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A space war would fit in with the colony theme.

Alright Xzeno, I'll do a Colony fanfic in a villainelle format. xD

Hmm, a poem format would be pretty unique for a Scifi story.

If you need any help let me know. I kind of already was thinking of making a Colony story but I didn't really have time and so I gave you the idea

Warning: This is my first villainelle AND my first fanfic, so it'll most definitely suck.

Coming in about 5 or 10 minutes, 20 at the most.

This is turning out to be pretty anonymous - 19 lines is not enough time for character development - but it's not bad, at least imo so far.

MY FIRST FANFIC/VILLAINELLE EVAR. PREPARE FOR SUCKITUDE.

the lights so bright
you have to get out of the base
go go go, ignore the light

straight out in the fight
determined to escape being a disgrace
commanded like a stringbound kite

the bullets continue into the fall of night
it can't and won't end the chase
the cockpit doesn't reveal the dreadful sight

you don't care if it's right
victory's your goal, a bloody race
but if you were for both sides, you might

picking targets from a great height
just a few in between you and the base
but it's not the advantage your phantom cites

whoops, you're down, your breath draws tight
your phantom wreckage helps you embrace
existence wrapped in a sheath of white
your life fading faster then your spite

I don't know ALT...
Usually, if I'm at an idea block, I listen to music that I really like. Or look at cool art. Or watch movies that I like etc. Then, that usually gives me ideas and stuff. You should try it.
But for me giving you ideas I can't help you there (because I'm kind of at an idea block too!)

I always listen to music I really like, and I look at cool art a lot.

>.>

I'm taking requests now - what you see above your post is the first Colony fanfic villainelle evar.

Great job alt, now maybe just try the old short story format so you can do some proper plot/character development!

You are not enthused with the villainelle format, are you? Lol.

Short story queued up. I'll start up thinking out ideas.

You did it! You actually did it! That's awesome.

What, you thought I'd quit?

hey dude. write about me being a real mean newcomer in some town and then later in the story i really help out people. sounds like a great story to me man. plz. i will give ya 100 times the amount i pay you right now. sound awesame right?

100 * 0 = 0

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just right it okay. we dont need to know how smart you are. and dont you dare tell the result of the 100 * to any of my other friends whom i have promised it