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Moabarmorgamer
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Moabarmorgamer
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Alright, well here's how the adjective contest will work:
-I will give you a boring, dull sentence, with awful adjectives
-You will attempt to enhance the sentence
-I will judge the best enhanced sentence, and award the winner a cookie of their choice
Got all that? Great.
Now, here are the rules:
-The enhanced sentence must follow the original sentence. For example, if the original sentence was "The sky was blue", you cannot say "The house was white-washed, but the paint was peeling, and termites bit at the rotting cedar steps", because the house description has nothing to do with the sky
-Nothing inappropriate
-It's OK if different people paint a different picture with their words, but it has to follow the original sentence.
Here's your starter:
The roof is blue.
Deadline is tomorrow. Good luck folks!

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TSL3_needed
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TSL3_needed
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Well >>.>>

the_manta
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the_manta
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Er...whatever gave you the idea of the Beijing Olympics?


*Points at words "Olympiad Beijing" and the Olympic rings directly underneath*

And I'll join it later. I'm too SLEEPY as of now.

*Walks off, nomming cookie*
yielee
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yielee
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What do you mean would you rather have the OUCH award. YOUR A JERK!!

Moabarmorgamer
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Moabarmorgamer
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What do you mean would you rather have the OUCH award. YOUR A JERK!!

*struggling to contain temper*
The OUCH award isn't an insult. I was merely stating that at least TSL actually placed, and got a medal, as opposed to getting an award, which is basically just a mention.
I AM NOT A JERK!
GAWD!
*muttering profanities*
samdawghomie
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samdawghomie
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Hmmmm...

The enormous, fungi like cloud was fading opaque grey-blue color. It was flying through the sky like a large, snarling turtle trying to climb a tall, porous mountain. When I first saw this monstrosity, I gazed in awe at its beauty, and started to reach for my 18 mega pixel Sony Handy Cam, but after a while, I realized that it was just another, puffy cloud.

I tried

yielee
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yielee
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Ouch has such a negative connotation. Why even bother telling someone "OUCH", after reading their stuff? If you're going to give awards the least you could do is say something positive.

OUCH? You act like you don't understand that simple adjectives were used to reflect the simple graphics of the game. Do you even play Vox Populi? Do you even know why I put the quotation marks around the word "tail"? Take a look and tell me why my description deserves an "OUCH".

http://armorgames.com/play/4460/vox-populi-vox-dei-a-werewolf-thriller

Moabarmorgamer
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No, you...agh, I meant that OUCH was meant to describe my reaction after reading it. The dog's condition sounded excruciatingly painful, and that's why I gave you the OUCH award. I'm sorry if you took it to be offensive.

yielee
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yielee
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Whatever, I'm not playing anymore.

TSL3_needed
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TSL3_needed
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Whatever, I'm not playing anymore.


Would it be appropriate to say temperamental? I think so.
Rysin
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Rysin
543 posts
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I'll give it my best shot and this is my 1000 AP!

Above the yonder, lies a graceful cloud.
It's pelt bursting and colours all aluring.
Gently it drifts to the great beyond.
Never staying to form it's Hearth.

yielee
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yielee
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TSL_3 this didn't even concern you, but since you feel like butting in...there. I just erased you.

SoulHack117
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The cloud is puffy


The cloud in the sky, it floats with ease, not knowing its destination, not knowing it's end. It is a lovely white, fluffy cloud in the sky, it has two, little, wings on it's side, as if it were flying. It was perfectly circular, with it's middle looking empty.
Moabarmorgamer
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TSL_3 this didn't even concern you, but since you feel like butting in...there. I just erased you.

Just so you know, you spelled his name wrong. And I'm not sure what you're talking about. From my point of view, all that happeneda; there was a misunderstanding and you decided to quit the contest. So, if you took offense, I'm sorry, but don't be rude like that, please.
yielee
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yielee
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It wasn't a misunderstanding, you gave the Ouch award, painful for you to read through my stuff, and then you tried covering it up. It didn't work. So I said, whatever, I'm not playing with people who make fun and don't follow the rules. You should enter your own stuff Mr. Periwinkle, and see how bad of a writer you really are.

So then you call me rude??? But there's this other guy who tries to butt in by calling me names. That's rude. He got erased. I erased him, now he can't talk to me. And you're already erased so I don't even now why I'm talking to you.

Moabarmorgamer
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Dude, I didn't insult you! I'm serious, it was about the paragraph where you said you couldn't tell if it was black or blue, doesn't that sound painful, as if they were beaten a lot? I don't make fun of you, you made fun of me. How bad of a writer I am? Try looking at it from a neutral and insensitive perspective, alright? And I'm not breaking any rules by hosting a contest.
I do write my own stuff, actually. A lot. And it won't help if you insult me. I've never insulted you, you just took offense. I'm not trying to cover it up, or else I would just ignore you, but I don't like being accused of something that I didn't do. And...
Who, TSL? He never called you a name. So he's not rude. And, what exactly do you mean by erased?
Actually, that's a pretty good idea =).

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