then expresses discontent with the theme, and it gets changed! I'm not pointing fingers, but the fact one person is t happy with the theme is by no meansany justification at all to change the theme. Its ridiculous, for crying out loud!
I don't see any submissions coming in.
Oh and...
[quote] Uprising (because I happen to remember it)
I've spoken to a moderator about changing the title twice.
Here is my first attempt at a haiku
The tunnel's frail light
Guides only the heaviest of souls
Enlightened, again.
A darker approach which in longer words kinda means this:
After death, you heart may be heavy, but keep going and find heaven.
Like it? =)
^ Haiku's here must be in a 5-7-5 syllable template. Your middle line is too long.
^ Haiku's here must be in a 5-7-5 syllable template. Your middle line is too long.
Does you like it?
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5000th post Congrats EmperorPalpatine
And yeah i don't think it's that good either... I couldn't think of anything else at that stressed moment... Lemme think about it. :P
The tunnel's frail light
Is the end of a journey.
A well fought battle.
Okay... This is my final revision. It seems to make more sense...
And am i the only submission lol...?
Thread is locked!