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sourwhatup2
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What is it?

Terza Rima is a type of poetry consisting of 10 or 11 syllable lines arranged in three-line.

Example:

Ode to the West Wind by Percy Bysshe Shelley

O wild West Wind, thou breath of Autumn's being,
Thou, from whose unseen presence the leaves dead
Are driven, like ghosts from an enchanter fleeing


So here are the rules:

~Terza Rima's must be completely Original which means no Plagiarizing.
~There can only be 1 submission per user
~The same user is not able to win twice in a row
~Even if the same user who won can't win.. doesn't mean they can't enter
~Must be submitted before the actual deadline for the contest
~It has to fit the theme

This will always last 1 week.

The deadline is February 27th and most Contests will start on the weekend.

This weeks Theme is The Desert and I am still in the process of asking for a merit to the winners.

Have fun making Terza Rima's Lol.

By the way.. I'm looking for Judges. ;D
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sourwhatup2
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Wow.. I've never seen a Terza Rima ending with 1 line.. Only a couplet or a 3-lined stanza.. o.0

You can leave it as it is I guess..

Hydraulic
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Well, maybe I''l give it a rewrite anyway...Doesn't make much sense as is.

iamnotironman
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6 entries almost over.At 6:00pm ag time it is over.

Krizaz
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Life, such a strife.
Get out of bed, look at my wife
Leaving my wife, gonna kill myself, with that knife.
Getting anxious, getting life out of my head.
Got the knife.
Life going through my eyes, thinking of my wife.
Knife going through my wife.

Ernie15
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I don't think that's a Terza Rima. It seems to have an AAABAAA rhyme scheme, and a syllable scheme that doesn't really follow any poem type. :P

sourwhatup2
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Seems like the judge.. wasn't here by 6pm

So we'll have to wait til tomorrow.. -sighs-

iamnotironman
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Sorry I am doing the judge next.Pfft had to celebrate easter early.Judging is on the next post.

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Ok here is the judging:

4th place Hydraulic

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Could there be a worse punishment? It seems
Not so, to me. Whoever created this as a gift
Did quite the opposite. For within this dream
Appears a parasite that makes us float adrift.
And we call this parasite our brain as it allows
Us the freedom of thought, to question our makeshift
Surroundings. "I shall end this life now" he avows

It could of won if there was more than one line at the end.

3rd place EnterOrion

Is the beginning the end, or something else?
What is the meaning of life, without death?
Another life begins, starting a pulse

My advice is to make it longer.Then it would of won for sure.

2nd place Sourwhatup2

~ Mentally destroyeD ~
As life passes by, you don't expect things
And at one point it could destroy all
You may raise your head up high like kings
The thing is, life hits you like a recall
All things in the past might be remembered
Then washed away by the force of thrall
By now you should or will be misremembered
Forgotten and never to be rewarded
Lost in the darkness mentally dismembered
When you talk to people you are sordid
Not thinking of the deadly consequences
There is no reason to be awarded
Life can be full of big silly hoaxes
Mentally Destroyed.. ease into the senses

Great Terza Rima just I liked one better for some reason.

1st place ERNIE15!!!!!!!!!

The Dream of Life
When we say "life", do we really mean it?
Is it a reality that we all live?
It has to be, after all, we've seen it.
But what if life is not as we see it?
What if life is a vivid, colorful dream,
And we're all wrong? None can guarantee it.
If life is a ocean of fantasy
Could we live our whole lives without waking up?
Or would we die when we die? We shall see

Great job Ernie I am speechless.That is what just beat sour out.

Ernie go to a mod to get your merit.

HAPPY TERZA RIMMING!!!!!!!

sourwhatup2
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What happened to honorbale mentions? xD

Whatever.

Next Theme: Nature
Deadline: April 10th 6PM AG Time

Judging: April 11th

sourwhatup2
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You missed a lot of poems..

Again with the constructive criticism..

I am finding a new judge at the moment.

Iron you can stop judging try entering into the contest now. Until I find another judge, I will be judging.

iamnotironman
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I thought we wern't doing honorbale mentions.I'll do them now if you want.

iamnotironman
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I dont get what you mean constructive criticsm.You dont do it.Honorbale mention:Adios 124.

sourwhatup2
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I dont get what you mean constructive criticsm.You dont do it.


Check page 9

Honorbale mention:Adios 124.


There's no point now..

I'll do them now if you want.


Your not a judge now.. No offense, your just not gonna be one anymore.
Ernie15
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Yaaaaay!!

That's all I can say.

sourwhatup2
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Yaaaaay!!

That's all I can say.


Lol o.o What do you mean?
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