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Maverick4
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Peasant

A Haiku is a Japanese lyric verse form having three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables, traditionally invoking an aspect of nature or the seasons.

Well, that said, heres the rules:

1) The Haiku must be original (no plagarizing)!
2) It must fit the weeks theme
3) It must be submitted before the deadline
4) It must be submitted for the contest (no using works previously written)
5) One Submission per user
6) The Same User cannot win twice in a row (but there welcome to submit!)

Hopefully oneday the winner could get a merit...

The Deadline will always be a Wednsday, so the deadline for the first theme will be Wednsday, September 2. The theme is The Pond

(special thanks to 'thisisnotanalt'

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aknerd
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Peasant

It's the end, final
Sentimentalization
Hidden in old code.

Kind of clunky, but I wanted to keep the short-short-short-long-long-long-short-short-short thing going (notice the syllables per word).

nichodemus
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Grand Duke

Get the car; Man down!
She's a red-hot Diablo,
Give the kiss of life.

I blame ZZTop.

Darktroop07
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Shepherd

(She's)1 (a)2 (red)3-(hot)4 (Dia)5(blo)6,

You meant She is that way it's 7 syllables not 6 right?
killersup10
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Blacksmith

S.O.S

no! call life-o-lert!
he fell and cannot get up!
somone help this man.

Darktroop07
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Shepherd

no! call life-o-lert!
he fell and cannot get up!
somone help this man.

Sounds more like a Rescue settingjust my opinion though
dair5
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Shepherd

You meant She is that way it's 7 syllables not 6 right?


It can be pronounced, Di(1) a(2) blo(3).
nichodemus
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Grand Duke

You meant She is that way it's 7 syllables not 6 right?


Diablo has 3 syllables.
Darktroop07
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Shepherd

Diablo has 3 syllables.

Well sorry it's my accent which I can't do anything about.
Bladerunner679
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Blacksmith

the shamble of souls
lost forever in the void
save them from their fate.

enjoy.

-Blade

Bladerunner679
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Blacksmith

oops have to correct it:

the shambling of souls
lost forever in the void
save them from their fate.

-Blade

Armpit
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Nomad

Am I all alone?
Heed my song of urgency
Ere I drift beyond.

Ernie15
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Bard

A memo of stones.
Is it visible from space?
Or is this my doom?

killersup10
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Blacksmith

well apparently killersup's first haiku does not work.



LOST

despair filled island
bloody hands, fire burning
somebody save us

acmed
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Nomad

It's the 17th! Round's over! Good luck to everyone! I'll try to get the judging done soon.

Maverick4
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Peasant

(1)I (2)am (3)ma(4)rooned (5)on (6)this (7)is(8)land


The Island

Night falls quickly here.
I'm marooned on this island;
Alone with my fears.

The round is over? Bite me.
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