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Parsat
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This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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MoonFairy
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Shepherd

Red dawn on the horizon
Blood on my hands
I didn't mean to kill him.
This wasn't my plan.

_____

I hate this piece. Oh well.

Killers walking free
slayguy8
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718 posts
Peasant

Killers walking free
here and there
but not everywhere
in russia, china

please no more
those horror movies i adore
is now reality
for both you and me

as this poem carries on
one breaks in named Ron
he stabs me with a knife
no i end life

my vision black
with only one attack
he would be my killer
Oh, my dream was a thriller

LOL cool

the last crow calling

CommanderDude7
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4,689 posts
Nomad

The last crow calling
The last man dead
The last tree fallen
The last sight seen
The last end

My comrades turned on me.

waluigi
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Shepherd

My comrades turned on me
And now it seems to me
that my time on Earth is done
unless I turn around and run

sleep comes upon me.

slayguy8
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718 posts
Peasant

My comrades turned on me,
like the wind.
are they the traitors?
or am I?

what did or do
or didnt?
I feel alone,
with the wind still changing

but there is one thing
that you cannot see
that they didnt take
my thoughts

its only black but yet white

crazyrussian97
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256 posts
Shepherd

sleep comes upon me
heavier than lead
in dreams I hear and see
the broken and the dead

slayguy8
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718 posts
Peasant

next line? hmmmmmmmm i will do my line that didnt get used cus me got ninja'd

Its only black but yet white
only square yet circle
what is it
gives me mixed emotions

its you but yet me
dry yet wet
its gives me a warm feeling
a entinal happiness

i know what it is
you cant touch it
its inside
love

Love like mad, hate like none

crazyrussian97
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256 posts
Shepherd

Love like mad, hate like none
With a heart as hot as a blazing sun
Like a lover, like a fighter,
Let love's flames burn all the brighter
Heart in hand I stand ablaze
And let love guide me through my days

A path thats tread by those who bleed

waluigi
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Shepherd

A path that's tread by those who bleed
walkers of it planting seeds
that grow up hate and misery
destruction and chaos all abound
In this land where nothing sounds
and through it cuts a road that's known
as the path that's thread by those who bleed.

The smell of whiskey

Zaork
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Nomad

The smell of whiskey
Mixed with the scotch
A hint of gin
And also Hops

A whiff of vodka
The stench of rum
Lilting drambuie
There goes the drum

Merry Christmas Aunty Kerryn

Serif is the sherrif

Parsat
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2,180 posts
Blacksmith

Serif is the sheriff
Of a little font town,
And Arial is the scary ol'
Lady with a bland gown.

Times Roman, he's roamin'
Like a cowboy would.
Swigging Comic Sans, a man's
Drink, bought with all he could.

Helvetica, newcomer to America,
Tries to stake some land,
But Courier, the surlier,
Has already placed his stand.

Lucida, I'll go meet her
In the brothel she run,
With Handwriting and Typewriting,
You can always have fun.

But over all things, beware the Wingdings,
The most ruthless gang in the West.
They'll rob all your kernings
And all of your earnings,
Then vanish away from arrest.

Invisible amid the crowd

Hypermnestra
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Nomad

Invisible among the crowd
Vanish in a sea of faces
I was lost but was never found
Now I don't know where my place is

Look in the mirror, nothing there
Smash the mirror with all your might
Looking for yourself everywhere
Can't be found, hidden from the night

Search, but you still may never find
Where you are at, or who you are
It's hidden deep inside your mind
And you cannot see in that far

Time ticks away upon the clock

MoonFairy
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3,386 posts
Shepherd

Invisible amid the crowd,
As the sound of blood
Hits the ground.

Lays him gently there to die,
Wipes off his blade
While the man cries.

Watching his eyes
Turn a lifeless blue.
He gets up to leave and bids him adieu.

Running to the house that never gets closer

iMogwai
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Peasant

Running to the house that never gets closer
Pointless, some might say
The same can be said about juggling with gophers
But it would still make my day

Yet there's something odd about this situation
How come I make no progress?
This might require some negotiation
I'll ask it to come over in exchange for a pretty dress

Next sentence

Sanity is overrated

crazyrussian97
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256 posts
Shepherd

Sanity is overrated
Stability is but a mask
Average minds will be negated
To keep afloat would be a task

Insanity will shape what's real
If this world is an illusion
Even what you see and feel
Might all be a delusion

So then pull back the curtain
And fling open the door
For nothing is certain
In this world anymore

Where can I find truth?

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