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Parsat
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Blacksmith

This is a bit of a forum game, but at the same time it has the capacity to result in a bit of poetry, so it goes here. I'm going to supply a line of poetry, and the following poster is to create a poem using the line I gave as their first. Along with their poem, they supply a line for the next person to write poetry on. No restrictions on the type of line or poetry; just keep the line open ended.

Here's the first line:

A mountain pokes out awkward in the mist

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IcyIndia
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Nomad

Lights of every color
are flashing beneath my eyelids
They snap open, and I look about me
in wonder.

There you are, running like there's no tomorrow,
but you're not going anywhere
on that looping strip of plastic.

Those lights are still there,
glowing, transparent, barely there,
And they lead me to
the door
to get out of here.

Out the door, I fly,
Soaring through my thoughts,
as if I were moving.
I take a step forward,
and am transported
back to the room
with you on the treadmill.

Why does it have to be this way?

You're staring at me

1337Player
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Peasant

You're staring at me.
It's quite uncomfortable,
so would you please stop?
I don't like it.

You stop staring at me,
but then another person starts.
I sigh and continue on.
But she keeps on staring.

...

Sam started spinning in the spiral

WesBond
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WesBond
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Nomad

You're staring at me
Because You think i'm different
You think that i'm worthless
You never appreciated individuality
i was foolish to think that You,
You of all people could ever change
But i never changed either

i never moved on when You crushed me
And i never stopped loving You
And i never forgot what You did to me
You were the D of my life
Naw forget that you are
Remember when i bought that guitar
It was to write you this song

You never noticed my subtleties
my ways of showing i loved You
Or at least that's what i thought
But i realized that You did notice
You just chose to ignore me
To ignore that i loved You
But it's time that I start ignoring your stare.

Change to major key and lift the corners of cheeks

IcyIndia
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Nomad

I changed it a bit...Hope you don't mind, 1337.
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She started spinning in the spiral
Getting dizzy
She's sorry, but she's getting tired
of the same revolving world.

And I am weary
of seeing her spin around and around.
I turn away,
and the world dips and waves,
but I keep walking from her.

She doesn't need my help.
She can help herself.

You're running toward me

waluigi
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waluigi
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Shepherd

You're running toward me
my arms wide open
this lover awaiting his bride

and in this moment of joy
nothing can stop
the love we feel inside.


People are Strange

IcyIndia
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IcyIndia
1,344 posts
Nomad

People are strange
the way they
are happy one moment
then angry the next.

Do you ever wonder
why we act this way?
we're so impulsive,
yet so powerless.

Why don't we ever change?

I see you

1337Player
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Peasant

I see you,
you see me.
Why must this world be,
not just you and me.

Because then
I would send,
a card to you.
Saying 'I love you'.

I'm going to fire my laser

IcyIndia
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IcyIndia
1,344 posts
Nomad

I'm going to fire my laser
Into the back of your head
and you're going to turn around.

But I'll just have a vacant stare
at the whiteboard squiggles
And you'll turn back again,
to take notes.

But what you don't know is:
That laser wasn't imaginary
It was real.
And your thoughts are leaking out the back
of your head.
And you aren't thinking about the notes
at all.

Take me away from here

waluigi
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waluigi
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Shepherd

Take me away from here
this place of pain
and misery
where so many
have died

I have suffered along
with them
and now am feeling weak
take me away from here
before I reach defeat

weightless feeling

IcyIndia
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IcyIndia
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Nomad

This weightless feeling
It binds me to the ground
Like steel cables are holding me to
life as I know it.

I'm
floating away
from reality's ever-tightening grip.
Make sure I don't fly away.
Will you make sure I stay?

I say everything

fukwon
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fukwon
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Farmer

I say everything,
you say nothing.

That's how its been for a while,
maybe next time i can make you smile.
amen.

That is how it was

1337Player
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1337Player
1,766 posts
Peasant

That is how it was,
but now everything
has changed.

Me, you,
everyone.
We have changed.

That structure
and that bicycle
have changed.

Ever since the war.

This is the first line

IcyIndia
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IcyIndia
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Nomad

This is the first line
Not the second
not the third
but
have you heard?
Right here is the sixth line
But all I'll think we'll have is eight
'cause it doesn't matter too much
anyway.
Ok, I was lying. There is really
twelve lines.

Don't run away from me.

fukwon
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Farmer

Don't run away from me,
its not very nice.
maybe one day you will see,
and i will share a slice.

there it was

IcyIndia
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IcyIndia
1,344 posts
Nomad

There it was,
just sitting there,
and I just walk by
my greatest wish
just slithered on by
I'm surprised no-one started screaming
But
those scales on my hand
are heaven
I love snakes but
I'm not in Slytherin.

I wish you were

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