ForumsArt, Music, and WritingHaiku Contest - Broken Bond (page 531, due: Feb 2)

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Maverick4
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A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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Schmiddy1234
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Wispy rays of light
Protrude the vast atmosphere
Warmth has gone again

Lol yea first post! And I think this is my best haiku yet. ^_^ I thought it out for a while

~Schmiddy

daleks
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The sun sets today
But I know it will rise again
Thank God for this day

killersup10
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sunset to sunrise
the darkness is protruding
but the light shall come

Bladerunner679
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holy light unleash
the wicked veil has shattered
time to greet the dawn.

-Blade

nichodemus
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admiring Jesus Christ's rising of the dead on Easter


Seems more than a little biased if we have to stick to that.....
crazyape
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Seems more than a little biased if we have to stick to that.....


Why do you even care, as long as it rhymes x] <--which it doesn't, being haiku. I've never heard a haiku that rhymed. x]
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Why do you even care, as long as it rhymes x] <--which it doesn't, being haiku. I've never heard a haiku that rhymed. x]


Don't tempt me to insult your intelligence, but rhyming and topic are two different issues, and I wasn't even talking about the former.
acmed
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Seems more than a little biased if we have to stick to that.....


I'm just saying this is what it's relating to. You can do whatever you feel, Nick.
gnosiphile
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Science: the candle
that drives away the darkness
of scapegoat zombies.

acmed
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Your haiku does not count. If you want to participate, please follow the theme, "Sunset to Sunrise".

TuxedoPenguin
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That trite but true Sun
Weary from a hard day's work
Charged for a new day.

-Tux

gnosiphile
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The round's theme is Sunset to Sunrise, admiring Jesus Christ's rising of the dead on Easter.

I did my best to encapsulate humanity's rise from darkness in seventeen syllables. I do not admire your god nor aspects of your god. You can certainly judge it as not one of the winners, but I deny your right to disqualify it just because you don't appreciate my interpretation of the theme. You're the one who brought religion into it, not me. Saying that I can't enter the poem I wrote because you don't like the subject makes you a bigot, sir.

HahiHa
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Between dusk and dawn
Azuras rose will blossom:
Nerevar reborn.

Just my Morrowindian take on the issue :P
Read this if you don't think the Haiku matches.

acmed
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but I deny your right to disqualify it just because you don't appreciate my interpretation of the theme.


You just stop right there, sir. I did not, "disqualify", you. I disqualified your poem because it had nothing to do with the theme. Feel free to make another one. If that's your interpretation of the theme and I was mistaken, I'm sorry, and don't call me a bigot or whatever that means, because maybe that's the reason you won't place.
So yes, my order stands, and your haiku does not count.

Anywho, I'm leaving for Chicago today for Spring Break. Any questions on the haiku contest, talk to Mav, not me. I may be online at the hotel from time to time, but I won't be fully active. Ciao, guys!
nichodemus
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Disqualifying him or disqualifying makes no difference, it's the same, and playing around with semantics does nothing to alleviate this difference or cover up.

He explained how his poem fits the theme and it does fit the theme or how you interpreted the theme with your Easter example.

Google it, I'm sure you would know how to do so. Also, I'm pretty sure from interaction with him that he doesn't care about placing but just getting his poem accepted in the name of free artistic expression. Classic example, Symphony 433 which many people would think is a pile of trash, but a small circle might find meaning however esoteric it is. Likewise, art I always subjective, and just because it has no literal sunrise or sunset doesn't mean it isn't relevant.

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