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sourwhatup2
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What is it?

Terza Rima is a type of poetry consisting of 10 or 11 syllable lines arranged in three-line.

Example:

Ode to the West Wind by Percy Bysshe Shelley

O wild West Wind, thou breath of Autumn's being,
Thou, from whose unseen presence the leaves dead
Are driven, like ghosts from an enchanter fleeing


So here are the rules:

~Terza Rima's must be completely Original which means no Plagiarizing.
~There can only be 1 submission per user
~The same user is not able to win twice in a row
~Even if the same user who won can't win.. doesn't mean they can't enter
~Must be submitted before the actual deadline for the contest
~It has to fit the theme

This will always last 1 week.

The deadline is February 27th and most Contests will start on the weekend.

This weeks Theme is The Desert and I am still in the process of asking for a merit to the winners.

Have fun making Terza Rima's Lol.

By the way.. I'm looking for Judges. ;D
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Kyouzou
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Parsat they were right earlier, go teach a poetry class or something I feel completely outclassed now...

Fear strikes my soul, Hades' cold face brightens
Pictures pass in front of me, life shown to me
Relaxing as death's embrace tightens

iamnotironman
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no i meant will i judge any terzas rizmas again?

sourwhatup2
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Well not this one.. Maybe the next.. I'll think about it.

2 more days left I think for this?? :P

sourwhatup2
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I like it.. My fav type of poems are usually dark.. this is why I picked this theme xD

sourwhatup2
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Judging now.

I'll judge.. Wait a few mins :]

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Okay nevermind.. Just checked it and there were only 3 entries.. So Yeah just gonna let this one hang and go onto the next one.

Fast judging:

1st - Parsat
2nd - EnterOrion
3rd - Kyouzou

If you feel like I need to give you constructive criticism just ask me on my profile.

Next Theme: Life

Deadline: March 5th 6pm AG Time.

I hope someone uses.. uh.. the number 42 int here poem :]

Lol Jk. Have fun making poems!

iamnotironman
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So am I judging this one?Still want to.

EnterOrion
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2nd - EnterOrion


Oh man. I hate second. So close yet so far. D:

Life. I have a different idea than 42. That would just be too cliche. Sure it's the meaning of life, but still. Nah.

All of those pretty animals of the sea
Of the mammals and the birds and the fish
Caught on high def TV for my eyes to sea

It must have taken a very long time
To catch all of those epic shots of creatures
It must have have cost much more than a pretty dime

It's about the TV show. xD
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Wait a minute, I was thinking of something for this here, but I'm seeing inconsistent formats, I thought Terza Rimas were written in A,B,A B,C,B C,D,C and so on, the first and third lines rhyming with the middle line in the last group?

Parsat
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pHacon: Yes, that is true. Different stanzas do not cancel the rhyme scheme, it passes on to the next stanza.

sourwhatup2
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Well I have been informed by Carlie that there is now gonna be a merit for the winner each week. It'll run from Sunday to Saturday so that's enough time for people to get in there poems.

So am I judging this one?Still want to.


If you want then yeah, but make sure to give constructive criticism not just a sentence saying you liked it.

Wait a minute, I was thinking of something for this here, but I'm seeing inconsistent formats, I thought Terza Rimas were written in A,B,A B,C,B C,D,C and so on, the first and third lines rhyming with the middle line in the last group?


A Is supposed to rhyme with A. B is then supposes to rhyme with the next verse with 2 b's.

And so on. I think I know what you're trying to say. Yes it's like that basically. The first and third line rhyme with the middle of the previous verse.

pHacon: Yes, that is true. Different stanzas do not cancel the rhyme scheme, it passes on to the next stanza.


Exactly. xD

The actual deadline.. just to fix this up a bit is now gonna be:

March 4th 6pm Ag time.
iamnotironman
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I can't belive I am a judge for a merit.

Ernie15
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March 4th 6pm Ag time.


April 4th, I hope you mean.

Now that there is a prize, you may be facing a new contestant in this contest... :O
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Now that there is a prize, you may be facing a new contestant in this contest... :O


Haha.. <.<

April 4th


Yes APRIL 4TH.. Sorry for the confusion :]
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The Unknown
Delicately passing from one stage to
another, does it truly end? or is it
eternal? this answer may never be known.

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