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Parsat
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Blacksmith

This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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slayguy8
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slayguy8
718 posts
Peasant

Where can i find the truth?
On the shelf
In the box
No

Truth not to be found
near the cookie jar
next to the crayons
No

Truth no found
in object form
but in our hearts
and in our minds

Why are you here

crazyrussian97
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crazyrussian97
256 posts
Shepherd

Why are you here?
Has my time already come?
Bah, you cannot instill fear
Inside my heart, for I have none.

Your black garments are worn,
Your visage is naught but a void
Am I to feel afraid, forlorn?
Because I feel rather annoyed.

Leave at once, you'll scare my guests,
For they still have their hearts
Which beat with life in all their chests.
Leave, I've no time for arrogant upstarts.

Not me? Then who? The cat?
Go ahead, he'll still have eight left.
He's unsociable and fat,
So I wouldn't feel too bereft.

Perhaps I'll get a dog.

Reton8
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Reton8
3,173 posts
King

Perhaps I'll eat a dog.
But not a log
Or with a frog in a bog.

Perhaps I'll eat a cat instead.
With a tiny hat on my head
Or maybe while lying down in bed.

Perhaps I should eat the cat with bread.
And eat the cat while on a sled.
After the cat I should be well fed.

Crumbling sandcastles in the sand.

waluigi
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waluigi
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Shepherd

Perhaps I'll get a dog
the protector and guider of me
for I have nothing to see
my eyes are useless for me.

A cymbal crashes

Hypermnestra
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Hypermnestra
26,390 posts
Nomad

Crumbling sandcastles in the sand
Washed away by the waves of the sea
Built by the labor of tiny hands
Only for the sea to wash them clean

Ceaseless labor for hours, unending
To construct the mighty sand castle
But now its doom is soon impending
Drowning the knights, kings, and the vassals

Hello, my friend, how have you been?

kingryan
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kingryan
4,196 posts
Farmer

Hello friend, How have you been?
If the question were that simple I might ask.
But as moons tie your hands to the roof,
The starry night reveals 'tis not a simple task.

Years have passed since we met,
Under vivid caged lights of blue and green.
And now time allows one more meet,
Hello friend, how have you been?

You'd reply with silence that bites the wind,
Or a sternly placed "I'm fine,"
Even if your world was falling down,
"I'm fine, don't worry, I'm fine"

I'd watch you leave; floating away.
Your arm hooked under a strong wing to preen.
Maybe next time when together we are found
You'd ask "Hello friend, how have you been?"

kingryan
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Farmer

Oooops...

In my world, everything is blue

crazyrussian97
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crazyrussian97
256 posts
Shepherd

In my world, everything is blue,
The birds, the people, the trees,
Blue is all around, blue is all one sees,
The exception being you.

You are the red, the stranger,
How come you are not blue?
Are there others like you too?
To me you smell like danger.

Or are you simply different, unique?
Perhaps I was too hasty,
Prejudgment is quite nasty.
Anyway, what it it you seek?

Friendship? Why not, it sounds like fun.
Differences mean nothing now, right?
Lets hang and enjoy the yellow sunlight.
Wait, yellow!? What happened to the sun?

The blue no longer reigns supreme,
All the colors I can see!
'tis strange, don't you agree?
Variety is better it would seem.

I see clouds on the horizon

lostsage159
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lostsage159
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Nomad

[quote] i see the clouds on the horizon

it rises and i see mr. monopoly.
he gives me two dice.
i said "gee thats nice!"
then he sent me to jail.
i never got any mail.
a man came through the door.

iMogwai
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iMogwai
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Peasant

A man came through the door
He made fun of the colour of my floor
So I grabbed his head
And painted it red
And now he laughs no more.

Totally dark, huh? Yeah, I scare myself too sometimes...
Next line:

A dream of chocolate sheep

waluigi
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waluigi
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Shepherd

A dream of chocolate sheep
licorice trees and a soda pop lake
Earth made of cake and bees of honey
My paradise or so it seems
I eat all that I see around me

But suddenly I awake in fright
I my reflection in that dream
and I was obese



This next line is a reference to a Van Halen song.
Your semi-good looking

kingryan
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kingryan
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Farmer

Your semi-good looking,
Or really should that be "you're?"
The whole internet seems confused,
I guess that's why you're unsure.

I could say "your beautiful,"
But I'd have to finish with something you own,
Like your puppy; your[b] icecream; [b]your toilet;
Your kitten; your dino; your bone.

I could try to say you're toilet,
But "you are" not to flush.
So no you're dog or cat or hamster,
Or you're a dodgy toilet brush.

It's simple and it makes sense,
You're is "You are," you see.
Follow it with a compliment,
The recipitant will be filled with glee.

And your describes belonging,
Follow it with some sort of stuff,
End with a noun not an adjective,
No more saying your tough.

The rules are simple and now clear,
My goal is to simply find,
Correct you're and your on the Internet,
Come, and together we'll improve mankind.

This lake once had fish a plenty

kingryan
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kingryan
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Farmer

(In the third stanza, last line, remove the 'a' [you're dodgy toilet brush]. And ignore the failed formatting...)

waluigi
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waluigi
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Shepherd

This lake once had fish aplenty
swimming about as they wished
but then came the humans

The humans fished without abandon
taking every fish they could
and then came the city

The city was built against the lake
waste pilled up by the pound
and the fish died off

So now this lake sits empty
devoid of any life at all
and so it shall stay
forevermore

leafless trees

crazyrussian97
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crazyrussian97
256 posts
Shepherd

leafless trees,
Like lifeless hands reach for the sky.
A stagnant breeze,
Made from the air exhaled by those who die.

The barren ground,
So tortured it can't even bleed.
A wheezing sound
Of dead men who have done the deed.

Devoid of life,
A wasteland of their own creation.
There is no strife,
Yet there is also no elation.

How can this be repared?

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